Sahil SS: Junoon.... Tere Ishq Ka (Part 2 - Page 13) - Page 6

You are doing well; keeping in line with the characters...you should continue...I hope your story continues to build further...You are very talented...just pay attention to your tenses...you keep flipping back and forth between past and present tense in some areas...Keep up the good work.

Lovely it was Nice
A little confused you meant sanam right?
It was good if is possible please pm me
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Update already! It is soo good that I want to keep reading, but I can't since you won't update.

so so so so good!! OMG please update soon! :)

its fabulous...even though i cnt easily understand hindi...but the parts in eng were mindblowing...i mean...usually i dun read os or ss wt hindi wrds...but im so drawn to thiz...pls continue ...tq

Part 2:

"Oh no, Kaha gaye meri ear-rings..." Shazia stamped... "Lateef teekh se doondo...Mujhe woh ear-rings chahiye matlab chahiye..."

Lateef ran in search of her earrings... Shazia smiled with crossed hands, "Pehla step of drama is completed... Abba aage jo bhi hua, meri tareeke se hoga..."

Living Room:

"Lateef... Mila ki nahi..." Shazia screamed...

"Kya hua Shazia...???" Nazia questioned...

"Meri one lakh rupees ki ear-rings nahi mil rahe hai..." She said in her high pitched voice...

"Tumne toh kuch nahi kiya na...??" Khalu questioned...

"Mein woh nahi hoon ki iski cheese churau..." Khala said...

"Kya...??" He questioned...

"Arre wahi jisse pakad ke rakhte hai..."

"Kutta..."

"Arre nahi... woh jinhe bijli dekar ilaaj karte hai..."

"Paagal...!!!" He guessed it...

"Ha wahi... Mein Pagal nahi hoon ki iski cheese churau..."

"Kahi nahi mila hai..." Lateef came there...

"Mujhe meri ear-rings chahiye... Kis ne churaya, abhi pata chal jayega..." She said with an annoyed expression looking at Sanam walking out of kitchen...

"Shazia, humare ghar mein chori kaun karega... Yaha sab apne hi toh hai... Room mein hi hoga ek baar dekhlo..." Nazia suggested...

"Mujhe tumhari advice ki zaroorat nahi hai... Aur waise bhi naukar apne nahi hote..." She looked at Sanam... Sanam's eyes grew in surprise... She couldn't believe that she is accused as thief...

"Lateef jaake Sanam ki room mein check karo..." Shazia ordered...

"Shazia ji, mujhe nahi lagta Sanam aisa kuch kar sakti hai... woh bahot acchi ladki hai..." Asma supported...

"Mujhe kya karna hai, mujhe pata hai... Lateef..." Lateef went to Sanam's room and searched everywhere...

He brought her bag infront of everyone and started searching... He slowly took out ear-rings from her bag surprising everyone and shocking Sanam, "Milgaye..."

Lateef felt bad for Sanam... He knew how Shazia is... It might be her plan... Lateef was hard towards Sanam at beginning but she formed soft corner when he saw Sanam supporting her when Shazia commented on his sexuality...

"Mujhe pata tha... tum jaise do kaudike naukar itne mehenge ear-rings paane k eliye kaha tak gir sakte hai..." Shazia accused...

"Mein ne kuch nahi kiya hai... Mein ne chori nahi kiya hai..." Sanam said with brimming tears...

"Har chor yahi kehta hai... Mein tum jaisi giri hui, gatiya ladki aaj tak nahi dekha hai... Tum jaise logon ko kya karna mein acchi tareeke se jaanti hoon..." She held Sanam's hand and dragged her...

Aahil came and stood before them... Sanam looked at him with teary eyes... Aahil could read those teary eyes... They are asking help, respect and truth... Expectation which he never saw on her face, he could see in her eyes...

"Yeh ho kya raha hai...??" He questioned...

"Iss ne chori kiya hai... Yeh chor hai..." She said...

"Tameez se baat karna seeko Shazia..." Aahil's this sentence shocked everyone around sanding there...

"Bhai..."

"Mein Sanam ke khilaaf ek shabd nahi suna chata hoon... Sanam aisa kuch nahi kar sakti..." Aahil stated... Everyone is surprised and Sanam is shocked hearing this... "Sanam aisi ladki nahi hai..."

"Aap jiske baare mein itna kuch keh rahe hai, uski bag se ear-rings mila hai... Bina chori kiye, ear-rings chalke toh bag mein nahi gaye hoge..." Shazia wanted to make her accusation strong...

"Ear-rings kis ki pair se chalke gaye mujhe pata hai..." He paused confusing Shazia, "Rehaan...!!!"

Rehaan came there with one CD... Everyone are excited to know what is in it... Sanam was in no state to understand what's go on... Only things running in her mind is she is accused for the thing, she didn't do... Shockingly Aahil is supporting her... Her never ending tears showed how hurt she is and this was hit on her self-respect...

Rehaan played CD... Everyone is shocked seeing Shazia entering with ear-rings into Sanam's room... She came out with a smirk... Sanam couldn't understand Shazia's planning against her... Why did she do this to her...??? What is her mistake..??

"Dekh liya ear-rings kis ki pair se waha pahoncha hai..." Aahil said... "Sanam pe sirf mera haq hai... Sanam kahi nahi jaayegi... Iss ghar mein woh rahegi ya nahi, mein decide karunga... Sirf mein aur yeh iss ghar mein rahegi..." He said and left from there... Sanam starred at him with teary and thankful eyes...

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Lovely update dear
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Lovely update
Aahil supported sanam & showed everyone her innocence
He told that sanam is not going anywhere
Plz continue soon
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Idoit shazia
Aww cute aahil he support sanam loved it
Update soon
Hope this time dont be delay plzzz
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Nice Update..