The Alter Ego - ||Chronicles Of ARI|| *Updated Pg. 34* - Page 20

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: subhkisonu

How long we have to wait for a jelly Aahil? 😭


😆 Ugh. Ask him! He is not giving me what I want...uhhh.. ;) 😆
He is sulking right now! Bloody Jallad 😆😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
Of course I love this!

A jealous ARI fighting with himself over .. Miss Dhabevali. His Miss Dhabevali. They could have shown something like that in the show you know.
Continue! Continue.
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Posted: 11 years ago
I think now you have enough reason to write a jelly Aahil😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: nikki.171

Of course I love this!

A jealous ARI fighting with himself over .. Miss Dhabevali. His Miss Dhabevali. They could have shown something like that in the show you know.
Continue! Continue.


Thanks Nikki! Sorry I replied so late! Thank you so much!! Glad that loved it! :)
I am updating now!! The Jelly ARI! ;)
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Posted: 11 years ago
And. I am back finally with another Alter Ego! :D
There has been lot of Jealousy going on right now, the tension was too much to handle for me! I couldn't stop but put it down in the words. The last dance gave that extra rush to me! 😆
So. Finally here is is it! Yes the Jealousy one. Which my fellow friends were so much requesting for! This is for all of you! And for the angsty ARI lovers! Hope it turns out good in the end! I couldn't help but end in that way! Too much mess! 😆

Okay. So enough ranting. Here it is! Enjoy! :D

She. Is. Mine.

"Bloody hell! What does she think of herself, Huh?! Ughhh." He came rushing to his balcony, muttering to himself."This girl! Why the hell do I even care?!! Ugh."

Mr. Messed up! So she is again messing up your mind! Sigh!

And here you're again! Just get the Eff outta here!!

Whoa! You just get yourself outta this mess, big boy!

Shut up!! I am NOT in a mess! Its just that..that..S-Sa-Sanamm!! Ughh!!

Ah. So you have started calling her by her name now! Nice going there!

So? She is my wife now!! My wife! What else should I call her?!

Begum Jaan! Don't tell me you forgot that!

No! I haven't! But SHE has!!

Well. Umm. Then make her remember. Simple.

What the hell is her problem?! Can't she just..just..understand?! Ughhh!!

Understand? What? That she is messing up your mind? His Jallad Jinn's?!

No! That I..that I...Ughh. That she is my wife now!

Dude. Those intense looks you keep giving her, just don't seem to work all the time. Try something harder!

Oh ya?! And she?! What does she do? Goes to h..h..him! Just like that?!

Him? Your bro?! Oh come on! He is just her friend! Chill!

No!! He loves her!!

Oh is it? And she? Does she?

Yes!! She does! Didn't you just see them? So close to each other..why is she close to him?!

Because, YOU aren't!

She hates me!! Why would she come close to..me?!!

How do you know she hates you?!

Because she has told me way too many times! That she..she..h ha hates me!! SHE HATES ME!!

So, what;s the problem here? She hates you, you hate her...

I don't HATE her!!!

Then, instead of talking to me, why don't you tell her?

Why should I tell her?! Can't she see? Can't she see that it hurts me to see her with someone else? Can't she see I can't tolerate anyone close to her? Can't she just see?? CAN'T SHE?!!!

Why should she? She already told you she HATES you!!

I don't care!! I don't care if she hates me! I don't care if she hurts me! I don't care if she tells me she hates me! I JUST DON'T CARE!! Ughhh!!!

Then what the hell do you actually care?! You care about nothing! Why would she care about you?!

Yeah. why would she care? Why would she? If she doesn't care about anything, why did she marry me?!!

You told her already. FOR MONEY!!

And she din't say anything too! That means..

That means you are a dumbass!!


Me? ME a dumbass?! She is!! She just don't wanna understand! Why is she doing this to me?!! Ugh!

You are a bigger dumbass! You don't even know what is she doing to you?! Ha!

Oh just shut up! What was all that, wiping tears and all? She doesn't understand that too?!

Oh, you could be at that place too, Dumb..oh no no! The Messed Up!

Why should I want to be on that place?! When she doesn't want me to be on that place?!

Just get this clear. Really? You DON'T wanna be on that place?! Stop fooling you Mr Messy!

What does it matter, if I want or not! She doesn't want! That's it!

