AsYa TS- Rain Rain Go Away!-Part 2-Pg 37- 24/6/14

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Prazeena Bhattarai

@Aneezarp27

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Posted: 11 years ago

#281

Beautiful update
lov each and every part!
When i started reading this chap...i was wondering how wud they fall for each other in a single chap..
Than ur note cleared it...
An attraction stage...
Bur ankie we wud love to read the journey to their love though!
Can't u tun it into an SS...plz???

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Azraa

@Azraa01

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#282

I didn't think you'd manage to make them fall in love in 1 chapter, but then I read your note and understood, that some things are not mean to be rushed.

Loved the update and how Zeeshan got them to interact, even though it was with paper boats...

Don't you want to show the journey to their love??

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nilusoni

@nilusoni

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Posted: 11 years ago

#283

lovely update

thanx for pm

do pm me for next part

continue soon

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Nim

@Rarepearl

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Posted: 11 years ago

#284

Hey,

It was beautiful. I now understood you point. This one was directed towards attraction only not the whole steps to final stage of love.

It was natural to do what the two did. They wanted to spend time with each other yet maintain their distance too till they were very sure of their choice & rain did give them a medium o be together.

Now can you write a TS on the second stage of love? Would love to read it.

Love..

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jazsidhu

@jazsidhu

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#285

wonderfull n amazing...

luv it...

beautifully written...

luv the way hw u potray asad n zoya character...

they wanted to spend time with each other but also maintain their distance with each...

asad enjoyed planning with the paper boat with zoya in the rain...

eagerly waiting for the next part...

thx fr the pm n do continue soon n do pm me...

Edited by jazsidhu - 11 years ago

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aseela sha

@aseelashah

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#286

Its so cute dear

I loved it

The way both interacted with each other is so adorable

Pls keep write more

Shall i get one more update of this Ts

Pls update soon

Thanks for pm

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Muskaan

@sweet4shehzadi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#287

Wow beautiful update dear
Lovely
Continue soon
Can't wait to read more
Thanks for pm

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A.S.K

@ToughStuff

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#288

Awesome part!!
Cute!!!
Loved it!!!
Their talks were adorable!!
Asad got his doubt cleared!!!
Zoya expected it!!
Lovely part!!!

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Shama_zz

@Shama_zz

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#289

Lvd d stry cmpletely
asya r awsm
bt dnt end like dis pls pls pls pls

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Asif

@asifiqbalsh

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#290

Lovely update
Attraction is the first step & both attracted towards each other already
So continue this TS to another step
Thanks for pm

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