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BlackNWhite

@desidillse

Sparkler

+ 16

Posted: 11 years ago

#901

It was fab.

A Perfect combo of angst complaint fun and emotional teary part.

Zoya was upset with asad like hell.

Najma and anu were the USP of this update

The second part literraly made me cry 😭 when asad gave chocolate bar to dillu

And anu n her antics forced to laugh

I guess the envelope were tickets of asad...may be he is going for a professional tour

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tashie

@tashie

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#902

You write the emotional parts so well. Awesome update!

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mummyoftwo

@mummyoftwo

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#903

Awsome updates!!!! I just didn't want it to end. Ur an amazing writer

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Asif

@asifiqbalsh

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#904

Awesome update
Asad realised that his words hurt zoya badly
His anger always hurt his loved ones
Najma asad convo was beautifully written
Asad was amazed by his baby sister thoughts
He apologised to his mother & zoya as well
He told his mother that we have to take permission from u not u should
Aahana knew how to tackle her parents
So asad gave her some documents. I think so it's all his business documents on her name
Waiting for next update to know what is in that envelope & most importantly zoya reaction
Thanks for pm

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Julie

@JULIEL

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#905

Panther fight and misunderstanding coming. Enjoyed the update. Looking forward to the next one.

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Anu

@sweety003

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#906

As always fabulous update ankita!!!

cliffy...can't wait update soon 😊

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Amin21Khpulwak

@Amin21Khpulwak

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#907

Wondrously done yaar👏

Just perfect⭐️

So najma proved herself that she belongs to khan family 😛

Really love each and every part and convo of this update as always .

But what were those papers yaar 😕

Egerly waiting to know

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scarletmalik

@scarletmalik

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#908

awsome update

it was a perfect combination of love,anger,understanding,emotions nd also a bit of fun

asad realised how his anger hurts his loved ones

loved nazma nd asad's convo

it was so beautiful

aanu is always the cutie

now zoya is angry but what were those papers

continue soon

nd thnx 4r pm

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-Anku-

@-Anku-

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#909

Originally posted by: Amulya9
Awesome update Ankita..
loved it...thanq fr d long update
Aanu is really ⭐️ cutipie...I love her bass...
I'm in love wth her Hupi word 😳
Nazma is star of this update... loved d way she made asad understood the whole thing...
loved d family hug...I miss my khan khandaan so much today
aanu knows how 2 bring ASYA closer...
🤗 thisz fr her...
so Zoya is angry now..o god.. asad is gng 2 manofy her again...
Ankita ur so so so gud at describing the emotions...
update soon..

Thanks dear 😃 glad you like it.

Najma is indeed the star of the episode 😳 She's a sweetheart isn't it? 😛

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-Anku-

@-Anku-

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#910

Originally posted by: princess101
Loved this so much
happy Zoya did give him a hard time Asad was wrong
Felt bad for Ahanna both her bu and mi werent giving her attention
I cant wait to read more I'm sure those were property papers or something that he put in her name
Thanx for the pm
update soon please

Haha, happens though. Parents can be preoccupied at times. But Aahana is too small to understand that obviously 😳

Thanks so much :)