OS: TRUE LOVE - ASYA Story - Page 9

Originally posted by: DevikaRavish

Thanks Ankitha.. Yes.. I know it hurts when children are not able to retain what their parents saved for them.. and he was mentally , emotionally and financially drained... and if you have somebody like Zoya.. with unconditonal love then success is just matter of time is what I believe in .. Test of Time ??

Originally posted by: RAJLUVASYA

Very nice os. Its different but i loved it. Sorry for late cmnt.

Originally posted by: Perfectionist2

Hey Devika,

Sorry I took so long to Unres. ... No worries Juliet.. Totally understand the time constraints..😊

My work is all over the place these days. --- hmmm.. Good luck to manage your time..

Coming to the update.

Most definitely one of your best write ups. I have only read very few of your works but I like this one a lot. --- Thank you so much ... Do read when time permits.. Would like to know your comments on each of my earlier works...

I liked how it is a first person POV. I prefer that when it's a simple uncomplicated OS. -- you know what it was an attempt after reading your OS and TS...So thanks to you to help me bring out this first person POV...

I also loved how you zoomed in and out of the past and present.

It is a unique style not many writers can perfect it but you certainly did. ... awww. Thanks a lot..

Coming to the story, Cute Adorable Fluff. --- 😊

Asad the writer who would have thought. You brought out the practicality at times with how income should be regular and sustaining. I have learnt this lesson in life in a hard way... and so this came out from my heart and I seriously did not know if people in the forum would like it..

Writer not valuing his Abbu's advice and then the regret, I was in that journey you created. -- Thank you so much .. What I feel is parents or elders opinion as a point of view must definitely be discussed and considered before we take any important decisions in life though the final decision is yours...

Then Tanveer and the Accident - Tanveer part I thought OH GOD is this man Nave...

And one year in Comma. Zoya took care of him. Actually what I feel is during any testing time be it financial , emotional etc... loved ones care and support is definitely required for him/her to bounce back in life else many a cases, the person will fall deep down.. never to come up in life...😭

How cute is Zoya here, taking his hand in his. And Zoya is a successful singer.

I love when Zoya has a career in any story I read or write. --- Then I sincerely want you to read all my earlier works... I believe in a Woman's career to have her own identity ...

Zoya and her 10 mins. I would have named this OS as "Her Ten Minutes"😆 --- Not a bad idea...

Loved the addiction to the family and how every one ends up successful and an achiever in one way and the other. --- As mentioned earlier.. love and support for each other will take you to great heights.. and I am a firm beliver of this.. 😊

I am not over AsYa Devika. But I am trying to get off IF and if you keep writing these cute stories you are making it really hard for my addiction to AsYa. --- Thank you so very much Juliet.. you are giving more credit than required... I am stuck with KABHI as ASYA and somehow do not have it in me to write about others so far...

Beautiful and Magnificent..

Love Always --- Love you too a lots.. and you know that.. I wanna chat with you sometime but we live in different time zones.. not sure if we could really do..

Juliet

Originally posted by: sweetnandu

awesome one..

Originally posted by: Ramlath

Awesome os di...

Originally posted by: aseelashah

Devi its an amazing work dear

I love it

Its so different & touching

Pls do write more

Thanks for pm😃