Everything Burns Thread V Ch 21 & Epilogue Updated PG 140

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Surish

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Posted: 11 years ago

#21

Eagerly anticipating what would happen as the lights came on. At least Zoya, the damsel who was in distress was rescued by her knight and shining amour!

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ak020203

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Posted: 11 years ago

#22

That was wow...I could see the scenes playing in my mind while reading.. Beautiful,. Thanks for the

Update..

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Young And Horny!

@Perfectionist2

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Posted: 11 years ago

#23

WoooHOOO!

I knew IT! I KNEW IT!!!!!

See babe I decipher you as easily as you decode me and my stories.

😆 Ok I might sound like a sadist but I am loving this.

LET THE LOVE STORY BEGIN❤️

And...And...And...

Yes guilty cos I never gave her my time. I always thought let me establish the business, take this company to where she always wanted it to be, and then we'd have enough time for each other. Who knew this was all that I would have with her. I i...I dotn think so I can ever forgive myself for chosing work over her, for not spending enough time with her, for not telling her that I loved her so much...And now I will never get the chance...You know what...He tunred towards Asad, his eyes brimming with tears and continued..

I even had a surpise planed for her.She always wanted to go for a honeymoon, and stupid me never took her for one. But that's not the surprise. The surprise is the 2 week long Carrabien vacation I had planned for her next month. I had planned everything, the best hotels, her favorite things to do, dinner under the moonlight, trips excursions, romantic getaways..Everything. I was going to surprise her today..And now...He laughed...mocking his emotions, his tears that were threatning to let go..

I have a feeling this will come to bite Mr.Rihan's ass one fine day...

Ok now this is interesting and I am going to read and hawk you like a mercenary from now on...

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JASLEEN

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Posted: 11 years ago

#24

A big big big big big congrats for the new thread...

Wowww... 17 chapters n five threads...

CONGRATULATIONS DEAR...

Now the update... Yess it was truly awesome...

But the next part will surely reveil all secrets...

Continue soon...

~JAZ~

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DevikaRavish

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Posted: 11 years ago

#25

Hey Aashna.. a wonderful update again 😊

I was shocked to read how Asad reacted to her death news...but towards the end what a relief.. so he had to save her and he is still scared about the scene..and wants to be literally with her.. Now that the office is shutdown for 2 days, it will be good for both of them...

I feel it is Rihaan.. looking at how hesitant he was to leave office .. and all the honeymoon plans etc.. is a way for him to prove that he loved his wife.. but in the last chapter the comment on her that each time she passed his cabin, he was aroused etc.. take me back to thinking again Rihaan or Shahid.. who the hell is Abdul ??

So eager to read more.. 😊

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potternerd

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Posted: 11 years ago

#26

Wow aashna you're back !!!!!

Superb update

Zoya is alive !!!!!!!

Knew that asad wouldn't let anything happen to her !!!!!!

Ayaan humeira are back together yay

Will miss you and your stories in the forum

But no problem will stay connected through your blog

Wish you good luck

Much love :)

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Iqra81

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Posted: 11 years ago

#27

WoW that was just awesome can't express how I feel it was just awesome I had a feeling that asad saved zoya but the way u wrote it got me thinking anyways great job '
Update next part soon I will be waiting