AsYa TS- Rain Rain Go Away!-Part 2-Pg 37- 24/6/14

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ak020203

@ak020203

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Posted: 11 years ago

#291

Loved the update..

Asad and Zoya pov are written so well..

Every girl will want to meet someone like Asad..

Thanks for the update

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SovaSana

@SovaSana

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Posted: 11 years ago

#292

great update

well kind of unexpected but nevertheless it was very good

the last part was so cute

thanks for an awesome ts

thanks for the pm😊

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Prashni Singh

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Posted: 11 years ago

#293

"I looked at the sky. The grey mass had receded, making its way for the Sunlight that kissed our faces and sent a feeling of warmth that both of us came aware of, together."

*sigh*

Beautiful end. ⭐️

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DevikaRavish

@DevikaRavish

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Posted: 11 years ago

#294

Ankitha.. Wonderful update.. Good thoughts about attraction and love.. Very true.. The initial days of attraction... crush etc.. love blooms later.. over a period of time..

The way you are juggling scenes between his POV and hers.. is great...He is indeed a gentleman respecting the distance.. and sitting back on the steps... though he was pulled towards her and wanted to spend more time with her.. 😊

Good job Ankitha..

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Ayesha.N

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Posted: 11 years ago

#295

wow, awesome update 😊

plz con't soon.

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Suganti Kularaju

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Posted: 11 years ago

#296

cute story

love it very much

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-Astrid-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#297

Beautiful...loved the end...truly said by you-a new beginning😳...write more😳

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princess101

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Posted: 11 years ago

#298

that was amazing sooo cute 😃

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aashiqua

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Posted: 11 years ago

#299

Cute little story...and i agree with your idea...i have been to similar situation and that were our thoughts when we met...i wanted to be sure dat he is the right person i mean a nice fellow...and he took his own time to make things right

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961111

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Posted: 11 years ago

#300

Originally posted by: --SH7_Sunny--
Yaar aaj mein busy hu kal bhi toh update shayad nahi read kar pau but will comment for both the chapters after I get free in 2 days.

hain?? 😲

tu sachme unres karega?? 😲😆

okay..take your time!! 😛

and Happy Birthday once again! 😃