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Posted: 11 years ago
Ab Mujhe lagta hai Zinia is AsYa's daughter!!!
Jo anwar zeenat ne Asad ko de di!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
lovely update...
uff both luv each other... but misunderstandings *sigh*
zoya thinks asad has a wife n asad thinks zoya luvs omar...
plz sab theek kardo...
m continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: jas91

res

unres

Glad 2 see u back dear🤗 i will pray 4 Mom's speedy recovery😊

very heartwarming updt Swapno👏👏
So Zoya has again fallen 4 Asad
What Asad did 4 Ruba was so touching & Zoya was also moved wid his gesture❤️
at d chaand party Zoya adored her hands wid Heena & Asad's name 😃
D song that Asad sung was totally meaningful perfact here👏
Than Asad came & asked Zoya ki he wants 2 sleep there😒
his lines b4 falling asleep ki why she doesn't loves him, Is he that bad made me cry😭
he slept in her lap & later got up in each others arms
D last scene so d goodbye time came😭
who is this Zinia i so want 2 know i think she's Billi's kid🤢
Updt soon deary😳
stay blessed 🤗


Thank you so much dear...🤗
It is in their destiny...
Asad is like coconut...hard outside and soft inside...😳
the song is meant for them
Aww...don't cry buddy...AsYa are unique...just remember that
will try to update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -ABI-

unres

hope ur mom is fine,if not then she will be
&
wellcome-back with a bang
Update was emotional but yet amazing
I especially love Mehandi&AsYa sleeping scene
Its Wou

and a special thanks for PM,well I've changed my username;so I wasn't sure about PM
So Thank-U&please keep PMing me
TRY TO UPDATE SOON


Hello dear
My mom is not fine still, she is again hospitalized...
Pray for her dear...
Thank you so much that you loved this story
I too love to write that mehendi scene
I am overwhelmed that you liked it this much
It's okay dear...don't worry I will continue to Pm you...😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: keyahira

I MISSED YOU SOOO MUCH
I hope your mom is fine
You will now update regularly okay
😉


Aww...dear! how are you?
I know you missed me...
I read those Pm
my mom is again hospitalized...
pray for her...
and about update I don't know when I can do that
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: p_s05

Reserved!



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Unreserved!


Here's wishing your mom gets well soon, she was in my prayer's today, hope you are taking care of yourself too.


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This was one of the chapters that had the most progression in AsYa's relationship and interaction between them since Zoe stepped on Indian soil again. Really amazing and highly enjoyable from beginning to end.


""Miss Farooqui..." came a rough voice and her breath hitched as she felt her tummy clenched with tingling sensation. She hastily looked at him. His blood shot eyes shook her to the core.

"What happened to you, Mr. Khan?" Zoya ran to his disheveled form, he was shaking. She hugged him tight.

"I want to sleep Miss Farooqui," He whispered. If she did not know him closely in these three months then she would misunderstood him like before. She loosened her embrace and Asad hastily added

"Not with you but here near you." He pleaded. Zoya's eyes filled with tears with the unknown pain. Her voice choked. She wanted to wipe all his miseries but she was helpless here. She was doing this only for him. He approached to the couch but Zoya held his hand. He looked at her with question in his eyes. Zoya nudged him to her bedroom. "You are not going to sleep on the couch. You need proper rest. We need to attend the Eid party where you are the host I think. So sleep for two hours only." Zoya said with authoritative tone. Both remained silent with questions in their mind but none could utter it. She finally let it go. One day with him would not increase the pain which he was bearing now. She and he both would be part of their lovely last memories. Asad gave her an amused smile.

How it sounds so lovely when anyone's love takes care of him?

Asad nodded silently and headed to the bedroom without saying anything. Zoya looked at his retreating figure.

"How he knows where the bedroom is?" Zoya mumbled."Buddhu Zoya! He is the architect! Pagal." She whacked her head and followed him.

Asad had already lain down and Zoya tucked him under the blanket, adjusted the AC temperature and wanted to leave but Asad stopped her.

"Stay with me please" He was on the verge of crying. Zoya silently sat beside him placing her back on the headboard of the bed and he placed his head on her lap like a craving child. She passed her fingers through his hair. Asad smiled and yawned, Zoya too.

"Why don't you love me? Am I that bad?" Asad blurted from out of nothing.

"Please sleep Mr. Khan!" Zoya said.

"I know why you don't love me" He trailed off.

I only love you, Mr. Khan. But you will never know."


I personally felt this was the best scene to date, outstandingly breathtaking. I cannot reiterate how much I loved the intensity of this scene. As a reader and hopeless emotional romantic I just want to say "Thank You" for conceptualizing this scene. You really did an amazing job with this. 👏 👏 👏



Best Wishes and Love!

❤️


Prashni dear...🤗
thank you so much for your valuable comment...
I specially thought this type of intense scenes from AsYa in Qubool hain
both Karan and Surbhi have the potential to that
but afsose Gul Khan never utilizes their intensity and their onscreen relationship.
I still feel bad for AsYa...
Your comment made me cry...
glad someone likes this part and thinks alike mine 😳
love ya and keep praying for my mom
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: .ArshiHamesha.

Lovely update👏

Love the part where they are in their peaceful mode...He is in her Lap and she is in his thoughts .Finally giving in but this misunderstanding is killing them as well as their love.

Hope ur mom is doing fine.will be in my prayers dear.


Thank you so much dear...🤗
and I am sorry that I could not read or comment any of update of yours and you know why ?
I am very much glad you loved this update
They will survive...AsYa was always like this...
they will die but will do anything for each other's happiness
Mom is again hospitalized...
and I am now begin to hopeless..
please pray for her!


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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ammusjyoti

it was good...😊
really eager to know about Zinia...
and clear all misuderstandings between them...
thanx 4 pm...


Thank you so much..
glad you liked it
Zinia will come out soon

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: rajsmi

My thoughts with you and your mom...Hope she gets well soon!! Please take care!

About the story- nice update!! Poor Asad...he is hurting so much but so is Zoya!!


Thank you so much 😳
keep praying for my mom...she needs it badly
glad you liked the update
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Shubh007

Awesome + Intresting Update...👏

Just Love It...😊

Every Scene From Starting To Ending Is Amazing...👍🏼

Update Next Part Soon...😃


Thank you so much Gaurav
Glad you loved it
Will try to update soon

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