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Mrinalini

@minakrish

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+ 55

Posted: 11 years ago

#831

Beautiful Update! Truly a very serene ending to this amazing story! The emotions that were unrecognized are finally recognized and given name to!

Well done! Beautifully worded! ❤️ Will miss this story!

Do write more!

Love,

Mrina <33

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nilusoni

@nilusoni

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Posted: 11 years ago

#832

superb ending loved it

thanx for pm

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Prashni Singh

@-SilverSparkle-

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#833

A charming end to a beautiful story.

The diary entry was endearing. ❤️

AsYa as parents are simply adorable.

Lovely writing. ⭐️

Edited by p_s05 - 11 years ago

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sj_qh_kabhi

@sj_qh_kabhi

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#834

A very beautiful story..!! Lovd it..:*

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ak020203

@ak020203

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#835

Its beautiful. . From an innocent teenagers to now a very matured parents.. there journey was captured beautifully in your story.. thanks for the last update. .. amazing story

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S.B.

@-Xpress-

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#836

That was such a beautiful ending ..emotional
and the asad and baby part cute
loved it

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Priyanka

@Prizi

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+ 30

Posted: 11 years ago

#837

It was just awesumm
will miss this ff

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Heena

@aarzoo50

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#838

beautifully written update...
loved it...
finally shaadi hogai aur hame pata b nahi chala...
zoya is so much into her diary...
next morning b she filled it up...
she told asad wt she had written in it all these years. but never let him have a look...
they had a daughter... Mehreen... it has two meanings...
1)loving nature... she wud b having that inne sone n loving parents ki kuddi jo hai...
2)as bright as sun...she brought the sunshine in her parents life...
i vl miss this ff ankita...
agla plot ready karo jaldi jaldi...

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sanasahel

@sanasahel

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#839

lovely ,lovely,and lovely. that's what I have to say.

thanx for a good story.

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Simran Bhandary

@pwenCezz_symrun

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#840

WOW!!!! it's the only word i could relate with this chapter!!!! i am surely amazed by ur writing skills!! plz do tell me how do uh even manages to pen down so beautifully? totally amazing piece of writing it was!!👏👏👏
the love, emotions, the feeling of care, support nd every single thing was explained magnificently!! especially the selection of the words are brilliant!!👍🏼👍🏼
so finally AsYa are married now!! glad that they had realized their love for each other before it's too late!! loved the flashback scene too!!😳😳😳
awww..Zoe gave birth to a baby girl!! Mehreen..nice name!! the ending part too was fabulous!! the way uh ended this story is really awesome!!👏👏👏
had a great time reading it!! thank uh for sharing this beautiful piece of writing with us!! i would love to read some more from uh!! if possible, do come soon with some other works too!!😳😳