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Posted: 11 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: SovaSana

great update dear

waiting for the next update
did everyone eat the kheer?
then it is likely that they will die...😭
tanveer is such a cruel woman
wonder asya will do when they come to know about it
eager for the story to progress
do continue soon
thanks for the pm😊

no dear she didnt mix anthing
she said its not the ri8 time
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Posted: 11 years ago
#22
Good morning guys,
I'm back with with lots of revalations and enteries.
Note:Don't forget to comment .

Happy Reading

Part-3b

Preview: Asya suhag raat

Promo: Small revelation

The part starts with asya.As the early sun's rays fell upon Zoya s eyes she woke up. She saw the world's most beautiful scene, n recollected the past night n ran down to their room.

Z:Ya Aalah yeh ...alah miya kya ye sach hai...nahi nahi lekin ...sapna hai kya pinch kar ke dekhoon

Asad came n pinched her .

Z: Ya aalah...Mr Khan dheere se nahi kar sakte the ya aalah kitea dard ho raha hai

A:Maine to dherre se hi kiya tha lekin yehsach hain Mrs Zoya Asad Ahmad Khan isley aapko dard hua.

He turned zoya so that she can face him but she ran away in shy.

In Swathic Lorgde

Ha:Humera Ji hum kab tak yahaan rahege?

Hu:Jab tak Ayaan nahi laute.Haider mujhe uss narak mein wapas nai jana jayaan mein theek se saans bhi nahi le sakti.Main aapko apne acha friend manathi hun.

Ha:(Thoughts)Lekin main aapkomohra manatha hun.

Ha:Humera ji aap apni ammi ko kyun pareshan kar rahi hai

Humera thought a bit.

Ha:Kisi aur ke liye na sahi par aapko apni ammi keliye lautena chahiye.Agr phir bhi aapko acha nahi lagatha to teeth hai

Hu:Nahi Haider aap sahi keh rahe hai mujhe is taraha ammi ko pareshan nahikar na chahiyeh.Aur kisi aur ki sazah kisi aur ko nahi dena chahiyeh.

Haider felt guilty 4 Humera as he ws doing the same.

Ha:Wapas chaltehain

Hu:Kya

Ha:Haan iske alava aur koi rasta nahi hai

Hu:Hummm... Main apna saman pack kar ti hun...Lekin aap mujhe aab bata rahe hain ,Hum inte muskil se ayethe aur wapas ja rahe hain.Mujhe ajeeb lag raha hai Haider

Ha:Aapko mujhe pe shak hai

Hu:Shak...hun mujhe kisi pe yakeen nahi hain

Ammi-Mera nikaah Ayaan ke saath kar va ne keliye unhone muje aur Ayaan ko nase ki goliyaa di

Abu-Aapna iszath bachane ke liye mujhe kamare band kar ke rakha sirf isleye kyuni main aapse se zyada baat kar ti thi

Ayaan-Mujhe har baar cho ke chale gaye

She was crying badly .

Zoya-Hamesha se mera hak cheen te aye hai

Aur...

Hu:Haider main aapne upar trust karke yahaan aye hun plz kam se kam app to ...

She ran to her washroom crying.

Haider sat on the sofa n said to himself.

H:Main asa kyun kar raha hoon jise na main khush nahi hoon .Bechari humera ji ki zindagi barbad karke mujhe jo khusu milega use kai zada guna dard aur guilt bhara hai

Mere Maula main kya karu

He took ou his wallect(purse)n said to the photo n said I love u I love I really really love u isleye tumhare bataye hue raste par chal hun par tumne mujhe yeh kaisa dhikaya hai jise na mere dil ko chain mil ta hai na sukoon mlta hai.

ON the other hand in KV

Hasenaa: Bhai maja aa gaya zindagi ka(having food in her mouth)

F:Sahi keh rahi hai aapp ammi

Just then the phone rings.Sameera picks it up.

C:Hello

S:Ji kahiye

C:App kaun hai ?

S:Acha phone mujhe karo aur mujhse pucho ki main kaun hun

C: Yeh landlne hai kise ke personal phone nahi

The call ends.

F:Kaun tha

S:Shayad koi pagal tha ha ha ha

The Door bell rings.Haseena opens the door and is super shocked.

Promo:Z:Woo Me khan yeh dekiye n zoya faints

A:Mrs Khan uthiye utheyi

Hai:Maine tickets le liye hain app taiyaar hai na?

Hu:Jeee

At some kind of news Najma becomes very happy.

I am really sorry 4 the late guys and also 4 the short update but I'm really busy with my relatives and also with my admission .

Hey guys this time I really want to wheather to continue it or not. Finalizing a decision by ur comments only.I have 150 buddies from that may be 3-4 from other forums ok let me consider then as 10 n others who doesn't follow my story let me consider them as 30 n finally 40

SO readers are 110 n in this part if I don't receive atleast 100likes,85-90comments then I'll discontinue it

Thank u

Love u all

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Posted: 11 years ago
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very nice update
thanx for the pm
update soon
ashlesha2 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
#24

Originally posted by: princess101

very nice update

thanx for the pm
update soon

glad u liked it
thanks
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Posted: 11 years ago
#25
Update was awsum...
Gr8 job 👏
Btw can u explain why did I get 3 PMs ??😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
#26

Originally posted by: Niya_789

Update was awsum...

Gr8 job 👏
Btw can u explain why did I get 3 PMs ??😆

sorry dear its a great confussion
thanks😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#27

Originally posted by: ashlesha2

sorry dear its a great confussion
thanks😃

Its ok 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
#28
Lovely update...loved it a lot!
N ash...don't write for likes...if people will like n recognise ur effort they'll like themselves...
But we cant force them na!!
So just write for urself n those who read...
Continue soon
ashlesha2 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: -Crazy4AsYa-

Lovely update...loved it a lot!

N ash...don't write for likes...if people will like n recognise ur effort they'll like themselves...
But we cant force them na!!
So just write for urself n those who read...
Continue soon

mujhe bhi yahi...
thanks didi
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Posted: 11 years ago
#30
Fantastic update
Continue soon
Thanks for pm

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