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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -Aditi.

Wohho!! Finally Mr. Khan and would be Mrs. Khan confessed their feelingz

Zoya ...such a silly girl...did not understand anything

Aww asya romance is the best part of the update

Aanu such a cutie...i love her part with her parents

Uffo they again started fighting...kabhi nHi sudhrenge yeah

No Ankita it was nothing lyk dragging the story...i loved the way they confessed

But i m confused about one thing..dilshad had said that MUJHE YAKEEN HAI K MERI AHAANA ZARUR KUCH KAREGI

But aanu did nothing to bring them closer


A child cant do anything directly.. Dilshad had meant that because of Aahana they will come closer which they did... And that Zoya's love as a mother for her wont let her go.. And it didn't.. Thats what it meant.
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow fabulous...
amazing n luv it...
asad told all his feeling n hw much he loves zoya...
zoya also told asad she loves him...
beautifully written...
totally imagine the while scene...
ahana is the most cutest n hw she is with her parents...
eagerly waiting for the next part...
thx fr the pm n do continue soon n do pm me...
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Posted: 11 years ago
chapter 32
Such a lovely part!!!!!
A lil misunderstanding some, fears comming true and he might get back to pushing her away
I was soo scared for aahanaa what she must have gone thruu No one was there for a lil girll
Am happy the confession didnt come soo soon thought 😳😆
I love twists😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Ankita.M


Last time cheat kiya toh itna bada comment, aaj cheat nahi kiya and itna chota sa comment? Not fair 😛😆


Awww... Abhi I'm keeping lamba comments for the agla chapter. You'll get super lamba comments. 😃

JUST KIDDING! Arey I read from phone isliye chhota comment tha...

Now giving lamba comment for you meri jaan! 🤗

*scroll down*
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Posted: 11 years ago
Aa gayi main tere lambe comment ke saath! 😆
I'm so loving Asad's concern and love towards Zoya. I'm seeing a new side of Abbu Ahmed Khan. 😳 I'm sure he will deal with whoever is responsible for this mishap! 😡

Did you get so angry at me Zoya.. that you gave me the biggest scare of my life.. Aisa badla lete hai?

Oye hoye hoye! 😳 Kya baat hai Mr. Khan? Aap to dialogue maarne lage! 😉 But soti hui Zoya se? 😛

AWWW... I LOVE YOU ZOYA! Poor thing has been through such a tough life and now she confessed to him that she loves him and she doesn't want to leave Aahana and go coz she is her Ammi! 😃

I can't go away Mr Khan. You may never accept me, may never love me the way I do.. It's okay Mr Khan, I'll bear it all. But I can't leave you behind, I can't leave my daughter behind. And even if it hurts you, the truth is.. that she is my daughter, and I won't let anyone change that. I know you must be angry, probably you think I am responsible for what happened, and you're right... I am.. So I am sorry, but let me stay.. for Aahana?

TRULY THE BEST DIALOGUE! 👏

Just Aahana? Not me?

CAN I JUST KISS HIM ALREADY????? 😃 asdfghjkl EEPSSS!

"Yes Zoya.. you will stay back for Aahana..because you ARE her Ammi..her silly Ammi.." Asad whispered, now caressing her face.

"Yes I am.." she agreed but looked away. He had agreed, he acknowledged her as Aahana's Ammi.. it should have made her happy.. but it felt incomplete.

"But not until you marry me.." Asad whispered hoping for a better reaction.

"Yes, if I have to stay back, and for Aahana, it would be best if we marry.." Zoya agreed still not looking at him.


Can it get anymore cuter Anki? 😳 I'm totally loving this conversation!

AND FINALLY THE MOST AWAITED MOMENT!

ASAD'S CONFESSION 🥳

"You yet didn't say it.."

"What?"

"What you wanted to hear from me, which I finally did.. but what about you?" he asked frowning.

"You took so long to realize it, longer to accept it, and even longer to confess it. You made me wait so long Mr Khan, can't you wait a little longer to hear it?" Zoya teased him, hoping to annoy him.


