AsYa SS: Pirates In Love *completed*

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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OKAY.. First of all... Bohot bohot badhaai for this brilliant beyond brilliant conceptualized story! 🥳

I'm already in love with the Story coz it has Jack Sparrow, Zaroon and AsYa ~ ALL IN ONE! Also has Haider and Ariya.. 😳

Zoya ran from the bar to save herself and hid in a rum barrel. How intelligent! 😆 Now on the ship! 🤣 Poor thing got the shock of her life! 😲

I loved the Zaroon, Zoya and Haider bonding!

She is shocked to know they are PIRATES! 😲 Well, obviously! 😳 Who wouldn't be? 😲 Asad giving her options to either die or be sold? 😲 *ouch* She is in deep mess!

And there's my Hero's Entry! ❤️

Yay! Zoya is gonna be on their ship! I just loved the way Asad said, "Zoya can.. can live!" ⭐️

*Scroll down for more!* 😳
Edited by -Mrinalini- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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This one is to tell you that:

You and I have Locked Hearts and I would do Anything For Your Smile. I would Wish Upon A Wishing Fountain to have you with me my entire life. Trust Is All You Need they say and we have not just that, but more. I love you With All My Life coz I know Cupid Strikes once in a lifetime. The Perks of Friendship that we have is like no other. Pain In Your Eyes is something that I can't tolerate and am ready to fight the world for you coz you give me a Reason To Live. Now since the Pirates in Love is such a beautiful story, I wish they fall in love with the Magic of Cupid's Songs.

xoxo

Mina Di
Edited by -Mrinalini- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Loved the prologue.. I'm hooked.. 😃👏
Totally unique concept.. 😉
Asad is a pirate.. a sirius pirate.. 😳 that's gotta be good..
Zoya.. Always in the wrong time at the wrong place.. 😆
Loved how he asked her if she preferred blindfold or without blindfold.. Gotta admit.. It didn't sound like he planned to send her on the plank.. 🤣
Wanna see how this love story goes.. 😉

pm me too if you do send out pms.. 😳
Edited by Divya.S.R - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow!!
Superb!!
Interesting !!
Asad a pirate!!
Zoya on ship !!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow something completely diferent or Alien??!! but i am in
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I am excited to read this its something different
thanx for the pm and please keep PMing me
and update soon 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Pirates in love !

Jack Sparrow ! I love Johnny Depp! 😳 😳

Asad a Sirius pirate! 😲

God! You writing a story on that line...

Asad, Zaroon, Haider, Arjun and captain Jack Sparrow !

This story's gonna be hell interesting ! 😉

LOL Zoya seriously is a trouble magnet. But here trouble came for good ! 😳

Some parts were totally funny. 😆

And to be honest, it took me a while to get comfy with this style of writing !
But once I did, I loved it !

You are a great writer dee.. Your stories are follow a unique story line.. 😊

Eagerly waiting for the first chapter...

To see how the Sirius pirate's gonna fall for a bar gal ! 😳

Update soon dee ! 🤗

Love

Anee 🤗

Edited by Aneezarp27 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome start
thanx for pm
do pm me for next part
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Posted: 11 years ago
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A new SS by you... Yayyy...
Pirates!!! Arjun!! Zaroon!! Jack Sparrow!!!! I am hooked... ;)
Looking forward to how Asad falls for Zoya!!!
Update soon!!!

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