||~ The Sunshine of My life #4 AsYa FF ~||Part37 PG130 15/06/14 - Page 70

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Posted: 11 years ago

I was the 124th like! 😳


First and foremost I love traditional, cheesy, cliched romance, but this chapter was every bit realist as well. A couple relishing moments of confession, along with life's occurrences simultaneously and; a little baby(adorable) added to the equation.


Zoya and Aahana bonding was cuteness personified. - How do you do this ?


"Zoya smiled to herself seeing Aahana sleeping in her cot, that Asad had shifted to her room."


I loved this gesture! ❤️


"She found it extremely adorable that Asad used Aahana as an excuse to keep coming into her room, saying that Zoya wasn't too well to take care of her all by herself."


I'm blushing, so you can derive a conclusion on that. ☺️


Dilshad and Zoya's conversation: I'm sure you are already aware of my love for Dilshad. 😎


Asad will move Heaven and Earth to protect his family and ensure their safety, his reaction, response and anxiety was natural, so was his outburst when he got home. Zoya a liberated soul, an imperfectly perfect partner just as Asad is, would be able to rid him of his insecurities with her love and devotion when his fate decides to stop conspiring against him, just as he would to her. Her understanding is endearing, they are one unit - so it comes naturally.


"Just look at her scowling at me!"


"Asad scowled at her, but Zoya understanding the meaning of her actions burst out laughing and held her with both her arms, cuddling her tightly and kissed her cheek frequently."


Well, Mr. Khan she is here to give you a complex. - And I totally approve! 👏


Najma, I wanted you out of there sooner, but you were cute too. 😛


Massaging his head, and everything that followed after was AMAZINGLY AWESOME. I adored everything thereafter - wouldn't want to quote half the chapter, honestly loved the little details. ❤️ *sigh*


PRECAP: PAST PAST PAST REVEAL YOURSELF SOON SO ZOYA COULD MOVE ON OR WHATEVER ELSE YOU SEE SUITABLE. 🤣

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: p_s05

I was the 124th like! 😳


First and foremost I love traditional, cheesy, cliched romance, but this chapter was every bit realist as well. A couple relishing moments of confession, along with life's occurrences simultaneously and; a little baby(adorable) added to the equation.


Zoya and Aahana bonding was cuteness personified. - How do you do this ?


"Zoya smiled to herself seeing Aahana sleeping in her cot, that Asad had shifted to her room."


I loved this gesture! ❤️


"She found it extremely adorable that Asad used Aahana as an excuse to keep coming into her room, saying that Zoya wasn't too well to take care of her all by herself."


I'm blushing, so you can derive a conclusion on that. ☺️


Dilshad and Zoya's conversation: I'm sure you are already aware of my love for Dilshad. 😎


Asad will move Heaven and Earth to protect his family and ensure their safety, his reaction, response and anxiety was natural, so was his outburst when he got home. Zoya a liberated soul, an imperfectly perfect partner just as Asad is, would be able to rid him of his insecurities with her love and devotion when his faith decides to stop conspiring against him, just as he would to her. Her understanding is endearing, they are one unit - so it comes naturally.


"Just look at her scowling at me!"


"Asad scowled at her, but Zoya understanding the meaning of her actions burst out laughing and held her with both her arms, cuddling her tightly and kissed her cheek frequently."


Well, Mr. Khan she is here to give you a complex. - And I totally approve! 👏


Najma, I wanted you out of there sooner, but you were cute too. 😛


Massaging his head, and everything that followed after was AMAZINGLY AWESOME. I adored everything thereafter - wouldn't want to quote half the chapter, honestly loved the little details. ❤️ *sigh*


PRECAP: PAST PAST PAST REVEAL YOURSELF SOON SO ZOYA COULD MOVE ON OR WHATEVER ELSE YOU SEE SUITABLE. 🤣


I am a fan of traditional, cheesy romance, not that I am against the contemporary and more physical romance, but somehow its just not my type 😆 It makes the relation too shallow.

