||~ The Sunshine of My life #4 AsYa FF ~||Part37 PG130 15/06/14 - Page 8

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey Ankita,

First, I hope you are feeling better now. And thank you for giving such a long and lovely update. Totally loved it. One of my favorite chapter so far. Aanu called Zoe 'mi' in front of Asad. This is what I was doing [:D/] Zoya told him the true reason for her leaving. And oh my god the last line 'let's stop your crazy Ammi from leaving' 😳

Please, I hope he does tell her his true feeling on time. I really want to see them get married. And then read about their life after marriage.

I hope you update the next part soon.

Vinita
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I am reading this part for the forth time n am still not satisfied. its amazing .just don't have words to describe. actually am visualizing every scene n dialogue. just awesome 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome update
Glad to hear that u r better now
Nice asad zoya convo
Both love each other but want other to say first
Aahana is really a Cupid for her parents
Dilshad believed that zoya can't leave. I agreed with her that as a lover zoya can leave but as a mother she can't.
Aahana took first step & both asya were happy
Both thought they won a jackpot
Asad was surprised to hear that aahana called zoya Ammi
She accepted her before him
Zoya apologies asad for ruined his happy moment & told him that this is the reason she wants to go
Dilshad told asad that zoya love him & want to be with him only
Asad finally felt complete & hugged aahana
Now he & his Cupid daughter on mission to stop zoya for leaving them
I knew that u updated once in a week but this time plz update as soon as u can
Curious to know how asad stop her
Thanks for pm
Congratulations for new thread
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Congrats for the new thread.🥳
Coming to the update i am speechless.
Beautifully written.
Aaanu called zoya Mi in front of asad.
OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!
So asad is going to stop zoya.
Wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Waiting for next part eagerly.
Thanx for the pm. Take care.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#77
zoya struggling aahana emotions...

she call her mi...

she got child... and now leaving er behind...


Dilshad knows... zoya will never be able to leave
aahana... this will bring them
together...

Asad bottle up...all the feeling now he wants to stay...
but zoya just want to leave...
he wants sign... zoya is very hurt...


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kese krun comment??😕
chalo end se start krti hun

Dillu ne aqal daal hi di sheru k demagh main
misunderstanding almost over honay wali hai 😳

Turning to Zoya she put her hands out and exclaimed," Mi .. mi.."

Zoya smiled at her affectionately and bent forward to take her baby in her arms. But stopped midway when she realized what had really happened.


Highlighted part of this update ^^^^^^^^^^

pls sb se zyaa Cutuuu moment of the update ws:

Aahana who had gotten down from her father's arms to play around, was standing on her tiny feet, without any support, taking careful and unbalanced steps and laughing happily at her success.


Pls i like this scene too:

Asad laughed and turned to look at Zoya who was gazing at them tearfully. Asad smiled and impulsively took her into a hug along with Aahana..


"Oh God Mr Khan not again.. stop being the overprotective idiot now at least.." Zoya said her voice muffled in his arms..❤️


har scene ese describe kia ap ne jese meri ankhon k samnay live ho raha hai ..

👏 👏 👏 👏 👏
🤗
Update sooninsh next part plz 😳










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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wowww congrts fr new thread...

That was an awesummm update...
Truely ahana is the best cupid they could get...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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U dnt know how much i love this..its just brilliant..no words..best chapter

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