Asya os: Mr and Mrs khan to a movie[updated] - Page 2

Originally posted by: SimplySmile

Nice start,

Only thing is to make the updates in your story longer other than that everything was really good,

You have.nice writing skills and nice concepts

Originally posted by: Aishwa09

Aww. I loved it a lot...

It was Awesome,

Fantastic,

Sweet,

Lovely,

Cute,

Jealous Asad is a treat to watch...😆

Went to watch Alone movie ...😲😳

Loved it completely,

Haaw,Dilshad said she will throw Asad out and will adopt Zoya as Daughter ..🤣🤣

Mind blowing Work...👏

Actually in this Story I was Expecting Zoya to think Tanveer as ghost in the film...😉

Anyways, Its very nice work..😊

Asya Confessed and Kissed 😳

Keep writing works on Asya ...

I am missing them a lot..

If u can make it as an SS...

Do give many more works on Asya...

Pm me for all your Upcoming works...

thanks for the comment. it really encouraged me. 😊

Originally posted by: jas91

Lovely OS😊

thanks for the comment

lovely OS...

Cute & lovely
Beautifully written
Pm me for all your upcoming works on asya

Ufff... I am so waiting for his movie...😃

hey its awesome... loved it... jealous asad is always a treat 2 watch ..
KSG alone movie.. shirtless KSG..hayee
finally asad confessed.. lovely os ...do write more on Asya

Very sweet.. I wish asya had chance for normal date... A movie or shopping or even a visit to the mazar as couple

Originally posted by: Wanderbug

Very sweet.. I wish asya had chance for normal date... A movie or shopping or even a visit to the mazar as couple

yeah i too wished for the same, but it was the first serial where i saw evil getting all the happiness. lets see if they do it atleast with saahil.