Asad-Zoya FF:Zoya Proposes, Asad Disposes Thread II Chapter 22 Pg 137 - Page 91

Originally posted by: Noe123

Hey, thanks a lot for taking time to read the story in one go and I am very glad that you liked it.

Yes, Asad has less space in this story because this is mainly Zoya's story and also there are many other characters fighting for space. Asad stays in background but his presence is felt, IMHO.

The title doesn't mean actual proposal. It is a spoof on 'Man Proposes, God Disposes' and no I am no way equating Asad with God. He is not. It is a comic take on the famous quote.

I will update next part in a day or two.

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Okay now I get it.. I was taking d TITLE too seriously lol 😊
Btw yeah its mainly bout zoya n others r also imp bt..u know!! Can't resist myself from seeing asad in d story some what more.. 😉
N u updating in a day or two wow finally my waiting session will come to an end

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Oho. Noe. Ab mein bolungi toh bolenge ki bolti hai.😆

hi dear!

Madam, do you realise it is like one month since you updated? Please update fast dearie...😭

Originally posted by: h123

hi dear!

read ur story in one go and loved every bit of it.

u r an awesome writer.love you❤️

and when will zoya realize her love i m desperately w8ing 4 that moment.

and what about tanveer?

hope everything gets better.

update soon

love

hafsu

Originally posted by: najma123

Oho. Noe. Ab mein bolungi toh bolenge ki bolti hai.😆

Update dijiye meherbaan!

Res, finally the update,

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Zoe Zoe Zoe...😊

Finally, it all makes sense, and yet not. The information overload spilling everywhere, and yes, all of it inverting everything she knows so far. Nothing is as it should be. Ayaan, Humeira, Tanveer. And most of all Asad. He is not what she thought he is and yet is. All of the world coalescing into that moment. When Asad became who he was meant to be in her world. Simply, easily, obviously. The awareness hit her like a luminous feeling. The subconscious is now conscious, she blushes, wondering how she could have missed it. And by so much.

What a lovely chapter. All of it so perfectly pitched, right from Zoe's confusion to Rashid's guilt, Dilshad's relief, Tanveer's confidence to Zoe's astonishment to finally her finding the hidden essence that was always within her. What a range of emotions and finally acceptance. 👍🏼

The last part, the ache, the realization, and the hope that seems fleeting and yet rooted in her being. This, that moment when it all comes together. Asad permeates and lives in her life like she never knew. 😳

Beautifully written from Zoe's perspective. 👏

This update was worth the wait. And now begins the wait for the next part. And yes, it's hard Noe, hopefully it will be sooner than later. 😳

Originally posted by: notagain

Res, finally the update,

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