So you admit, you WANT?! Huh? Is it? Wow, so do we have a confession here?!

Ughh!! Shut up..you!! You only mess up me more!

No man! SHE only messes you more! And you actually like getting messed up by HER! I can see that!!

Yes!! Yes!! YES! She messes up me! Yes! She messes up my mind like no one did!

Ooh. Another confession?!

She messes up me and then enjoys it! She was having "takleef" when I was dancing with her! Why? She din't have that "takleef" when he was WIPING HER TEARS??!!! UGHHH!!!! WHY?? WHY?!!

DAMN! SHE MESSES YOU UP WAY TOO MUCH! DOES SHE KNOW THAT?! Oh, no! She doesn't! YET! Ugh. Dumbo you are!

How would she know that?!! HOW?! Does she even try to understand what I feel? Does she even looks at me that way?! Does she?!! DOES SHE?!!!

She isn't a mind reader, I guess. I could come up with that only. Sorry!

She needs to know!! She needs to see! That I can't see her with anyone else! Can't see anyone, close to her that way. ANYONE! I can't just see anyone else touching her like..like THAT! I can't see anyone else doing all that..that I...

Why dude? Why such desperation? I thought you were over her..?!!

"I WAS NEVER OVER HER!! NEVER!! NEVER EVER!! I LOVE HER! I STILL LOVE HER! I WILL LOVE HER! EVEN IF SHE H-HA-HATES ME! EVEN IF IT HURTS ME TO LOVE HER SO MUCH! EVEN IF SHE DOESN'T CARE! EVEN IF I PRETEND I HATE HER! EVEN IF SHE KEEPS MESSING UP MY MIND LIKE SHE ALWAYS DOES! EVEN IF IT DOESN'T MATTER TO HER! EVEN IF I DON'T MATTER TO HER! EVEN IF I PRETEND SHE DOESN'T MATTER TO ME! BUT SHE MATTERS TO ME! SHE MATTERS TO ME LIKE NO ONE EVER DID! SHE MATTERS TO ME LIKE I NEVER DID TO ME! SHE MATTERS TO ME CAUSE SHE COMPLETES ME! SHE COMPLETES ME BECAUSE I WAS NEVER COMPLETE. EVEN WHEN I HATED HER, I COULDN'T STOP HATING HER. SHE WAS THE ONE WHO I SAVED. SHE WAS THE ONE WHO SAVED ME! SHE WAS THE ONE WHO CALLED ME! SHE WAS THE ONE WHO CARED ABOUT I WAS BORN! SHE WAS THE ONE WHO STOPPED ME FROM SOMETHING! SHE WAS THE ONE FOR WHOM I STOPPED SOMETHING FOR FIRST TIME! SHE WAS THE ONE I COULDN'T GET MY EYES OFF! SHE WAS THE ONE WHO FIRE HAS BURNED ME! SHE WAS THE ONE WHOM I COUDN'T HATE EVEN WHEN I WANTED TO.

SHE IS THE ONE WHOM I LOVE, EVEN WHEN I DIN'T WANT TO!

AND I HATE! I HATE MYSELF TO LOVE HER SO MUCH! I HATE MYSLEF TO LOVE YOU SO MUCH, SANAM! I HATE THAT I LOVE YOU, SANAM!! I HATE MYSELF..."

And he broke down finally, realising it was only him whom he was talking to..


-The End-

Thats all fellas! DO tell me how was it! :)

Edited by Prags_Sociopath - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Res!
Unres!
Sabra ka phal sach much meetha hai😛
Finally we've got a jelly ARI!
Wonderful!
Edited by subhkisonu - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Res..

edited----

you know what? i wish i could quote the lines i loved...but going to do that i found i simply live each of the lines n words there!! i simply couldnot choose just 2/3 as my fav8. as i heart each part of the piece.❤️
really praggu this is amazing!! you're just soo soo good with all this alter egos!!👏

Aahil n his thought..his mind has got a whole new lease of life through your writing. his angst...pain...love...hate...jealousy...care..everything comes to life in all its brilliant colour n i soo love it the way you treat the whole self confession thing!!! 👏

you know you should not write once but daily u should keep delivering your alter ego dose. 😉

honestly...your take reveals Aahil n his mind from completely a different angle n i just adore the way it exposes his thoughts n want. truly awesome dear!!⭐️

Thanks so much for the pm. n really sorry for late unres. but i was bit busy. please dont mind dear. :(
Edited by Paint.It.BlacK. - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Res again :(
Don't be mad just...

