#2 AsYa FF: Drawn To Each Other- Epilogue- Page 89- 14th Apr - Page 7

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Amazing update 😃
Continue soon 😊
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awsom updt
loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Crazy4AsYa-


wonderful wonderful chapter!!! Thank u😊

asya's pain was depicted very well!!! Both r suffering😭

asad is right...but he has to tackle her softly not with anger... He vl be soft after some time. He is behaving wid her like dis cuz she attempted suicide twice n she is not anymore d old Zoya. He wants her to come back to her old self n realize how stupid she was to attempt suicide n writing all those things in d suicide note. Asad is not slapping or manhandling her. He is just disappointed n angry wid her cuz she did not thought abt d people who loves her a lot before attempting suicide.

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Edited by angel_juhi04 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow, dats very nice😃
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Thank u😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: aarzoo50


awesome update.. Thank u😊

zoya attempted suicide nt once bt twice... n nw asad is angry vd her... Anyone vl be angry if someone does like more than once😲

hoping his rude behaviour vl put some sense into her He is behaving rude cuz he thinks she did not trusted his n his family's love for her😔

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ihopelove


Awesome part.👍🏼 Thank u😊

I hope asad find haidar for zoya. Asad vl soon find Haider😃

Loved it. Thank u😊

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Ohh so sad the asya scenes
But nice
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Posted: 11 years ago
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gr8 part zoya take wrong step
asad is too good but got really angry very justified
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: ican


Finally read the whole of the story


Well loved the transformation of regressive asad to open minded one
Zoya has all the right to be angry on him
Tolerance is good and acceptable only up to a limit
Well nice Zoya taught principal a good lesson
Zoya has a troubled pass that is why she was a bit violent and rude
Thank God people are supporting your ff
Because when asad slapped Zoya in the serial AND WE KNOW ZOYA KI KOI MISTAKE NAHI THI STILL SOME PEOPLE FELT IT'S OKAY TO SLAP
WELL GOOD ASAD GOT HIS DRESS, TAMEEZ AND TEHZEEB IDEA CLEAR

A SUGGESTION IF DON'T MIND
Use tum instead of tu
It's good and practical too

Respectful too


Glad dat u liked d story. I really hate d men who slap women. Common, if in many stories Asad can be shown as jerk n ruthless due to past then y can't Zoya be d same? But Zoya is not evil n she only attacks someone wen she is angered. I hated dat prinicpal in d show cuz he sent Zoya to jail just for breaking his window dat aslo accidentally n he did not cared abt Zoya saving Najma. Wat if it was his daughters in place of Najma? Here, I was never objected but in my other 2 FFs, I was objected some of d times just cuz I showed Zoya badly insulting Asad n not forgiving Asad soon. I wanted to show her as a strong woman not someone who vl forgive just after a small sorry 4m him. As for 'tu', its a very friendly term not as disrespectful. In real life, very few people use 'tum' or 'aap'. Asad n Zoya vl talk wid 'tum' n 'aap' only after marriage. Now also, they talk wid 'aap' most of d times n they talk wid 'tu' cuz they r childhood friends. In some of d stories, I hv seen d writers showing them talking wid 'tu' or 'tum' after marriage. Gul had made Zoya an idiot who forgave Asad everytime.


Edited by angel_juhi04 - 11 years ago

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