Th#2 AsYa FF Across The Shadows - Chapter 4 and 5 - Page 50

Originally posted by: Sanjhari

hey it was a lovely update...

full of ASYA...

I loved it...

I m gonna miss your story but I wish you had a wonderful time on your holiday...

Originally posted by: SimplySmile

The banner looks so nice,

Every time I read Zohura's story I always get shivers for the poor girl😭, she really had no one to tell anything to

I can pretty much say that Asad likes likes Zoya, maybe at the beginning he was just intrigued by her quietness and her mysteriousness but now the little things he does show that he is starting to develop some feelings for her.

I loved the bit with him talking in German, because I speak Urdu and I live in Canada so whenever I get mad at someone I just curse at them in Urdu and they have no idea what I'm saying😆, the best way to take my anger out on a teacher without being caught🤣

I'm looking forward to see Zoya's whole background being unmasked and why she is the way she is, it'll be interesting

As much as I love this story, I honestly do think that you need to take a break, because you write so much on the forum so you just need to sit back and relax with your family and friends, I hope you have a wonderful vacation, come back whenever you can and be ready to give us an amazing update,😃

Originally posted by: ...Mallu...

Great Job !!

Originally posted by: Divya.S.R

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Poor Zoya.. That Razia, witch of the first order.. 😡why she compared Zoya with Zainab??

Seriously these people are so disgusting.. Ghaffur can never be expected to have an ounce of brains.. Couldn't he think if his daughter would do such a thing.. 😡

Poor thing was hoping to leave them after her education completed..

It's good Zoya ran away😊.. I think with Nisha's mother help she would be introduced to a career she never wanted to go.. 😭

😆Asad is just too cute.. He was continuously trying her number..

nice so Zoya is also being a little naughty around him.. 😉😆

not bad.. he knows her very to catch her lies.. 😉...

Love their talks and slowly their feeling for each other seems to be increasing even if it's in a small quantity... 😳

It was a short update but a lovely Asyalicious one.. 😉

p.s. Have a great vacation.. have a safe trip.. 🤗

Originally posted by: --Bubble007--

Heyy I don't know ur name ?? can u tell me if u don't mind ?? 😛

and thanks for always giving lovely comments ,,

I always wait for ur response 😳

Yup she is broken and alone in this world !

yeah he is slowly starting to develop feelings for her 😊

haha yeah I know its common thing even I love cursing in other languages to make sure no one understands 🤣🤣

I hope it will be as per ur expectations ,,

haha thanks for understanding ,,

will deffo try updating sooon 😳

Originally posted by: -Maliha-

do you need some invitation,..🥱

Originally posted by: SimplySmile

AWWW that was so sweet for you to say😳,

The name is Sonny, girl by the way,

Your stories always go beyond my expectations, they always have a happy ending and are always so AsYa filled

Originally posted by: --Bubble007--

Thanks Divya for ur lovely comment 🤗

I am glad that you liked it !!

he should think like that but I guess situation is never in favor of Zoya ,,

Yup Nisha's mother is gonna help her in many things ,,

thats also gonna be one hell of an amazing character 😆

Yup she is slowly opening up with him ,,

aww thanks doe that 🤗

Originally posted by: Divya.S.R

It's nice she'll get some help from Nisha's mother.. 😊

but why do I feel there is still more to her dark past.. 😲

I'm waiting for them both to be completely open with each other... 😃