AsYa TS- Rain Rain Go Away!-Part 2-Pg 37- 24/6/14

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Anitha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#271

Happy happy birthday wishes to u my sunny bro😳

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SH7_Sunny

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Posted: 11 years ago

#272

The loot ressy messy

Edited by --SH7_Sunny-- - 11 years ago

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Amulya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#273

awesome update... totally loved it
ASYA POV is beautifully penned
asad offered her lift 😉
the way he confirmed abt that kid Is soo cute
n ya Zoya faroqui can do anything
paper boats. ..I sooo love them
asad creating ripples n making their boats float together part is lovely
😛 can I get part 3 ...pleeejjj
this story reminded me of my most favorite rhyme n paper boats 😊 childhood days 😛 I vl prepare paper boat now 😛

Edited by Amulya9 - 11 years ago

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SH7_Sunny

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Posted: 11 years ago

#274

Yaar aaj mein busy hu kal bhi toh update shayad nahi read kar pau but will comment for both the chapters after I get free in 2 days.

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SH7_Sunny

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Posted: 11 years ago

#275

Tankoo to all for the wishes. 😳

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farz_parachute

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Posted: 11 years ago

#276

Oh this is my most favourite part of all love stories! The attraction phase!

And this is a story on that phase!

Make it as long as possible! And as beautiful as you've made it thus far!

Wow!

Incredible part 2!!

Love the little interaction!

Awesome work!

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garimaksgian

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Posted: 11 years ago

#277

Its awesm. Plzz convrt it into ss or ff. The concpt is amazing.

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jas91

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Posted: 11 years ago

#278

awesome updt😃

really loved it😉

can't u change it into FS or SS😳

i enjoyed reading this story😊

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Lasya Adiraj

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Posted: 11 years ago

#279

it was awesome blossom

pls do cotinue it!!!!11

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Divya.S.R

@Divya.S.R

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#280

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Well Zoya has been doing her part of stalking too.. 🤣

she bribed the kids to find out when he visits?? 🤣🤣

oh no.. you definitely are smitten.. 😳.. Well she does have an idea of what Asad might be thinking seeing her nephew with her.. 🤣

Is he thinking what I assume he is? OH! Freak! I Hope Not!

Well this Asad doesn't seem to be judgmental... 👏 which is really good..

Well it's nice that they started talking..

Rain seems to love them... 😆

Awww.. Zeeshan is hungry and tired.. Poor baby... Way to go Asad.. Take initiative and drop her home..

Hahaha.. he asked her if the kid was her's ... 🤣🤣 Atleast they had a good laugh..

nice.. she offered for him to stay back till the rain stops.. 😳 and the ever so Gentleman that he is insists he stay in the front porch... 🤗

Aww loved the boat scen where he sails his boat, making ripples to direct it and his boat steadying her boat and both sailing together...

my fav. lines

I created some more ripples, and we saw them moving together again, hand in hand. The little drizzles teased them, yet they made their way together, till the time they reached their harbour.

I looked at the sky. The grey mass had receded, making its way for the Sunlight that kissed our faces and sent a feeling of warmth that both of us came aware of, together.👏😳😃

beautifully said...

Edited by Divya.S.R - 11 years ago