Everything Burns Thread V Ch 21 & Epilogue Updated PG 140

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961111

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Posted: 11 years ago

#611

Originally posted by: aniha20

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Aniha 🤗

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aniha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#612

Ankie 🤗
these days i dnt have even time to breath

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961111

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: aniha20
Ankie 🤗
these days i dnt have even time to breath

same here yaar...

i hardly come online these days...

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961111

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Posted: 11 years ago

#614

Bye people... see you all soon...hopefully tomorrow... 😉😳

good night...😳

and good day to Aashna and Divya...😳

Sunny... tujhe to main bhai hi bulaungi...no matter what...😆😆

Edited by BeYourself - 11 years ago

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aniha

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: BeYourself

same here yaar...

i hardly come online these days...

haa..then high five
am going now,miss u all

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961111

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: aniha20

haa..then high five
am going now,miss u all

miss you too... and
Anusha too...

see ya soon...

m leaving too... 😛

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sg2121

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Posted: 11 years ago

#617

I have been a silent reader of your stories however I want you to know that I love your stories. I read "Saving Grace" and it blew me away. I have read many stories on Asad and Zoya but there have been few which have touched my heart. The beauty of Saving Grace lied in its complexity as it added so much depth to the story. I loved how Asad was portrayed as the protector and I really liked how you showed Zoya grew to trust and believe in him, thus finally being able to let go of her fears. They were each other's "saving grace" and I also really liked Ayaan and Humaira's story. They both were cute feisty and yet broken souls who needed love.

And I have been loving Everything Burns. I love Asad-Zoya's bickering and Ayaan's nagging. What drew me to this story was the concept of finding love in unfortunate circumstances. Zoya is married and Asad, with the help of Ayaan, is set out to obtain justice for his sister. They both don't have time for love and ideally, they should not have any relation as Zoya is married. I like the way you are showing their relationship progress however what I really appreciate is the fact that you have kept their relationship pure. Please keep it that way- I always get upset when love is depicted as physical attraction. Love is a divine feeling.

I love the suspense. Each chapter keeps me on my edges and I get anxious to know what will happen next. Please take rest and we are all eagerly awaiting for your update! :)

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DevikaRavish

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Posted: 11 years ago

#618

Waiting for update Aashna.. Will not have net connection for couple of days.. so If you are updating some time soon.. will respond late.. so kindly bear with me.. 😊