hum saath saath hain -part 4 a updated pg 17

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Hello guys,

Here comes ur 3rd part of ur story .

Note:Due to the problem I cant read ur comments there4 pm me 4 that n don't forget to comment here also.In this part there are some blanks which u need u fill .(copy the sentence in the comment box n then fill the blank.)Do not fill the..., Should fill ________________________

Happy Reading

Part 3-A

Preview : Asya nokjok,Asad ,Tanveer n Dilshad conversation.

Promo:Asya romantic date

The part starts with Gaffur n Razia conversation

Gaffur was silently reading his files when Razia entered his room.

R:Ji Humari Humera ka kuch pata chala

R:Ji wo kahan hai kaisi hai aur kab...Cut by Gaffur

G:Razia hum iss bare mein baad mein baat karenge hum iss waqt bahot mehefus hain

R:Ji baadmein... matlab

G: baadmein matlab wohi hai jise hum sab wakib hai aur humane tumse kaha na ki hume aabhi bahut kaam hai

R:Lekin wo Humara meri bachi

G: (was super angry this time)

Koi nahi hai wo ... Wo hamare liye mar chuki hain aur tumhare liye bhi aacha hoga ki tum uska zikri bhi na karo.

R:Ji margaye ...Ji wo meri beti hain aur sirf meri hi nahi aapki bhi hai aur aap ase kaise uske bare mein soch sakate hain Ji

G:Kyun nahi soch sakate jab tum Zoya ke bare mein yesa soch sakte ho to

R:Kyun ki wo aapki najayes aulad hain

G:(Shouted badly) Raziaaa...Nikal jao humare kamre se(Threw her out of the room)

R:Aap chahe jo v kare ya jo v bole main aapni bachi ko dhund kr rahun gi

The silent listener heard their conversation n was very happy.(who is the silent listener)

At Asya's room ,

Zoya was getting ready with her black saree n jewelery etc

Z:Kya baat hai Zoya aakir aap kamiabb ho gayi Mr AkduAhmad khan ko MR Romantic Ahmad Khan banana mein...The journey 4___________________to ___________________________

...umm good .. very good.Oh no lagatha hai late ho gaye . Ab jaldi se chalet hun varna phir se Mr Khan Mr_________ Ahmad Khan ban jayenge.

As she was walking through the stairs she met Najma n Nuzath.

Na: Zoya aap intene jaldi mein kahan jarahe ho haan

Z:(As she cant tell where she was going she said)Wo main Actually ...Wo

Na:Are Zoya intene jaldi aapne bhaijaan ki bole sikle wo main actually kya baat hain

Nu:Baji hame laga ke nikah ke baad humare bhaijaan badal jayenge par yahan to aap hi badal gaye

Najma baji hamare bhaijaan great hai na

Na:Lagata to yahi hain Nuzath aakir Zoya mein intene jaldi changes dekne ke baad to...

Z: Mujhe me koi changes nahi aye hain bas wo to...

Nu: Haan Haan baji wo to dikh hi raha hai.

Da:Tum dono yahan kya karahe ho aur khabar daar agar humari ________ko tang kiya to

Na,Nu:Par dadi wo to humari v bhabi hain na

Da: Kuch nahi chup aur Najma tum jake aahram karo Nuzath ise kamre me le jao.

Z: Thank u dadi app iss duniya ki best dadi hain

Da:Acha abb yeh sab chodo aur jaldi jao varna Asad naraz_______________ ho jayega

Z: Ji dadi par aapko kaise pata ki main Mr Khan se milne jarahi hoon

D:Tumhari aankho ki _______________ dehkar

Zoya smiled n left.

Zoya walked up to the stairs n could find no one

She was very upset n angry too.

Z:Mr Khan ne koi arrangement nahi ki (she could not see anything bcoz the ___________ were off.)

Z:Mr Khan kahan hain app ?Aur yahaan kyu bulaya hai mujhe?

As she was about to go ,Asad came n hugged her 4m behind.

Meanwhile down (in the house)

Dil: Wajid miya, wajid miya

W: Ji memsahib

Dil: Khana taiyaarhai sabko bulalaye.

