Asad-Zoya FF:Zoya Proposes, Asad Disposes Thread II Chapter 22 Pg 137 - Page 11

Chapter 11

Originally posted by: notagain

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Ayaan miyaan gayab for a day, daal kaali hai. 😉 But that doesn't bother Zo as much as Mrs Khan, whomsoever that might be. Ye kon hai, kyun hai, kaise hai? 😆Ahhh the possibility hurts where it hurts. And then of course the shopping takes over the moment and as usual she moves on.

I like how you have directly moved on to "kaali daal" instead of "daal main kaala" 😆

Haan...shopping takes over. This is one more problem after her overconfidence and baseless imaginations. She never takes a long enough pause. Jumps from one topic to another. And, she is going to pay for this. Bewakoof ladki!

And then setting up the camera, she is comfortable with Ayaan and she very comfortable at Asad's place, yet they are at the same time they have secrets. Ayaan checks out the height and she looks at the view that was made possible by the man to whom no one should be compared to. And yeah they are being defensive about Asad and Humeira without even realizing it. While they both are oblivious, Ayaan and Zoe duke it out . 😈

Their better halves silently suffer (They are indeed better halves nahi - Asad of Zoya and Humeira of Ayaan 😛) being fully aware of goings on, while these two act and yet are oblivious.

The moon that rose in time to sun setting is the one that captured the mood. That picture should be called serendipity. That is how it happened. That moment stood still while the story and life continued. It just stands there on it's own. Zoe and Asad just don't know it yet. It was beautifully written, Noe. The confusion and honesty of a moment stolen from time. That picture has to be something else.

Thank you. 😳 Yes, serendipity is the word.

And as life slips forward, the dancing and singing bring about the new awareness that was just beneath the surface. It breaks through? Almost? Ayaan is completely besotted with himself, seriously. 😆 and what a relief that Humeira was spared the singing.

Completely agree about Ayaan.😆

Asad singing and strumming chaudhavi ka chaand was such a surprise. 😳 That part of him I feel is subdued and comes out with just close folks. He picked it, the song. This must one of the moments that must be the cusp. Zoe looks away, she is unable to hold the gaze. 😳

Yes, it is the cusp for him. He took a risk. He couldn't stop himself. When on the terrace, during the selfie moment, there was still confusion and unsurity, but now it was almost gone at least about his own emotions. Ishq logo se ajeeb harkatein karwata hain - Dilshaad says in the next chapter and he did something of that sort. But, unfortunately, he won't go beyond the cusp for a while. Zoya as usual stays in the moment and then moves on to next thing that catches her attention.

The undercurrents are strong. One can just hope that they find the way, as a river flows eventually to it's destination.

Ek din to ye hona hi hain.

Next one soon please. 😊

Originally posted by: gowtu

U knw wht
I love u..
I seriously love u for dis one..
It was just.. Just amzng updt..
Loved it totally...

Thank you😳

Glad that you have liked it a lot. 😃

Enjoyed it.
I dnt tel u which prt I liked most..
Specaily asad nd guitar prt.. That was beauiull..

My favorite, too.

Huh zoya kab samjhengi.. Hmph..

Kab samjegi? Hmm...how about on the day that Asad is already married to someone else. 😉
Were ayaan nd humaira knw each other before ???

Maybe.
Continue soon

Thank you for reading and commenting.

Originally posted by: roshni_A

wah lazabab..: what an atmosphere u created with the song ..i almost had visual..and it was sooo soothing to heart..its true that old is gold and this song has made the environment pure gold..though i am not a fan of this song but to imagine it to be sang by asad with a guiter in that time of evening is just fabulous.. i just wanted to seat their with ur characters too.. other parts of the updt is also really good but the end is show-stopper...updt soon dear..

Originally posted by: -Anitha-

Loved this part

Originally posted by: jasminerose

Res

BEAUTIFUL BEAUTIFUL!!

LOVED IT

What a well scripted update.

Chaudvi ka chand ho part was beyond beautiful. I am seriously smitten. can't even describe how much.

This update touched my heart in different ways. I could picturize the entire scene infront of my eyes and its highly endearing. It has set a different mood altogether. I am listening to old songs now.

Don't i always say there is this simplicity in the way you present romantic moments that they become extraordinary.

Loved the photograph part of Asad and Zoya.

I am really liking the way Zoya is getting affected.

Overall a great update!!

I have read the last two updates in a rush. Will read again and comment soon.

Originally posted by: Shubh007

Update is...

Awesome...👏

Amazing...👍🏼

Just love it...,...😊

Waiting for nxt part egarly so update soon...,..😃

Originally posted by: aarzoo50

beautiful update...
is it realisations knocking on the doors...
wts with humaira... kitna headache hai...
zoya doesnt lyk any1 else nearer to asad or even tease him other than herself...
asad ... wel since ayaans entry he is somewhat lost...
continue soon

Originally posted by: life4me

Awesome update. I think Asad knows his feelings for Zoya.

Update soon please.