OMG! You are truly the only writer who can get me to giggle in an emotional scene! Too cute to handle! 😳

"I love you Mr Khan.." she confessed finally, not wanting to waste a minute longer.

Asad looked at her emotionally, but masked his happiness," Do you love me because I am Aahana's Abu?" he threw her question back at her.

She scowled at him, understanding he didn't mean it, when she saw the naughty glint in his eyes," You're taking advantage of the fact that I am all laid up in this hospital bed, tubes attached to me, all bandaged that I can't even hit you.. haina?" she asked angrily with a pout.

He nodded," You got that right," he said sarcastically and then laughed pulling her into his arms again.


CUTENESS PERSONIFIED! 😳

"What a copy cat.." he remarked," Miss Farooqui couldn't come up with anything unusual?"

Did Asad actually say this? Mr. Asad Ahmed Khan???? REALLY? 😲 🤣

"Mai buddha hun?" he asked angrily.

"Yes buddhe and so slow..koi itna time leta hai apne pyar ka izhar karne ke liye?"

"Aap abhi tak yahi hai na?.. Aise keh rahi hai jaise New York pahunch gayi thi..Aur waise aap bhi kuch kam nahi hai, mujhe bada lecture karti hai.. face your feelings Mr Khan, aur khud New York bhaag rahi thi.."

"Toh aap mere jaana ka wait kar rahe the?"

"Haan socha tha aap New York chali jayengi, phir aapke peeche peeche aaunga manane.. another one from your films. Aur waise bhi New York kabhi dekha nahi hai, issi bahane trip bhi ho jaata."

"Mai New York jaane ka ek bahaana hun Mr Khan?"

"Bilkul.. aapko kya laga.."


Anki.. I swear, I wanna give you a tight jhappi for this update! 🤗

I'm so waiting for the HOSPITAL ROMANCE!

Continue super soon *pretty please* *batting my eyelashes at you* batting eyelashes

Love you so much! ❤️ Hope you're happy with the comments now! 😉

Rock on! rock on!

Mrina <3
Edited by -Mrinalini- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Chp 33

This was the cutestest proposal everr 😳
Wow soo lonnggg confessionnn!!!!!!!!!!!everything saidd kuchh bhi nahi choda 😳
And in betweenn anuu ka 'Mi' 'MI' sounded so sweet 😳

Buddhaaa asad 😲🤣

I cant beleive asad is gng to romance ☺️

Eagerly waitingg for next part 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
hayyye hayyye hayyyeee hayyyeee so so so so so so sooo romantic at the sametime extremely emotional n loving!


thoda uncensored version bhi dijiye na hum jaiso ko😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: shanakyasharan

hayyye hayyye hayyyeee hayyyeee so so so so so so sooo romantic at the sametime extremely emotional n loving!


thoda uncensored version bhi dijiye na hum jaiso ko😆


Itne time baad ek comment diya woh bhi itna chota sa? that's not fair. It really isn't..

Sorry but as a writer I have some limitations, I can write romantic moments, and of course that would border on a bit of subtle intimacy.. but I can't write elaborate or graphic romantic moments because I don't feel for it. 😊 So in this FF or my future stories, that is something I consciously won't write.
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Posted: 11 years ago
i unresd my comment at 48 and pm me
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -Mrinalini-

Aa gayi main tere lambe comment ke saath! 😆

I'm so loving Asad's concern and love towards Zoya. I'm seeing a new side of Abbu Ahmed Khan. 😳 I'm sure he will deal with whoever is responsible for this mishap! 😡

Did you get so angry at me Zoya.. that you gave me the biggest scare of my life.. Aisa badla lete hai?

