SS Once Upon a Time Thread II CH9/10 Updated!!! Pg 122/127 (11th July)

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Posted: 11 years ago

#31

Beautiful update aashna

Love they way the story is shaping up

Lilac panty scene was hilarious 😆

Zoya in asad's tee n boxers 😆 cute

When will asad realise that he and zoya were classmates ????????

The rain scene was beautiful 😊

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DevikaRavish

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Posted: 11 years ago

#32

Aashna.. I would like to read the next update of this first though I am equally eager to read the next update of EB as well.. 😊

Kya karein... ?? am being very greedy.. hope you find loads of free time today to pen down the next update of this .. 😉

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961111

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Posted: 11 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: DevikaRavish
Aashna.. I would like to read the next update of this first though I am equally eager to read the next update of EB as well.. 😊
Kya karein... ?? am being very greedy.. hope you find loads of free time today to pen down the next update of this .. 😉

i have never been so greedy even for any food ever 😆

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Azraa

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Posted: 11 years ago

#34

I love how you write in each POV style.. It makes the FF more interesting to read..
Him guessing the color of her lingerie was just too cute..
Loved the rain scene.. Seemed to be the beginning of their romance!

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Anitha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#35

This was beautiful aashna

I have no words to describe it😳
Asya were magical they stole my heart once again by ur fabulous writing skill.
I must say that u r a gifted writer in this forum😃
That lingerie scene was 😆
Aww my asad was already smitten by zoya.
Loved whole asya scene.
I imagined her in his tee shirt n pajama how beautiful they were.
Eva n titan were aww😃
Whole rain scene was lovely.
shirtless asad

Loved that lyrics which u were written in this part❤️
Im so excited to read next part.
Plz try to update soon.
Im already waiting

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-StarsLinedUp-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: DevikaRavish
Aashna.. I would like to read the next update of this first though I am equally eager to read the next update of EB as well.. 😊

Kya karein... ?? am being very greedy.. hope you find loads of free time today to pen down the next update of this .. 😉

I'll c wat I can do..a lil...DL...but will see...maybe this one maybe not...should I be greedy as well and put conditions??? these many likes = update??? so far I only got 50

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DevikaRavish

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Posted: 11 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: BeYourself

i have never been so greedy even for any food ever 😆

Ankitha.. If you are comparing for food.. I eat lot of sweets and chocolates.. and I feel as though they are just right in front of me but am not able to eat... so I request Aashna ki muje aur intezaar ka pareshani na de.. and to update soon.. 😊

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961111

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Posted: 11 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: -StarsLinedUp-
I'll c wat I can do..a lil...DL...but will see...maybe this one maybe not...should I be greedy as well and put conditions??? these many likes = update??? so far I only got 50

this forum has many slow readers yaar..

i agree to it..

from a writer's POV, you should wait

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DevikaRavish

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Posted: 11 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: -StarsLinedUp-
I'll c wat I can do..a lil...DL...but will see...maybe this one maybe not...should I be greedy as well and put conditions??? these many likes = update??? so far I only got 50

awww.. nahin re.. you will also get it.. don't worry..Weekend right.. people will read it by tomorrow.. 😊