Sahil SS: Junoon.... Tere Ishq Ka (Part 2 - Page 13) - Page 3

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: VindhyaMounika



Asya is eternal...
No one can compete with them...
I can never see Zoya other then Surbhi and Asad other then Karan...
But now Surbhi is Sanam, so never mind seeing her with Karan playing Aahil...

Update will take time...

yep totally agreed thats the main point now sj is sanam n qh revamped hai but kuch logo ko just ksg chaiye opposite sj in evri show
its okay w8ng 4 update
Edited by ...Maha-Srk... - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#22
nyce one do continue and pm eme
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Posted: 11 years ago
#23
Thanx for the pm!
interesting prologue!
continue soonish soon 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#24
interesting..pls continue soon
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
#25
Hey thats really a nice start! loved the prologue!
Continue soon.whenever you get time😳
Waiting,,,,
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Posted: 11 years ago
#26
Love it❤️
Continue soon😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#27
wow..it is really nice story..plz continue
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 1:

Zoya's Room:

She sat on her bed hugging her knees close... Tears flowed down as several things wandered in her head... She has no way to escape from this hell designed by Aahil Raza Ibrahim, heartless person on this earth... He helped her for Badi Ammi's surgery... Until unless she agrees to his terms she cannot leave work... In her view, she cannot leave that hell...

"Yeh lo, ten thousand rupees... Mere Behen ki jaan bachane ke liye..." He threw it to her feet on bed...

She got up from bed... She took bundle of notes into her hands... She walked to him and placed it in his hand, "Mein aapke tarah nahi hoon... Kisi ki jaan ko aur Zindagi ko paison se mawaazna karna aapka fitrat hai, meri nahi..."

He was inflamed with her behavior, "Mein ne tumhare badi ammi ki jaan bachaya aur tu ne mere behen ki... iss mein tumhara ehsaan nahi hai..."

"Meri badi ammi ne mujhe sikhaya hai, jab koi musibat mein hai, bina hichkichaye madatt karna chahiye... Mein ne wahi kiya hai..." She said...

He stared at her with liquid eyes and bossy tone, "Thank you..." He took pause, "Mujhse expect matt karna... Aahil Raza Ibrahim kisi ko bhi shukriyada nahi karta hai..."

"Shukriyada Dil se kiya jata hai... Aap jaise pattar dil insaan se Shukriyada ki umeed nahi rakti hoon..." She said in an unyielding tone...

"Tum naukar ho, yeh matt bolo..." He raised his voice as last thing to bend her down...

"Mein nahi, shayad aap bhool gaye..." She said... He left from there giving a last stone stare for which she got used to by now...

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Next Day Morning: Break Fast Table:

"Lateef...!!!! Lateef...!!" He screamed enough to make Lateef run to him...

"Kya hua Baba...???" He came running...

"Uss Mohtarma Duffer ko kitne baar smjhana padega ki mujhe pudine ki chutney se sakt nafrat hai..." He blasted in compulsive tone...

"Mein abhi bhulake aati hoon..." He turned to call her but he saw her coming with a bowl, "Aagayi...!!! Kitne baar samjhana padega... Baba pudine ki chutney nahi kate hai..."

She walked to his side and placed bowl before him pushing plate to other side, "Yeh bread amlet Rehan Ji ke liye hai... Aapne Oats banana ke liye kaha tha..."

How can she talk like this to me...?? Abb dekho kya karta hoon...' He looked at her, "Mein ne oats nahi Bread amlet maangata..."

"Aapne oats hi kaha tha... Meri pass list mein wahi hai..." She said...

"Tumhare matlab mein jhoot bol raha hoon..." He raised his base voice...

Lateef interrupted there conversation, "Mohaterma, Baba se zubaan ladana band kijiye aur bread amlet layiye..."

Sanam walked into kitchen with bowl of Oats soaked in milk...

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She came after five minutes with hot bread amlet in plate with sauce aside in a small cup... She served him hot in plate...

"Jaldi nahi laa sakte ho... Now I am getting late..." Aahil got up from chair and walked speaking in phone to his clients...

"Yeh kitna khadoos hai... Jaan pooch kar thang kar raha hai..." She murmmered...