I am glad you like the part, the details and the cuteness, its fun writing.

Zoya's basic characteristic is to understand, give and be selfless. Her maturity also comes from the fact that she now thinks and acts like a parent.

What did you mean for the precap? I don't understand 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Oh no! The first comment was one on the run and I omitted one of the largest developments of AsYa's relationship, physical intimacy - The First Kiss! Yay! - The first of many, I hope. 😉 😆


Of course contemporary romance and intimacy is charming and enchanting, while traditional romance has significance and profoundness. ❤️


"And the next moment she felt his warm lips on her cool ones. She pulled him closer, wrapping her arms around his broad shoulders. The kiss was soft, yet urgent, loving yet not demanding. They explored each other..every moment, every touch, every sigh, awakening feelings within them that both didn't know they had in them. It was her first kiss her first love, and she felt she was driven away to an unknown world."

That was beautifully written, passionate and chaste.


""I should go I guess, don't want to end up doing anything ... uhm more?" he said, giving her a longing, deep stare, expecting her to recede.


Was that introverted Asad's concern, am I dreaming? 😆 Love surely is redefining!


But she wasn't a girl used to being timid and shy for too long," We won't, I trust us.."


"But I don't" Asad said kissing the side of her head," I do for the both of us," she retorted softly and pulled him above her again, making him lie on her chest. And they slept, assured by each other's strength, happy at every new evolvement in their relationship.. and just living that very moment, not worrying about what was to come."


I just loved that! Unfortunately, I no longer trust Asad because he had reason for wanting to leave! I hope Zoe has enough trust for the both of them. 😛 🤣 On a serious note, that conversation was charming, they are just too damn adorable.


And they slept in bliss...


Coming to the precap, QH wasn't for the faint hearted and so is AsYa based fiction. Soo keeping that in mind I'll expect the unexpected and I'll also have you know, that the precap didnt disturb me, I live on the calm side of life - I believe in Newton's Third Law of Action and Reaction - for every action there is an equal and opposite reaction, I'll react after the chapter. 😉 😆



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Posted: 11 years ago
wonderfull n amazing...
asad is finding zoya father...
asad is worried for his family especially zoya n ahana...
ahana is the cutest...
luv the cute moment n the bonding between asad zoya n ahana...
the precap is amazing n very interesting...
fabulous...
totally imagine the whole scene...
asya share their first kiss...
wonderfull...
eagerly waiting for the next part...
thx fr the pm n do continue soon n do pm me...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Ankita.M


AWW Mrin thanks a ton 😃 Glad you like the update. Writing these moments is fun. I hope everyone enjoys them as much.


EVERYONE WILL! 😳 Coz, after all it's you who is writing! 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
The update was superb!!
The growth in their relationship cannot be explained with words!!!
Awesome!!
and the kiss..

that was so beautifully written!! 👏

and Aanu is my all time favorite 😉

lovely update 👍🏼


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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome as always...😳
Loved it alot spcly...Asya relationship's growth...wonderful...they understand each other so well now..they do a proper conversation and share everything with each other...👏⭐️

Zoya is really lucky to have a family who loves her like their own..😳😃

haww...asad jealous of Aahana..😆
Aahana was cutest in the update...😳..like always..😉😆

THEY KISSED...OMG..☺️

precap...please Asad ..Zoya k past ko Find out karo...mujhe aap dono ki shaadi dekhni hai,..😭..😆😆...i guessed right or Zoya is just doing her another silly drama..😕😆😆

once again..i loved the update...😃
thanks for pm ..and update soon...😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
Superbly Amazing update..
Love the whole update..
Beautifully written..
AsYa moments was AWESOME..
Awww they kissed..Loved it..
Continue soon..
Thnx for PM..







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Posted: 11 years ago
Lovely emotional update... and asya kiss...confident

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