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Revelio

@Revelio

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: -waitingforyou-

ohh !! come on ! now that's your fault !
i pm ed you first thing after posting this !
atleast you got 2nd !

Ok ok! Yeah I guess that was my fault, as much as I hate to admit it. 😆

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Prashni Singh

@-SilverSparkle-

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Heartrendingly beautiful! 💔

Poignant dialogues: 🥺

" No . I'm sure it'll be a girl. Zara! The light of my life! "

"I want my Zoya back! Please save her Ammi .. please ..."

"save...the... baby !"

"my...angel...??"

" you'll take care of her; right?"

"promise me. Just promise!"

"I love you Asad." she said drowsily.

" I love you too Zoya ." Asad kissed her temple.

"Zoya ! wake up sweety !"

"I'm sorry Mr. Khan! We tried ... . ... . "

Lovely writing! ⭐️

Look forward to the next part.

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kiki

@-waitingforyou-

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty
it was so very beautiful.. so very that i cried :'(

write more please or else i will cry again! :( :'( 😆

wow !!
The Ankie is asking me to write more !!😲
of course i will! 😊
i can't believe everyone's crying after reading this ! 😕😆

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kiki

@-waitingforyou-

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: nida2394
Very nice 😊

thanks dear :)

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kiki

@-waitingforyou-

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: SBanoMalik

Most welcome !! 🤗
It indeed was beautiful the way u portrayed their emotions 😳
The fact that u made me cry is a compliment ! 😆

wow !! a compliment from such awesome writer !
i'm so happy !!
well then i'm glad i made you cry !😆

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Saima Syed

@Saima-Syed

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

A beautiful and very emotional piece of writing

Loved it

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kiki

@-waitingforyou-

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: ..Ramya..

Ok ok! Yeah I guess that was my fault, as much as I hate to admit it. 😆

yes !!
it's definitely your fault !
now come on unres your res i wrote this for you !

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kiki

@-waitingforyou-

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: p_s05
Heartrendingly beautiful! 💔

Poignant dialogues: 🥺
" No . I'm sure it'll be a girl. Zara! The light of my life! "
"I want my Zoya back! Please save her Ammi .. please ..."
"save...the... baby !"
"my...angel...??"
" you'll take care of her; right?"
"promise me. Just promise!"
"I love you Asad." she said drowsily.

" I love you too Zoya ." Asad kissed her temple.
"Zoya ! wake up sweety !"
"I'm sorry Mr. Khan! We tried ... . ... . "

Lovely writing! ⭐️

Look forward to the next part.

awww !!!thanks for such a nice comment !
it's really sweet of you to point out the dialogues !
thanks so much for reading !😃
i'll definitely update the next part :)😳
thank you so much :)🤗