One Night...... (A SaAhil two shot.) pt2 upd june 7

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chicksoup

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Posted: 11 years ago

#61

Originally posted by: farz_parachute
Hey Soup...come on already...

I want my kheer...

Thanda ya garam...anything, bas chahiye!

If U find it too thanda, partly blame it on the show that was weird the whole week!😡...Friday exempted😳...And I always derive inspiration from the show!😆

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TVD-IANcrazy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#62

Hey Soup, you are back with the update. 🤗

LMAO @plastic surgeon. 🤣 🤣 Sorry!! I just couldn't control myself. This was the best part. I am still laughing man. 😆

I hope there is more to this story?? And you are going to continue. Right??

Needless to say, it was amazing. Loved the caring Aahil. And his plastic surgery thing. 😆 I mean seriously.

Both are fighting with their inner selves. It would be interesting to see who realises it first.

Continue soon. 😊

Edited by TVD-IANcrazy - 11 years ago

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chicksoup

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Posted: 11 years ago

#63

Originally posted by: TVD-IANcrazy
Hey Soup, you are back with the update. 🤗

LMAO @plastic surgeon. 🤣 🤣 Sorry!! This was the best part. I am still laughing man. 😆
I hope there is more to this story?? And you are going to continue. Right??

Needless to say, it was amazing. Loved the caring Aahil. And his plastic surgery thing. 😆 I mean seriously.
Both are fighting with their inner selves. It would be interesting to see who realises it first.
Continue soon. 😊

naheee...😲..This is a TWO- SHOT!🤔 TWO- I did write two parts...😃

And if I wrote more...the story wouldn't be of one night...😉😆

Thanks for liking it...

Plastic surgeon...ha ha...true story- not mine, though...!😉😆

Edited by chicksoup - 11 years ago

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TVD-IANcrazy

@TVD-IANcrazy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#64

^^ Nahiii. 😭

I know its a TS but still...don't you think its kinda incomplete?? What about the next day and the day followed to that and then the next night?? 😆

True story??? Really??? 😲 Sorry, I am still laughing over that. I just love such things from confused souls like Aahil. 😆

Edited by TVD-IANcrazy - 11 years ago

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Pragya

@Ms.Sherlocked

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Posted: 11 years ago

#65

Soup!! 🤗 Yayy u updated it finally..😆

This was so so damn amazing!! Just brilliant part! First things first, why you're not going to make it something like..another night??? 😆

Like how they feel awkward and try to cover it up by playing the blame game 😆 It would be so awesome...think think!! Just imagine them doing this stuff...😆

Okay, for the part.

It was so awesome man! Lol..plastic surgery??? 😆😆 She can't get rid off her blabbering even when she is not in her senses!! How cute!! 😆

And our ARI, keeps reminding himself, i own her, poor boy!! He doesn;t he is already owned! 😆

I loved their inner fights and he called her beautiful, and Sanam can't beleive that! 😆

Aww..Sanam had dreams of his Jallaad Jinn eh? 😆 And our ARI, dreams to door ki baat hai, he can't even sleep tonight..😉😆

He liked carrying her, and she liked being carried by him..aww!! Hayyee...😆

Super stuff man! I liked almost every single line of it1 And i'll keep ranting so i better stop now. 😆

Dude. Third part. Okay?? 😆