Asad-Zoya FF:Zoya Proposes, Asad Disposes Thread II Chapter 22 Pg 137

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Posted: 10 years ago

#911

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unres

Hayee Noe maar dala...uff what an update

Mayhem in Zoya's perfect world

Ayaan-humeira engaged...rashid-dilshaad concerned for zoya instead of rejoicing...zoya thinking about Tanveer...Tanveer thinking about Asad

OMG Zoya be like what the effin hell's goin on here !!!!

''He was not Ayaan, he was not Akram. He was Asad'' WOW

''How can Mehak be someone else's niece?''

''This was her own doing''

Epic update Noe with some super epic writing kudos to you 👏

After the Chaudvin ka Chaand chapter this one is my favourite !!

Loved how Zoya's love for Asad just flowed out of her mouth '' When you have me'' 😳😳😳

And then the acceptance...the blushing...the realisation that it was too late

Mind blowing

So many emotions so many realisations...so so so powerful

Only you could do this Noe 😊

Cheers !!

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Abi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#912

unres
first thank-u for updateing
about Update
It was pertty interesting
finally fighting with lots of confussion,Zoya have realize she was in love with Asad
can't wait for Asad's return&Zoya dealing with this mess😉

CONTINUE SOON

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jazz

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Posted: 10 years ago

#913

Finally u have updated man

And finally zoya has realized she is in love with asad

Yayyuu I was so waiting for this

Can't wait to see asad back and how zoya will deal with it

Plzz plzzz con soon plzzz I will b waiting for next part so impatiently lol

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Mayur Chan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#914

Heyyy...Noe...thanx for the P.M dear...it took you so long to update and we can understand...so but you compensated with this update by realizing Zoya that she is in love with Asad...though Asad was not here in person, he was everywhere in the update except the first half ...i really loved Zoya"s self confession part...continue soon.

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Alone111

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Posted: 10 years ago

#915

Akhir zoya mein akhal Aa hi gai.. Uuufff...
Amzng updt.. I loved it

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sweet_tehs

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Posted: 10 years ago

#916

Shukriya meherbaani Karam!!!!!

Thanks that u finally updated. U know it felt sooo incomplete without this story. How r u?? Hope ur fine.

Well the update was good talents now zoya realized Her feelings. But where is asad plzz can't wait for him to be back.

Plz update soon this time. Give us the purani wali noe who used to give us at least one update a week.

Thanks for the pm.

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Heena

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Posted: 10 years ago

#917

beautiful update noe...
an explosive mind blowing one...
zoya pe bomb k upar bomb gira...
n the deadliest one was that from tanveer n the heaviest one was that of zoyas realisation that she loves asad...
vl she confess!!! may be na bcz she thinks asad also loves tanveer...
ua last line of the update " she was too late in realizing!" made me so dukhi 😔
u need to update soon noe ... plz

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farz_parachute

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Posted: 10 years ago

#918

Noe love.

You did it again didn't you.

Caught up with us when we least expect it!

You my darling make a lot of people really very happy!

Oh the way in which Zoya digested the news of Ayaan engagement to Humaira and needing a breather herself but she had to first calm some people down first.

And look at that. Rashid's son gave him a big news but he was more concerned about Zoya. I don't think even he had the chance to rejoice before Zoya explained the real situation.

Zoya is one unique person. Without her trying people have the highest regards for her. This is the one thing that has always stood out for me.

Even Shireen has a high regard for her. And of course there's Tanveer. And Humaira we've seen her insecurity or jealousy towards Zoya giving her importance.

Now.

Zoya. Oh man. How is she taking all these news. Ayaan - Humaira engagement. Dealing with his parents. The thought of a heartbroken Tanveer. And then, Tanveer-Asad in love????? Tanveer yes. Asad too?

And of course...

Her own realisation. Oh it was beautiful. Everything happened correctly. The way she caressed his picture on her screen. And that electric shock thing that she felt. And then going at it again, border, more confident. ... and yes...blushing at her realisation.

*****

Noe I cannot thank you enough for this. I really cannot. Such attachment I have to the characters, this is your doing. You write with great attachments yourself. It's palpable.

The raw emotions and let's not start with your style. That, my friend, you know I'm a big fan of. Now how do I even begin to explain what I go through reading this. There's this great anticipation and want and all that fluttery heart.

You've tempered with more unknown chords and strings in my heart. Dare I say my soul? Most certainly my brain.

The previous two parts, what a roller coaster ride they were...and with this part, the ride continued.

Asad. Just the mention of his name and I can feel his presence. Such magnanimity, again, you did it.

Again Noe. Thank you again.

A daze I'm still in.

Oh the next part. Already am excited beyond imagination.

Hayyyeee.