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Posted: 11 years ago
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res😊 Unres...
Loved it...it had an air of warmth and nostalgia in it...Loved his retrospect...life is always lived backwards...and looking at his life...and how he got here...was very beautifully scripted...I really enjoyed it...Really like the relationship between the 2..and how Zoya helped him stand up once again...lovely concept...and lovley story...gr8 job Devika...I truly enjoyed reading it!!!😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow! After a long time you write something. It was really awesome. Zoya's love for Asad was so unconditional. Please stop using the name 'tanveer' it just boils my blood 😡

Asad was very lucky to have someone like zoya, who not only loved him but stood by him and supported him. Not everyone is that lucky. This was really a different story from your side. Please do write more often. 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: -SunShine

Amazing

beautifully written


Thank you .. 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: p_s05

"I did not want you to become a nobody... I was determined to get you back and the world to know your value...!! I love you Asad for fighting back and proving to the world what you are...!!

Thank you so much Zoya for loving me and being there for me...!!"


This was exceptionally beautiful! ⭐️


Thanks a lot .. 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: asyaarshilover

wow radhika
amazig just amazing os
loved the concept
radil died sad but was needed 😭
hate tanveer as always 😡 lol 😆
no need of imran 😉 😆
amazing once again
write more plz soon
thank u


Thank you.. No need of Imran... Tanveer ko bhi koi chahiye hain na ??🤣
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: vinita459

Wow! After a long time you write something. It was really awesome. Zoya's love for Asad was so unconditional. Please stop using the name 'tanveer' it just boils my blood 😡

Asad was very lucky to have someone like zoya, who not only loved him but stood by him and supported him. Not everyone is that lucky. This was really a different story from your side. Please do write more often. 😊


Thanks a lot Vinitha... 😊 ya I know after a very long time.. Yep Zoya's love was unconditional.. Why do you hate Tanveer by name so much... ?? I don't want to get another name for villan of the story.. so Tanveer most of the time.. 🤣

Ya it was different.. was not sure if everybody would like it or not ?? I will write whenever time permits.. 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: gowtu

Wow
Master piece
Loved it

Thanks Gowtu.. 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thanks Asif.. 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: pinks2911

I get my spot on pg.1⭐️ cool..

I have never been first on your stories..😕 .. no worries.. your comments in whichever page matters...

Welcome back Devika.. Thank you..
Its been long since you wrote..
Missed your stories badly..😊 aww... Thanks again.. really busy with work so not able to write quite frequently
And what a comeback!⭐️
The update was FABULOUS!😃👏 Thank you so much.. .
Your stories always show us how love can happen between two different people..😊 Well I write on what I believe...and I seen the uncoditional love among people around...😊


Zoya is a silent lover.. 😳 How romantic that is..😳 ... Am glad you liked it..
Asad loved Tanveer..😆 Poor Asad!😛😆 ...haan bechara.. Tanveer ke jaal mein fasgaya tha...
But I wonder why Asad didn't know even though she is from the same class..😕 Well .. he was only to himself till he became successful.. It was only later Tanveer came into his life...
Loved the way Zoya supported him..😳
AWESOME update..👏
Looking forward to more of your stories..😃 Thank you.. Will try to write more frequently..
Thanks for the pm..😊

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow Devika this is amazing ,,
I loved the concept it was different and unique <3
Loved the ending ,,
and how she was soo deeply in love with him !
Do write more OS-es :D

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