"Abb toh sirf do hafta hua hai, aur kuch dino mein gutne tekh kar, sir jhuka ke, naak ragadkar, maafi maangoge..." He thought to himself reaching his car...

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Night:

She sat hugging her knees placing head on them with closed eyes... She needed rest after tiring day... But she has to wait for Laad Saab... She opened her eyes and turned her head to flickering bulb buzzing sound...

"Aagaya Shaitaan..." She filled cubes in ice box...

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Aahil's Room:

He is lying back on his bed... She placed Ice box on the table and turned to leave...

"Rukho..." He got up... She stopped... "Yeh mere shoes nikal ke rack mein rako..."

"Mein yaha ka cook hoon... Aapka naukar nahi..." She said...

"Mein jo kahunga, woh tujhe karna padega..." He said walking to her...

"Aap jo kahoge woh kaam mein karungi... Sirf kaam... Beijathi nahi..." She said...

She stepped out of the room as she felt a tight pull of her drape... She held her drape around her neck... She pre-assumed Aahil's antic with every girl but as she turned Aahil is not there... Her drape got stuck in the door... Aahil got an automatic door... He closed it in rage in which her drape got stuck...

She tried pulling it... But she is not able to free her drape from the closed doors... Seeing the drape stuck in the door, Aahil pressed remote to open it, but remote is dead... It is not working... Aahil is completely pissed off with dead battery... He thought of ignoring it but Sanam's trial of pulling drape made sound with movement of doors...

"Oh God...!! She will never mind her actions... Kud ka duppata nahi sambal sakti..." He walked to door...

It got an option from opening inside... He opened door while she is puling drape from other side... Due to unacknowledged simultaneous action Sanam lost her balance... Before she could hit ground, she felt tight grip on her hand holding her from hurt... Person who always hurts is saving her from hurt, Irony of him...

Her big eyes contacted his... They were lost in each other for a moment... She could never understand him, but what he pretends to be is completely different from what she see in his eyes... It is said that eyes are window of soul... May be his pure soul is hid behind an unwanted mask...

Aahil could never read her eyes... Those big bouncy eyes has everything clear in it expect her wishes... She has nothing for her in life...He always get trapped in her attractive vision... He pulled her to stand but she ended up hitting his muscular chest... They shared an eye-lock... Zoya snapped out of the lock and walked away from there in embarrassment as Aahil stood amused thinking about her eyes...

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Sanam saw Shazia out in the garden with a guy... She walked to window and saw them standing close, holding hands... She saw him leaving from there... Shazia walked inside blushing...

"Aap iss samai, kisi se itne raat ko akele milna acchi ghar ki ladkiyo ke liye sahi nahi hoti..." Sanam explained...

"Mein ne tumse poocha...??? Cook ho, sirf khana paka, meri dimma matt pakao..." She said, "Green tea in my room...!!!" She walked for there...

'Iss ghar mein koi bhi normal nahi hai...' She thought to herself... 'Iss samai Green Tea...!!! Raat ki 1 baje tak inke zaabtaa katam nahi hote, subha k 7 baje se phir se shuru hojate hai...Kis duniya mein phass gayi mein...' She walked into kitchen...

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Pre-cap:

Aahil - Tameez se baat karna seeko Shazia...

Sanam was shocked hearing Aahil... Shazia looked agitated...

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Thanks for reading... Please do like and comment...

Edited by VindhyaMounika - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#29
Finally you updated!!!
I waited soo longgg
LOL.. good update
ahhm,, last two para, you meant Sanam?? 😳

Oh, Ahil Raza Ibrahim will soon tumble down and fall for the sweet Sanam
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#30
Di, I just loved it

Even though I don't like Aahil 😡

I love this story a lot 😊

Di, Actually At last 2 paras u have wrote Zoya instead of Sanam 😉

And Coming to the update

It was beautifully written, 👏

Its interesting 😛

lovely, 😊

sweet 😃

cute, 😛

Super,😃

Adorable ,😳

Continue soon ...

Precap sounds interesting 😊

Thanks for pm

Pm me for next update


I am sorry for short comment

But once I get familiar with this aahil Track

U will get a lambi lambi comment ..

Edited by Aishwa09 - 11 years ago

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