SaHil Short Story: Look the Other Way (UPDATED 2ND JUNE)

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GrilledCheese

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

wonderful one..yet again. i love the way you write.

do continue this!

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zzinia2411

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

WOW!!!👏 it was lovely! reallyyy! pleeaasseee do write more on SaHil!

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Farhana

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Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Hawww itna short?

I want a big one next time

However, I really loved it, it was cute

Keep up the good work :))

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@saruu.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: FaultInMyStars
It was very short and yet very very impactuful. Please do continue this!
P.S. I love Aahil too!

thanks!

yeah i think i will- i have so many ideas :)

yeah Aahil should be loved by everyone.

he is jesus.

thanks for commenting love <3

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@saruu.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: farz_parachute
:)mine

...brushing darkly against the windows, and
crawling unsteadily out of shadows...

Amazing!

448 you say?

448 of wonder I tell you! Each word so deep!

I'm very impressed!!! Thank you so much for this!! So heart clenching...and a little heart warming too...hmmm

I love it! So very much!

You've outdone yourself yet again!!! Though your other one is still my favourite! How do you do it! Capture these emotions and translate them into words...all 448 of them!

Great piece!

Imma go read again!!!

Mwahhh

aww thanks love <3

you just make everything so poetic- and you make me blush with your words <33

ILYSM.

thanks for the beautiful comment hun <3

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@saruu.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: farz_parachute
:)

Now even I want to know his secret!

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And I want more from you! I need to read more!!

Hee!

yeah, im writing more atm too 🤣

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@saruu.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: ...Maha-Srk...
Unres.
Fantastic
but short one

thanks <3

yeah its short cos i wanted to capture, like, the essence maybe? i dont know, something, in as few words as i could :)

thanks for reading and commenting love <3

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@saruu.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: Prags_Sociopath
Unres.
This one again, a brilliant piece man. You guys write so well!
And can I just say, I loved loved and just LOVED Sanam in.this piece?! The thing u said about her not brushing his past, so true! I would seriously like to see this Sanam to be in the show too!
Loved the last Para! The way she saw that hidden emotional Aahil behind his mask. Absolutely amazing! And so short. Yet so vast!

Oh Aahil! I love you my coconut. Ameerzaada. Jallad Jinn. 😆

thanks bruh.

i swear, if in this show when Sanam finds out about the completely messed up shebang and Tanveer- and how she's friggin groomed Aahil to be her, like, slave- if she just hugs him for one episode and the nightmares and religious daily angsting of Aahil go away i will kill Gul.

Im not against physical violence. Im punjabi. We do that everyday.

Thanks so much for commenting love <33

on the first page too 🤣

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@saruu.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: TVD-IANcrazy
That's it??? I mean this short?? Next time it better be 4448 instead of 448. Okay. 😆 😆
Amazing man. You nailed it. You know I loved this Sanam. And every emotions; the denial; her thoughts; him pricked with something related to his past; her peeping inside his masked self and trying to learn something about him, peel off the real him. 👏 👏 So beautifully captured. And please continue soon. Even I want to know more of this Aahil and Sanam.

haha 🤣

next time, okay 🤣

thanks- thats what i was going for :)

yeah, i think i am- but theres so many different ways i could take this- i don't want to ruin it 🤣

thanks so much for reading and commenting love <3