Oye hoye hoye! 😳 Kya baat hai Mr. Khan? Aap to dialogue maarne lage! 😉 But soti hui Zoya se? 😛

AWWW... I LOVE YOU ZOYA! Poor thing has been through such a tough life and now she confessed to him that she loves him and she doesn't want to leave Aahana and go coz she is her Ammi! 😃

I can't go away Mr Khan. You may never accept me, may never love me the way I do.. It's okay Mr Khan, I'll bear it all. But I can't leave you behind, I can't leave my daughter behind. And even if it hurts you, the truth is.. that she is my daughter, and I won't let anyone change that. I know you must be angry, probably you think I am responsible for what happened, and you're right... I am.. So I am sorry, but let me stay.. for Aahana?

TRULY THE BEST DIALOGUE! 👏

Just Aahana? Not me?

CAN I JUST KISS HIM ALREADY????? 😃 asdfghjkl EEPSSS!

"Yes Zoya.. you will stay back for Aahana..because you ARE her Ammi..her silly Ammi.." Asad whispered, now caressing her face.

"Yes I am.." she agreed but looked away. He had agreed, he acknowledged her as Aahana's Ammi.. it should have made her happy.. but it felt incomplete.

"But not until you marry me.." Asad whispered hoping for a better reaction.

"Yes, if I have to stay back, and for Aahana, it would be best if we marry.." Zoya agreed still not looking at him.


Can it get anymore cuter Anki? 😳 I'm totally loving this conversation!

AND FINALLY THE MOST AWAITED MOMENT!

ASAD'S CONFESSION 🥳

"You yet didn't say it.."

"What?"

"What you wanted to hear from me, which I finally did.. but what about you?" he asked frowning.

"You took so long to realize it, longer to accept it, and even longer to confess it. You made me wait so long Mr Khan, can't you wait a little longer to hear it?" Zoya teased him, hoping to annoy him.


OMG! You are truly the only writer who can get me to giggle in an emotional scene! Too cute to handle! 😳

"I love you Mr Khan.." she confessed finally, not wanting to waste a minute longer.

Asad looked at her emotionally, but masked his happiness," Do you love me because I am Aahana's Abu?" he threw her question back at her.

She scowled at him, understanding he didn't mean it, when she saw the naughty glint in his eyes," You're taking advantage of the fact that I am all laid up in this hospital bed, tubes attached to me, all bandaged that I can't even hit you.. haina?" she asked angrily with a pout.

He nodded," You got that right," he said sarcastically and then laughed pulling her into his arms again.


CUTENESS PERSONIFIED! 😳

"What a copy cat.." he remarked," Miss Farooqui couldn't come up with anything unusual?"

Did Asad actually say this? Mr. Asad Ahmed Khan???? REALLY? 😲 🤣

"Mai buddha hun?" he asked angrily.

"Yes buddhe and so slow..koi itna time leta hai apne pyar ka izhar karne ke liye?"

"Aap abhi tak yahi hai na?.. Aise keh rahi hai jaise New York pahunch gayi thi..Aur waise aap bhi kuch kam nahi hai, mujhe bada lecture karti hai.. face your feelings Mr Khan, aur khud New York bhaag rahi thi.."

"Toh aap mere jaana ka wait kar rahe the?"

"Haan socha tha aap New York chali jayengi, phir aapke peeche peeche aaunga manane.. another one from your films. Aur waise bhi New York kabhi dekha nahi hai, issi bahane trip bhi ho jaata."

"Mai New York jaane ka ek bahaana hun Mr Khan?"

"Bilkul.. aapko kya laga.."


Anki.. I swear, I wanna give you a tight jhappi for this update! 🤗

I'm so waiting for the HOSPITAL ROMANCE!

Continue super soon *pretty please* *batting my eyelashes at you* batting eyelashes

Love you so much! ❤️ Hope you're happy with the comments now! 😉

Rock on! rock on!

Mrina <3


AWW thanks Mrin, for this long and adorable comment 🤗 It really means a lot that you like it.

Asad can romance of course, he ain't so akdu also 😆 so he will and he'll surprise you surely. Zoya is a happy girl now, she has whatever she ever wanted, and will get every happiness possible. 😳

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