Asya os: Mr and Mrs khan to a movie[updated]

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Hai guys! I know i said i will post a ss but i thought i would first test myself with an os. I Knw its gng to be crap but pls give ur honest opinions, even if its bad tell me. Thanks. Updated on post 3
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Posted: 11 years ago
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When will u post it ?
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hi guys, i am sorry i was late caught up in work. in this story, asad and zoya are married due to dil's challenge.tanveer isn't present.and somewhere i heard ksg's film's name would be alone. so i had use it here.

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Zoya watched around the theatre to see happy couples who were enjoying
with each other, holding hands , feeding popcorns, even some pda. She

turned to looked at the robot which was sitting next to her as if

touching her would burn him alive.

'Mr.Khan when will the film start?'

questioned zoya with her patience withering away.

'patience Ms.faarooqui ' replied Asad making her roll her eyes.
Zoya went into deep thoughts. She and Asad were married yesterday in a small
ceremony at khan villa. According to him their marriage was fake and he did it

only for his ammi. Even this theatre visit was because his ammi

threatened of throwing him out of the house and adopting zoya as

her daughter. The only good outcome of this was she was watching her

favourite hero's movie 'alone'. Zoya came back to earth with loud cheering of

audience which indicated the start of the movie. If anything she loved as equal to
Asad was ksg and she wanted to watch his film from the time it released. So she

cleared her mind of Asad and started to enjoy the movie. Asad on the

other hand came to the film only for her. He was a never a fan of

hindi movies, but zoya was slightly depressed after their nikkah. So

he brought her here to cheer her up. It is true that he hadn't

confessed his love yet. He will do it soon and keep her happy by

pampering her with love and care. All of a sudden, zoya screamed

bringing him out of his thoughts. He panicked and saw her clinging to

his arm. Then only he realised that the movie was a horror flick. Asad

put his hands around her shoulder to console her. Zoya moved closer to

him and enjoyed the save haven his arms provided.They watched the full movie in

each other's arms.

Asad secretly thanked Allah for zoya's movie choice. After the film finished they

went back home and had their dinner before retiring to their room.

Zoya started a conversation with Asad while getting ready for bed.

'Wasn't it a wonderful film Mr. Khan?' enquired zoya. 'Yeah yeah it was

So wonderful that u closed ur eyes for half of the movie' replied Asad

Sarcastically. 'Who wants to see the ghost Mr. Khan I saw what I want.

Ksg shirtless'. 'Ms.faarooqui what are u talking. Stop it' replied

Asad who was burning of jealousy. But zoya had gone too much into ksg world to

get back. 'his arms , muscles, six packs Mr.Khan he is sooo hot. If

given a chance i would hv married him but kya karun i am stuck up with

u' zoya blabbered without knowing that she was raising the lion's

temper. Just the mere thought of zoya with someone else made Asad boil

with anger. Even before knowing what he is doing Asad smacked his manly lips on

her soft lips. He slowly caressed her lips to demand his entry. Sensing no reaction
from a shocked zoya Asad bit her lower lip making her gasp . He gained his entry
and explored her. Asad's hands traveled to her waist while zoya deepened the kiss

by tugging at his hair. After what seemed like eternity they parted.

Asad picked her and placed her in their bed. He lovingly pecked her

forehead 'ms.faarooqui i love u and remember that u are only mine ' confessed

Asad before pecking her lips. Zoya was happy but she kept a straight face. 'aren't u
happy ? Don't u love me ' enquired Asad perplexed by her lack of reaction.

'how can i be when u love someone called Ms.faarooqui' replied zoya.

Then it struck him that she wasn't ms.faarooqui anymore . She was mrs.khan his

wife. 'i love u zoya' confessed Asad. 'i too love u akdu ahmed khan' confessed zoya.
Asad kissed her again but this time gently and lovingly . That night

witnessed a happy union of two loving souls.

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THANKS FOR READING GUYS PLS GIVE UR REPLIES ON HOW IT IS.
Edited by asyaloveu - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Edited by Aishwa09 - 11 years ago
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Aww. I loved it a lot...

It was Awesome,

Fantastic,

Sweet,

Lovely,

Cute,

Jealous Asad is a treat to watch...😆

Went to watch Alone movie ...😲😳

Loved it completely,

Haaw,Dilshad said she will throw Asad out and will adopt Zoya as Daughter ..🤣
🤣

Mind blowing Work...👏

Actually in this Story I was Expecting Zoya to think Tanveer as ghost in the film...😉

Anyways, Its very nice work..😊

Asya Confessed and Kissed 😳

Keep writing works on Asya ...

I am missing them a lot..

If u can make it as an SS...

Do give many more works on Asya...

Pm me for all your Upcoming works...


Edited by Aishwa09 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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When are u going to update
Edited by aYASHIKA - 11 years ago
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Lovely os ..
I love to see jealous asad...
Aww ..he kissed zoya like no tomorrow. ..
Love their confession. ...
Beautiful...
Edited by aYASHIKA - 11 years ago
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Nice start,

Only thing is to make the updates in your story longer other than that everything was really good,

You have.nice writing skills and nice concepts


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Posted: 11 years ago
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Unres in pg 1...

Have edited...

Do give a look..

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Posted: 11 years ago
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thanks for the comment

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