||~ The Sunshine of My life #4 AsYa FF ~||Part37 PG130 15/06/14 - Page 99

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Posted: 11 years ago
There was a smile on my face through out the chap!!!
Starting from Asad's diary, sneaking into zoya's room, his concern n love for his ammi and lastly with their sunshine...it was all so awesome.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sweet4shehzadi

Amazing
Brilliant
Fantastic
Wonderful update
Beautifully written
Ya allah whats wrong with asad
You are awesome writer dear
Coninue it ASAP
Thanks for pm so sweet of you


Thanks dear.

Asad will be fine, he has Zoya :)

@indu333 - Thanks dear.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Linsie

nice moment... all the closeness...

now the truth is going to be out in the next chapter...

about zoya...


Who said truth is going to be out 😛
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: vinita459

First accept my apologies for commenting so late :(
Just trying to catch up on my readings
This was a love chapter as usual.
I've told you many times earlier also but this is one of my favorite ff
I love the way AsYa's relationship is growing
Asad had changed tremendously
His diary to Ayesha was a good read
Dinner date 😳
Okay what happened in the precap ...why is he angry
Update soon please :)


No problems Vinita I understand, I am not caught up with reading too so many FF's LOL.

Thanks for saying that, this is my first ever AsYa FF and I'm learning my ropes as I write, its just touching how much encouragement I get, I hope that continues because I've found love for writing now.

It's just an Asad moment 😆 no worries.


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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: gudiyanrani143

awesome part...luv how asad understands zoya...

precap...sum twist coming up ahead i guess...hope asad doesnt hurt zoya...
waiting for d next update...u r an awesome writer...:D


Thanks dear 😊

Do you think Asad can hurt Zoya?😛
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: aseelashah

Wow Ankie the update was amazingly beautiful

i love every bit of it
Asad dilu convo was beautiful
That letter was mind blowing
And all ASYA scenes were breath taking😳

Aahana darling she is such a pyaari kid

she is so cute

Precap is scary

Pls update soon

Thanks for pm




Thanks dear, glad you liked it 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: day_lily

There was a smile on my face through out the chap!!!

Starting from Asad's diary, sneaking into zoya's room, his concern n love for his ammi and lastly with their sunshine...it was all so awesome.


I am glad it made you smile 😊 efforts paid off. It was meant to be a light read and insight into a normal day of AsYa
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Divya.S.R

Res 😆

Unres

Asad diary convo with Ayesha was beautiful... 😊
He wanted to voice everything he felt, everything he went through to Zoya, not just because he wanted to, but because she deserved it. 👏

It's become a habit for him to go and check on Zoya and Aahana.. 😊
Love Asad and Dilshad's bonding.. How he notices if anything troubles her.. and how she knows what goes on in his mind... 👏😃
I want to give her the world Ammi, make life a bed of roses for her.. unhone bahut takleef sahi hai ab tak, mai chahta hun ki mai unhe har khushi dun.. 😳
"Ye humari family ki ring hai Asad, it's a heirloom and I want you to give it to Zoya hmm?" Dilshad smiled indicatively. Ammijaan wants her son to propose to Zoya... 🤗

Hahahaa.. Asad and Aahana are cute when they fight.. 😆
So to-be-Mrs.Asad Ahmed Khan Is lost in admiring her to be room and her future.. 😳
Asad and his online ordering.. 🤣
Romantic Asad Ahmed Khan is too cute... 😳
Well not only Romantic.. He has turned naughty too.. 😆
I get it.. She doesn't want any one to feel that she is there to replace Ayesha, or so.. She still is clueless how to behave around that topic without hurting anyone's sentiments...
Love the way Asad gave her assured her and also made her feel special and loved.. 😳👏

hehhee.. she feels awkward going out with him, without Aahana, as normal couple.. 😆
though Asad understands he can't help but feel miffed and sad..
Zoya better know she has 2 stubborn and moody kids (Asad and Aahana) to deal with... 😆
So now they are going out.. I think he plans on proposing.. and the dress he has left for her is the one he saw her staring at in the mall... 😳