Take that red towel and spank me for all I care ;)

Unres ;)

"I WAS NEVER OVER HER!! NEVER!! NEVER EVER!! I LOVE HER! I STILL LOVE HER! I WILL LOVE HER! EVEN IF SHE H-HA-HATES ME! EVEN IF IT HURTS ME TO LOVE HER SO MUCH! EVEN IF SHE DOESN'T CARE! EVEN IF I PRETEND I HATE HER! EVEN IF SHE KEEPS MESSING UP MY MIND LIKE SHE ALWAYS DOES! EVEN IF IT DOESN'T MATTER TO HER! EVEN IF I DON'T MATTER TO HER! EVEN IF I PRETEND SHE DOESN'T MATTER TO ME! BUT SHE MATTERS TO ME! SHE MATTERS TO ME LIKE NO ONE EVER DID! SHE MATTERS TO ME LIKE I NEVER DID TO ME! SHE MATTERS TO ME CAUSE SHE COMPLETES ME! SHE COMPLETES ME BECAUSE I WAS NEVER COMPLETE. EVEN WHEN I HATED HER, I COULDN'T STOP HATING HER. SHE WAS THE ONE WHO I SAVED. SHE WAS THE ONE WHO SAVED ME! SHE WAS THE ONE WHO CALLED ME! SHE WAS THE ONE WHO CARED ABOUT I WAS BORN! SHE WAS THE ONE WHO STOPPED ME FROM SOMETHING! SHE WAS THE ONE FOR WHOM I STOPPED SOMETHING FOR FIRST TIME! SHE WAS THE ONE I COULDN'T GET MY EYES OFF! SHE WAS THE ONE WHO FIRE HAS BURNED ME! SHE WAS THE ONE WHOM I COUDN'T HATE EVEN WHEN I WANTED TO.

SHE IS THE ONE WHOM I LOVE, EVEN WHEN I DIN'T WANT TO!

AND I HATE! I HATE MYSELF TO LOVE HER SO MUCH! I HATE MYSLEF TO LOVE YOU SO MUCH, SANAM! I HATE THAT I LOVE YOU, SANAM!! I HATE MYSELF..."

THIS!!!!! Poetic justice! Oh my god Pragguu what was this, I'm in awe right now, jaw dropped and everything else! I mean you convey his thoughts to the T if this was for marks I would so give you 100%. wow!!! I can't believe it took me so long to read this, really! I don't know if I'll ever be able to forgive myself. You my darling complete me! With your stories and jealous ARI! Love love love! I feel like I'm sitting down with the queen when I'm reading your stories, no lie. Ooh I'm like all jellied inside now. Aahil is doing these weird things to me inside 😆 First the bare torso with the red towel and now this! Can I just study your brain for a second and find out where these masterpieces see to come from! Pretty please :) with puppy eyes.

Once again I'm so sorry for the late reply I'm kicking myself right now

Love you :*



Edited by Dhanesh27 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
This was superbly angsty. I loved the intensity.
Edited by MrDarcyfan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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YASS IM ON THE PAGE!!!


NOOO

WHY IS MY BB SAD IN FICTION TOO???

I like the title tho.

She. Is. Mine.

Aahil is a very possessive mofo isn't he.

mmm.

SANAM IT IS HURTING HIM YOU STUPIDLY SMART AND BEAUTIFUL WOMAN CAN YOU NOT SEE HOW DAMAGED MY BAE IS PLS GIVE HIM LOVE SHOWER HIM WITH LOVE HE NEEDS IT MORE THAN REHAAN.

@the bold.

HOLD DA f**k UP

SO MANY FEELINGS

SO MANY

FEELINGS

HOW DO YOU DO THIS

I ONLY JUST RECOVERED FROM YOUR POEM THING

STOP DOING THIS

NO ACTUAL KEEP GOING

THIS IS BEAUTIFUL

/SHE COMPLETES HIM/

UGHHH FEEELIINGSS.

He broke down my bb why?

Well I can guess why but.

BB NO DON'T CRY

THIS IS BEAUTIFUL.

Edited by suds. - 11 years ago

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