W: JI

Dadi:Dilshad sab taiyaar hain

Dil: ji ammi , ammi apne asya ko kahe dekha hai sham se dono gayap hain

Dadi: Are tum intene firk kyu kar ti ho wo dono ayjaenge aur abhi abhi unka nikah hua hai un dono kuch pal akele gujarane do

Di:JI ammi aap sahi keh rahihein

At the kitchen ,

Razia was worrid about Humeras whereabouts when Tanveer came n interrupted her.

T:Baji aap pareshaan hai Kya

R:Nahin pagal hun Aur tu apne kaam se kaam rak billo rani varna

T:Humare liye kya acha hai aur kya nahi yeh app hame mat samajhaye Humari pyari Razia baji

R; Acha varna tu kya karlege haan bol

T:Aap achi taraha se janate hain ki hum kya kar sakathain Phlihal to baji aap humari beti Humera ke bare mein sochiye .

R: Khabar daar billo rani Humera sirf meri aur Gaffur sahib ki beti hai koi nahihai qwo trei samajhi

T:Par baji hum to aapki madad karna chahate the

R: Mujhe teri madat ki koi jarurat nahi hai billo rani

She walked towards the dining table when she spotted Dil n Nujath conversation

Dil :Nujath beta najma kahan hai

Nu:Wo baji aahra karrahi hai

Dil:Acha teeth hai sab log bas khane keliye ate hi honge Main tab tak Rashid ko khana khilakar aati hoon

Nu :ji

Dil : aur haan main kitchn se kheer lana bhool gaye tum lado ge plz

Nu: Ji badi ammi abhi laye.

She got a phone call n went to receive it.

R:(Came back to the kitchen n said) Billo rani yu meri madat karna chahati hai na to use kheer mein zahar milade kam se kam in sab se to peecha chute hun

Taveer smiled zaror baji lekin yeh sahi mauka nahi hain.

At the terrace

A: meri Zoya phir se naraj ho gaye n onned all the lights

Zoya was surprised at all this n hugged Asad .

Z:Mujhe pata tha aap mujhe mana ne ke liiye jaror yeh sab karege

A:Akhir aap naraz thi to aapko mana bantahai

Z:Main aap se kab naraz thi (bit her tongue as she spoke the truth)

A:To phir wo subhaha jo sab wo...

Z:Wo Mr khan

A:Haan Zoya

Zoya started to run followd by ASad.

A:Zoya rukiye

Asad caught zoya n both of them looked into each's eyes n were about to kiss when,

Z:Mr Khan(She turned in shy)

Asad turned her n was about to kiss again but hs phone rang.

Z:Mr khan phone utaye

A:umm.(He completed his call n about to kiss again but this time)

Z:Mr Khan dinner bahot bhuk lagi hai Mr khan plz chaliye aur neechebhi sab log dinner kar rahe honge Mr Khan plz

A:Chaliye aye aaj aapki favourite dish hai

Z:pizza

A: Zoya aapko pizza ke bina kuch aur sojhata nahi hai kya

Z:Mr Khan aapki pizza se kya problem hai

A:Mujhe pizza se nahi balki appke har waqt pizza khane se hain

Z:Mr Khan wo to meri_______________hai na isleye jase aap apne _______________attitude nahi bhulte vaise main pizza nahi

A:Mujhe to aapne badal diya zoya(He walked 2 steps towards her)

Z:Mr Khan khane chaley

A: Ji

Both of them had a wonderful dinner.After that asad forwarded his hand for dance.

A:Apna haath dijiye

Z:Sure par music kahan hai?

A:Yahan hai

Z:kahan hai

Asad started to sing Resham se hain ye hawaye sanam.Both of them started dancing in each other's arms. Suddenly Zoya tripped n whie catching zoya asad too fell in the bed.

Z:Mr Khan aap mujhetheek se sambhal bhi nahi sakhte kya?

She was about to get up but caught by Asad

A:Ab nahi zoya n slowly he kissed zoya's lips nwhich turned into a passionate n finally united to become one 4ever

In the house,everyone had their dinner n went to their respective rooms,except Gazia.

