Everything Burns Thread V Ch 21 & Epilogue Updated PG 140

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aseela sha

@aseelashah

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#31

Aashna meri yaar hats off to u first👏

Its a brilliant update

From the beginning to the end u kept the suspense👏

I knew like others that Zoya is safe with Asad

I got it almost clear when i read Asad's reaction

I like the way how Asad pacified Gafoor

He needed that.Now he had a faith that may be his daughter is alive cause they dont get her body

And what i say about this Rehaan the great actor😆

I am not repeating the same line that he is the one cause i am sure about it.Or am i wrong?😲😆😆

Ayaan _ humi scene was out standing

Zoya ki death ne AYRA ko mia di😃

You very well write the interaction between AYRA

And finally the doubt clearance

What an amazing way to describe it👏

Asad is in shower and all the images came to his mind one by one and at last he ran to the guest

room and there she is.

Wow just mind blowing yaar.A big salute to u👍🏼

I WANT TO SAY ONE INPORTANT THING.YOU MUST WRITE MORE THRILLING & DETECTIVE

STORIES LIKE THIS WITH ROMANTIG TOUCH.YOU WILL DEFENITELY SPARK IN THIS FIELD.

YOU HAD A GREAT FUTURE IN THRILLER ROMANTIC STORIES.MARK MY WORDS.

I HAVE A REQUEST PLS WRITE MORE STORIES LIKE THIS IN UR BLOG AFTER U QUIT FROM IF

EVEN THO I AM NOT HAPPY WITH U QUITTING IF.GIVE THE CHARACTERS WHAT EVER NAME YOU WANT I WILL IMAGINE THEM AS KABHI😆😆.I LOVE TO READ UR THRILLER SERIES😆😆

WILL U PLS ACCEPT MY REQUEST😳

AND ONE MORE THING DARLING PLS DISCLOSE THE SUSPENSE & I WANT MORE ROMANTIC

ASYA SCENES😳.I WOULD LIKE TO READ HOW ASAD TOOK CARE OF ZOYA😃

PLS PLS UPDATE SOON

THANKS FOR PM

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laks_vish

@laks_vish

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Posted: 11 years ago

#32

Brilliant writing Aashna!👏...yay Asad saved Zoya!! but who is this Abdul???is he Rehaan??? pls tell us

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rosamale

@rosamale

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#33

Wow👏👏👏 So Zoya is not dead. Asad saved her😃

But who is really Abdul? I mean is he someone we know😉

I always wanted Rehaan to be a negative character and i secretly hoped for it😛

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kalyani

@kals82

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#34

nice update,...

zoya is in asad care...

i want all asya update... next...

awesome update

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ankitabaran

@ankitabaran

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Posted: 11 years ago

#35

OMG...zoya is safe with Mr.khan and Mr.khan is hidden her from everyone...their will be new turn in both of life maybe...i m waiting to see them together...when will you do this ...cannot wait to read more...continue soon and thanks for pm

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EuphoricDamsel

@EuphoricDamsel

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#36

mere bday se just pehle update ? 😲

ahaan i like it ! 😉😎

res ! 😆

unress ! 😉

So firstly i was waiting for this !

😎

BeYourself-Ankita

shreya11mehra-Shreya

Maha2012-Maha

ASYA4eveAAA-Ritzy

Divya.S.R-Divya...

I know I know I have forgotten a lot...and I will try to add more...but so far these are my most recent and more diligent spammers...

Haiii kaan taras gye the mere ye sunne ko !!!

finally i am also in the list !!

yipieee !!! yipiieee !! YO !

PS...I plan to end this story by 30^th chapter..or earlier..so lets see!!!😉

30th chapter ??? 😲😲 really that much story is still left ??😲😲

now we have a long time before we come to know the real culprit !!!

Arghhh !! aashna di !!! you are a devil ! 😈

seriously !!! 😡😭

INDEX!!!

THREAD I

THREAD II

THREAD III

THREAD IV

Ch17-Below

Just see n you were saying you will not cont. this on thread one itself my god don't know kya hota agar ye awesome story band ho jaati tho allah !!! ...

"O loss of sight,of thee I most complain;Blind among enemies,O worse than chains,dungeon,or beggary,or decrepit age!"-John Milton

Where do you get these from !? 👏👏

the're just awesome ! 😃😃

PS : read the next one !

unressing it too ! 😉

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EuphoricDamsel

@EuphoricDamsel

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#37

ress😉

unres😃

Zoya is dead!!

How did that happen??

Is that for Real?

That's sucha bad news.

I feel for her family.

Oh that was the reason why the police were here.

How did it happen??

Maybe medications??

Health issues??

Suicide??

Or could it be murder???

What will happen to the company now??

Oh and look at her husband her her father.

This is such a sad sad news...

For what are you A$$h***s showing concern n pity for ?

cos you must have hated her when she was your boss as she was strict and short tempered and now when she's dead you people are just pitying over her . I m sure if she would have been dieing in front of them they wouldn't hv even bothered to look at her once as it would have caused them problems too !

I HATE PRETENDENCE and people who pretend they are always there for us ! 😵

MOVING AAGE ! 😆

HhhOw did it happen???Ayaan asking finally forming a sensible question..

The police say it was a mugging gone wrong...Zoya was running by the Brooklyn bridge...Humeira soobed.

Yes n only n only RIHAAN knew about it accept gaffoor n ya he wouldn't do anything to his own blood would he ?

My bet is still only on RIHAAN whatsoever you do ! 😎

and ya i put my money on him !

MOVING AAGE :!

Ayaan I don't know what to do. IIi I cant believe this happened...and that my best friend is gone forever...Tell me its not true...Please...tell me Ayaan..she is not dead...and that you'll help me find her...She cant leave me like this..no no no...She cant..she pppromised she would pick me up at the airport and we would have a great time...I ii haven't seen her in over 6months Ayaan...and I want to see her...I want to see my best friend..I want Zoya...Ayaan please...help me find my friend..please please please....Humeira sunk down to the ground pulling onto Ayaan's hand as she cried and begged him..

That would be my condition if my best best friend's news of death was coming to me by a police officer !

Humeira please don't break. Please I cant see you like this.It breaks my heart to see the girl I love be so broken and so fragile. My Humeira was strong, she could do anything, face anything. She has seen so much in life and chosen to stand up.I know she's in there somewhere. I know she is there.Please let her come back.Please don't give up. Please...for me. I love you too much and it hurts Humeira to see you break apart...Please baby please, don't cry.

Such a confession was unexpected ! truely ! 😳

love you I love you I love you she repeated, letting it go and finally confessing her innermost feelings..I cant believe you are here,I dotn know what I would have doen if you weren't...I know how I have spent the past few years without you..I was so stupid, so so so stupid to have walked out...After you there was no one else.You were my only one and I should have said yes..But I was stupid.I was arrogant and I was scared...so I ran.That was the biggest mistake of my life.It killed my heart when I walked out.Oh ayaan please forgive me and give me a chance, give us a chance please. She broke the hug and looked into his eyes, her eyes clouded by tears, her petite body shaking from all the emotion that was coursing through her body.

When will i see my asya confessing sigh !!! 🤢

MORE COMING ! 😆😳🤣

Edited by ASYA4eveAAA - 11 years ago