SS Once Upon a Time Thread II CH9/10 Updated!!! Pg 122/127 (11th July) - Page 3

Originally posted by: DevikaRavish

Hey Aashna.. Congratulations for the new thread.. 😊

You are indeed a reader's one among the favourite authors... 😊

I remember you mentioning earlier that you closely relate to Zoya in this story.. and I am so very excited reading it..

The way the chapter started...he teasing her and telling it was obvious and she though embarrased being adamant to know what he meant was so amusing.. I had a smile on my face reading this while travelling to office .. and the other colleagues of mine thought I was crazy having a smile on my face and reading it I guess.. 😉

One point which I felt not sinking in.. was when she thought about whom he was shooting the commercial for.. and she did not know how popular he was.. As far as I read and understood she has been following him since his high school days.. so how come she has missed out on this piece of his popularity ??

I love dogs.. and the scene at his house was just awsome.. and he comparing her to his girlfriends and how quickly her thoughts hoped if she had a chance was just brilliant..

she is in his clothes.. oh my.. what a turn of events.. you seem to love being in your man's clothes I guess... 😉 Even in EB, we got to see Zoya in Asad's clothes.. but it is cool.. I wear my hubby's T-shirt when he is out of station and I miss him.. so I loved that scene...

About his gf from high school and the way she blurted out.. was very natural scene... great job

Finally rain...I love it... The lyrics is so lovely... and later their eye lock and she reaching him.. her hesitance.. and he pulling her close.. and the way he felt he was happy whole heartedly and feeling light was awsome.. I just closed my eyes to visualize that scene and enjoy...

Read it 3 times now since morning... I just loved the update Aashna.. love you for the wonderful update and you tell this is not upto your expectations.. oh dear.. then what would it turn out to be when it reaches your satisfaction...

Thank you so very much Aashna.. and plzzz update soon... I am waiting for the scene when Asad remembers her as his high school mate.. 😊

Originally posted by: -StarsLinedUp-

I'll be honest with u...It started with a girl that would be me...esp wen it comes to the whole..soulamtes..connection..speaking without words thing...and also the crush part...My first crush was a guy...I never talked to ever...All I knew about him..was his name..that's it...but I always imagined him someplace..and he was there...that was the power of my belief...I even saw him in my own city..(he lived in my grandparents town..) and I drove back..to make sure it was him..he followed me...and I drove off...I could have stopped..but I knew he wasnt the one..so there was no use..

So ya..the article..is me...the dreaming is me...the crushing is me...but the coy...shy...and embarassed..is so not me...I aint shy...I get what I want..😆...it surprised my husband as well...I resisted kissing him for the longest time..and when I made up my mind...it was something else (TMI I knw😛😆)

cool.. I like the way you have written about the crush.. etc.. Yep I totally understand.. .I was the kind of person who was very shy.. scared to speak to guys in school.. but later spoke to guys in colleges.. but you know what ?? mine was an arranged marriage.. but we met couple of times before marriage.. and our first kiss before marriage.. and he was surprised and shocked... and nobody knows it till now except both of us.. 😉

So Zoya here is a little coy to be me...I would so not be this in front of my crush ..I would be like..FYI I used to like u back in the day..😆

As for ur doubt...she was not following her after highschool...read the first chapter...she only remembers about him wen she narrates her story...she again..didnt know where he was, what he was and how big he was...again...its in one of the updates..she didnt google him..cos it was too overwhelming..once she found out who he was...so ya...she has a lot to learn about him😉

oh yes.. now I remember.. sorry.. cool .. it will be interesting for her to know more about him..

Other than that...WOW u read it 3 times...was it that good??? I wasnt sure...No doubt I enjoyed my quiet moments..where they did wat they did without talking..the easy connect...

Yes dear.. I read 3 times now since morning.. good.. I loved it..

As for wearing my hubby's clothes...I like to smell him...it gives me peace...so...clothing...him...both work😉

Once for my b'day gift he gave me his fav tee that he used to wear all the time...the worn out soft..cool cotton tee...and I used to give it back to him..a few days before he was to leave for someplace..so that the scent was renewed...we werent married at that point...Now I dont allow him to leave me alone😆

sooo sweet.. God bless. and wish both of you loads and loads of happiness together..

Originally posted by: DevikaRavish

So I didnt kiss him back for a month.....