Without You - An Asya OS ' Last part UPDATED ' - Page 3

Originally posted by: ..Ramya..

Res! Hmph, I didn't get the 1st comment. :(

Unres

Omg kiki! U write fab! It was such an emotional story, my eyes teared towards the end. I luvd the start too, Zoya wanting to name her baby Zara, that was a realy sweet part, but u made me so sad yaar! I felt so bad for Asad, its always his happiness that's snatched away. The part b4 Zoya dies, where Zoya asked asad to promise her that he'll take care of their baby, that was such a heart warming scene. My jaws were at my knees when I read the part where Zoya leaves, my eyes were all wet. Such a heart wrenching story yet so beautiful. Ur amazing at describing the characters emotions, u really can make a writer feel what the character is feeling. Hats off dude! Ur just fab! 👏

Originally posted by: SBanoMalik

Me ? Awesome writer ? Really ? i didnt know... 😲 Thank you !! ☺️
Haaawww u r happy that u made me cry ?! 😲 😆

Originally posted by: pwenCezz_symrun

reswaa

Originally posted by: -waitingforyou-

yes ! you are really an awesome writer !😊
i love your works ! i'm sorry i don't comment on many !😛😆
yes i'm happy that i made u cry ! that means i'm succesfull in conveying the emotions of the characters ,right !😆

Originally posted by: SBanoMalik

Awww Thank you so much !! 🤗 but if u like them do comment also !! Why dont u comment ? I dont bite u know ! I love getting response ! But if people continue to do like u i might stop writing
Haaaye !! 😲 meri bili mujhi ko miaouh ! 😲 🤣 😉

Originally posted by: -waitingforyou-

ohh God !!!
ohh ooo !! trouble !!
i'm sorry ! i didn't comment ! i know you don't bite !
but the thing is i only read your OS s and i'm still catching up with your ff !
because of my busy life ( a little bit busy life ) i have a lot of pending pms to see !
but i promise ! i'll comment as soon as i finish reading :)
" puppy face "😆

Originally posted by: SBanoMalik

Haha ok but catch up soon i want ur comments ! 😳

Originally posted by: -waitingforyou-

yes !!
it's definitely your fault !
now come on unres your res i wrote this for you !

Originally posted by: ..Ramya..

U simply love accusing me, don't u?😆

Originally posted by: -waitingforyou-

ohh my God !
i'm so flattered by this !!
Geez man !! this is unbelievable ! now no one can snatch this smug smile from my face for a while !!! i'm so happy !!!
i am not coming down from cloud 9 anytime soon now !
you liked it !!!😲
YOU SERIOUSLY LIKED IT !!😲😲
thanku so much yaar !!!
fyi mushy sweet romance doesn't come to me easily ! i like writing about sad stuff !!
but i'm not a saddist !
i'm good at describing emotions ! really ??
wow !! thanku so much dude ! for this heartwarming comment !
i love u i love you !!
i love you so much for this !🤗