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Chapter 11
Hi!
I'm so sorry I couldn't comment on the last update, have been a busy bee :PSo let me compile both into this one.Oh..don't worry about it.You know what pricked the most? When Asad, ASAD couldn't catch the 'way too wide' smile Zoya gave when Ayaan arrived.That's what makes him different! That he can understand Zoya in the blink of an eye. They don't need words to communicate. They can converse even with poker faces.Yes, that's what makes him and Mr Knightley different from others. Like Zoya says about Ayaan, guys are dense. But, here we have an exception. It is quite surprising actually, but it is true. Mr. Knightley/Asad has really good observation power which they use to do their little detective work (more on this later) as well as grasping meaning behind every action of their loved ones. One more reason that makes Mr Knightley my favorite Austen Hero. 😃Guess he was too preoccupied with Humeira. So very preoccupied.I want to insert an emoticon here.. but then my words will lose essence.You see, these 2 updates have made me so heavy hearted, that I can't even begin to tell.Ayaan's presence is not bothersome. But Humeira.. that girl. She get's on my nerves!She has done no harm - she's quiet, sensible, elegant, beautiful but she.. she's not Zoya. Yes, she's not Zoya.Zoya shares your thoughts on Humeira. 😉I know you need some more time, some more updates for the WRONG OTPs to establish. Still, I have no idea how I will read through them.No! Don't feel bad! It's just that, you are such an amazing writer, that the readers get emotionally connected to your words. And I am waist deep, heck, neck deep in this story.So it hurts. A lot. But I am equally excited! I swear, I CAN'T wait for the day when they'll realise the truth. That they had been wrong all along.Well, a story needs to be told the way it needs to be told. I hope in the end it would be worth it.This story is from Zoya's POV, right? I miss Asad's.I kinda always know what Zoya must be feeling when Humeira and Asad interact. But what about Asad? How does he feel - seeing Ayaan and Zoya so close?Can we please have Asad's POV, if it's possible?Well, Asad is a man of actions and I like it that way. His actions talk on his behalf. But, if you want to know his POV, I will try to include it. No promises though, but I will try. In some or other way.I loved loved loved the sunset part. Just him and her on the terrace.And his hand around her waist.. their faces up close..ah. So magical and surreal!Thank you. Glad to know that it is a much loved moment.Why Ayaan! Why did you interrupt?! Hmpf.He has too. Zoya can't get all aware, just now. 😆Aaand.. Asad was to back to his usual self.His reprimanding nature is for Zoya alone, right? He has the RIGHT to scold her, for her own good. He doesn't do it with others, haina?Well, Prasad will also vouch for his reprimanding nature, but that is in his professional life. In personal life, it is mainly reserved for Zoya. Yes, he thinks that he has the RIGHT.The Mrs Asad Ahmed Khan talk hurt me more that it hurt Zoya, I think! :POh...Oh, the singing sequence! I LOVE the song, 'Chaudhvin ka Chand'. One of my favorites.And Asad singing.. looking at Zoya while doing it.It is a great song. I was just looking for a right opportunity to use the song in this story.Zoya is scared to look at him. Why? She's afraid, she might feel things she has never felt for him before. His presence is intimidating. She fears she might get overwhelmed or get carried away with emotions.Yes, in those stolen moments, she feels that she hasn't felt before and being the dense girl that she is she doesn't process. And, here your weird between best friends argument gets to work. If it was someone other than Asad, she would pay attention. "But, ASAD? Really? What else is there to catch my attention?"He was reminiscing a memory, right? I'm pretty sure it was one of the many Asad-Zoya adventures! I hope I'm not wrong.
You got your answer.😊The VERY FEW Ayaan Humeira interactions relieve me! And Tanveer, well she's not in the picture anymore! Haha!Are you sure about Tanveer?Hey, Do Ayaan, Rashid, Asad, Anwar share the same surname? Just thinking!Yes, they do. Actually, by the time this story gets over, every one will be an Ahmed Khan except Gafoor 😆 (I am not counting Tanveer and Imraan)Okay, I should stop now. I might get carried away with emotions too!Waise, wanna know a secret? I have ALREADY imagined the confession. It's not a 'confession' confession... but a heart to heart between soulmates, without the use of vocab. You get it, don't you? I knew it!Update soon Noe! :DIf you are into Golden Songs, check this one out ~ Enjoy! :)My all time favorite!Thank you for sharing the song. It is quite a song that I didn't know about before.
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