Gaffur was not able to see Zoya anywhere n was worried .

G:Dilshad Zoya kahan hai?

Dil:WO zoya Asad se saath bahar gaye hai

G:Theek hai

Dil to herself:Ye Siddique sahib ko kya hua hai phele to unhe zoya bilkul pasand nahi thi abb achanak kheer Rashid akele honge unke pass jati hoon.

Ra:Badi firk ho rahi apni beti

G:Beti hai firk to hogi

R: To humera ki kyun nahi hoti

G:Kyun ki usne besharmi ki sare hade pr kardi

R:Haan sahi keh rahe hai aap meri beti to kichad hai aur aap ki beti doodh ki dhli nahi ji?Main aapko kal shamtak ka waqt deti hun meri bacchiko wapas lane keleye agar wo nahi lauti to main zoya ko nahi chodungi ji

G:Raziaaa

R:Chilaye mat varna mujhe bhi chilana aata hai .Aur aap ye Zoya ki firk karna chodijiye varna kisiko agar shak ho gaya to aap jail ja sakte hain

Gaffur went back to his room n decided that he should mark an end to all this mess.

To be continued in part B

Promo: Small revelations

Guys do not forget to comment if u need any changes pm me as I cant see anything.And also do not forget to answer the queston asked above.

I m really sorry 4 the readers who asked me the links of the previous which I couldn't provide

But 4m now I'll post them

Links

Part 1-http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3948946

Part2-http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4001661

part 3a-above

part 3b-pg4

filtering -pg-9

Part 4a-17

Thanks,

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Posted: 11 years ago
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He awesome chapter
Ok according to me the first fill in the blank

Z:Kya baat hai Zoya aakir aap kamiabb ho gayi Mr AkduAhmad khan ko MR Romantic Ahmad Khan banana mein...The journey 4_____akduness______________to ________Romance___________________

...umm good .. very good.Oh no lagatha hai late ho gaye . Ab jaldi se chalet hun varna phir se Mr Khan Mr_____akdu____ Ahmad Khan ban jayenge.

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Da:Tum dono yahan kya karahe ho aur khabar daar agar humari ___bahoo_____ko tang kiya to

Na,Nu:Par dadi wo to humari v bhabi hain na

Da: Kuch nahi chup aur Najma tum jake aahram karo Nuzath ise kamre me le jao.

Z: Thank u dadi app iss duniya ki best dadi hain

Da:Acha abb yeh sab chodo aur jaldi jao varna Asad naraz____________ ho jayega

Z: Ji dadi par aapko kaise pata ki main Mr Khan se milne jarahi hoon

D:Tumhari aankho ki _____chamak__________ dehkar

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She was very upset n angry too.

Z:Mr Khan ne koi arrangement nahi ki (she could not see anything bcoz the _lights__________ were off.)


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Z:Mr Khan wo to meri____jaan___________hai na isleye jase aap apne ______akdu_________attitude nahi bhulte vaise main pizza nahi
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: KSGmaniac_24579

Da:Tum dono yahan kya karahe ho aur khabar daar agar humari ___bahoo_____ko tang kiya to

Na,Nu:Par dadi wo to humari v bhabi hain na

Da: Kuch nahi chup aur Najma tum jake aahram karo Nuzath ise kamre me le jao.

Z: Thank u dadi app iss duniya ki best dadi hain

Da:Acha abb yeh sab chodo aur jaldi jao varna Asad naraz____________ ho jayega

Z: Ji dadi par aapko kaise pata ki main Mr Khan se milne jarahi hoon

D:Tumhari aankho ki _____chamak__________ dehkar

wah kya baat hai
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: KSGmaniac_24579

She was very upset n angry too.

Z:Mr Khan ne koi arrangement nahi ki (she could not see anything bcoz the _lights__________ were off.)


mind blowing n thank u
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thanx for the pm!
awesome update
loved it
continue soonish soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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It was lovely.
Beautifully written.
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wonderful chapter !!!
i loved asad being all romantic...
continue soon

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