Oh No.. after a beautiful update.. such a shocking precap!!! 😲
oh please let it not be something too bad.. don't separate them.. 😭


Zoya doesn't feel awkward going out for a date with him.. she's obviously as much in love with him as he is with her. Zoya is a bindaas girl so its certainly not that. It's just that a major part of her is trying to cope with being a mother. She didn't get 9 months to prepare herself, she's just suddenly now responsible for a child too.. and the recent events have also shaken her a little.. so she ends up being around Aahana more than Asad..This is something I'll be raising in the next update.

Trust me with AsYa 😳

And thanks a ton for liking and commenting.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -Mrinalini-

Finally un-reserving! 😳

Asad ki Diary Entry! Masha-Allah! I'm really loving the fact that he is moving on with his life but not forgetting Ayesha's value in his life. Ayesha has been a friend and a companion and thus, no one can take her place in his heart. EXACTLY he has to move on from her,but her memories and her importance shall always guide him. Glad you liked it.

But today he wanted it to be the last day he wrote in it, the last day he chose to hide his feelings by using it as his shield. He didn't want to hide anymore, he didn't want to stay silent anymore. He wanted to voice everything he felt, everything he went through to Zoya, not just because he wanted to, but because she deserved it.

CAN I HUG YOU FOR THIS ANKI? 🤗 So much of dignity, compassion and love this guy has for Zoya! ❤️*hugs back to you* He is a loving man, always has been, Zoya's love just got the best out of him..

I completely adored Asad and Dilshad conversation! 👏 Specially when Asad shocked Dilshad by mentioning Aahana's Nikaah! 😲 Haha yeah, was hard for him but he got emotional

Asad heard soft knocks on his door and smiled, it had to be his angel. He shut his closet and opened the door to see Zoya and Aahana standing outside, with Aahana only in a pair of t shirt and a nappy on which made Asad laugh at her. He let them in and kissed Zoya on her cheek whispering a Good Morning, to which she blushed and kissed him back swiftly.

This was Aww-able! ❤️ Asad and Zoya's relation is so pure and hats of to you Anki that this story is beyond flawless! ❤️

Their conversation was so beautiful and Zoya being shocked and guilty was well justified! 👏 Aww.. Asad... Well explained! 👏 Chalo, you deserve a hug from me for this! 🤗

Oooh!! DATE NIGHT! 😉

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.Zoya's feelings, apart from the fact that she loves Asad, haven't found their way yet, because she's been overwhelmed. All that and more coming in the next few updates.
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OKAY! W*F IS THE PRECAP ABOUT? 😲 😡 NOW KYA HUA? 😲

Continue soon Anki...😳 Or else I'll get gussa! 😡 I don't think I am scared 😆 And don't worry about precap 😛

Love you! ❤️
LOADS of love back to you 😃
Mrina

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: SleepingBeauty.

Heyy!!
Okay so im finally here to edit this. :P The update was sooo good! Loveeed how asad does stuffs for Zoya and how zoya doesnt want him to do something out of the way for her like removing Ayesha's potrait. I really love Zoya's pov about how Ayesha was is and always will be asad's first wife and Aahana ki mom. She will always hold a place in their heart so she doesnt want them to go out of the way just to make her happy and remove that picture.
And what Asad said was something that touched my heart. He loves her soo much and he is finally showing it! yayy
And yayyy he is going to propose finally!! But then u said once they get married the story ends that means either they arent getting married or the ff is ending :|


HELLO Ana 😃

Glad you like the update

Asad wants to go out of his way to make her secure, but all that makes Zoya feel lost and guilty because she's accepted Asad with Ayesha's memories knowing they make him what he is. But now she understands the deeper meaning of his removing it..

FF is going to end someday .. but its not happening in the next 5 updates at least.. so don't worry. I am not rushing to the end, I will take my time.. But yeah the story has definitely turned to its last lap.

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