AsYa SS: Pirates In Love *completed*

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Tia khan

@tiakhan98

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#181

lovely dear thanks for pm

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Vrutanshi

@kreya204

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#182

Fab!!!
Asad allowed her to stay!!
Nw he has to share his cabin with her!
All the moments was grt!!!
Arjun n zoya patch up!!
N haider is sweet!
N jack sparrow!!! Gosh! Can i love this guy more than i do!!
His dialogue of his rum being his first love was soo goood!!
N zoya is an orphan! 😭 bt as gratitude she works n helps the orphanage!
She is a strong person!
She also has some deep thots!
N jack sparrow enters with the dramatic effects!
I guess he saw the place after long so this weird reaction!
Continue soon!
I'll b waiting!!

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RAJ

@RAJLUVRIYA

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#183

Very nice story. With an interesting concept.
Its more interesting for me cause my favourite asya and cpt jack sparrow r here.
Love the update.
Waiting for next parts to c how asya relation progress.
Thanks for pm.
Sorry for late.
❤️ Raj

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nahsjdnusksmsj

@nahsjdnusksmsj

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#184

Amazing update
And it was really funny...😆
Plz update sooonish

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Surish

@Surish

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#185

Those pirates are very hilarious indeed! Excellent job I must say! My eyes are welled up due to excess laughter. Such moments of vivacity, hilarity and alacrity will keep me in shape!
Laughing graphics

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princess101

@princess101

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#186

Loving this story so much already

thanx for the pm

update soon

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zoyaah

@zoyaah

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#187

wooow so good

continue soon

interesting

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Heena

@aarzoo50

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#188

beautiful wala update ...
loved it...
i feel sab bipolar hai 😆
bechari zoya...
one sec they r good n other sec they r scolding n glaring at her ...
continue soon ..

Edited by aarzoo50 - 11 years ago

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Asif

@asifiqbalsh

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#189

Awesome update
Asad supported her & caption announced that she will stay with asad
She cleaned boat & asad praised her
She shared her life with asad & wanted to know abt him
Plz continue soon
Thanks for pm