ASYA FF : THE DARK SHADOWS THREAD 2 Chapter 21/79 25th jun 15 - Page 6

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Posted: 11 years ago
#51
Hey congrats on the new thread...
amazing...
luv it..
asya are about to kiss...
thx fr the pm n do continue soon n do pm me...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#52
oh com on really really u had to do that
congrats on new thread
would these 2 just give in to the temptation
it it too much already
poor girl didnt sleep all night
wow lucky asad...kaka know things haha😆
zoya mesmerized by asad body emmm
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#53
lovely update eshita...
asya r far bt near... n near bt far...
the aura around tgem vn they r together... is js not describable...
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#54
a cliffy when i so wanted them to kiss
but i know u will give me something awesome to read
cont soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: maha2012

<font color="#CC6666"><font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="5">Congratulations on new thread</font></font>🥳
<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2">eshita thanku soo much for dedicating😳❤️
sensual seduction☺️
anwar kaka is too gud.. he knws the fire is set between both😉 he can sense the chemistry☺️
asad remembers that zoya came in his room last night.. and he fears that zoya is getting too close
zoya takes medicines's to his room when she finds him only in a towel 😲☺️
zoya gawking him n blushing☺️
"Are we done miss farooqui"..He whispered seductively☺️😉
asad pulling zoya to his bare chest😲 holding her hands back he blew on her face😲
the proximity ufff☺️
"Look at me"
his eyes having that dark passion for zoya😳
asad bending down to kiss her.. ☺️
AND WHY DID U STOP THERE😡😭💔
uff but this time make them kiss plzzz😭
cuz my Asad is dying to kiss zoe😉😆
Awesome update👏
ur great at writing romance.. aur likho plzz😳😆😉
love ya❤️

Maha
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Hi maha..
thank u soo much for suchha wonderful reply!!! M so glad u liked it!! 😊
N hey! Do I write romance well!! 😲 I thought I sucked at it!! 😆
Thanks bdw! 😊

Will hopefully update soon! 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#56

Originally posted by: aYASHIKA

awesome update...👏👏👏
asad remembers last night with zoya...😳😳
asad fears that zoya is coming too close...
zoya saw asad only in towel😳😳
someone interrupted their kiss😡😡
update soon..
thanks for pm




Thank u 😊

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hi Eshita...
Im so sorry that i was not able to comment earlier... just so you know ; life happened and i was entangled in a lot of things that became priority...; however, i read ur work today... it was awesome as always... Congratulations on ur new thread... im so happy on ur success... this is more magnanimously written... beautiful and enthralling ; i must say... pls pm me for the next update... as i am back to read and appreciate the beautiful story that you are weaving...

Until next Time
Keep writing and updating..
a.sharma
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B]Hello every 1.I m back with an update. Since you all have given me 77 likes! Mogambo khush hui! 😆 But still, 6 page comments. 😡 Type. P.E.O.P.L.E Type! 😡 The faster the likes and comments , the quicker will be the updates. 😳[/B]



This
update is for KIKI (waitingforyou). Thank you babe, for such wonderful
comments. I hope you'll like this part as well






THE DARKER SHADE OF RED : PART 1



He left her. Zoya, feeling the loss of warmth, instantly wound her fingers into his hair, fisting at the soft ringlets. She tugged on them, hard. Her intention was for him to recognize her agreement. She thought, may be he didn't want it. But she couldn't let it go! She wanted to kiss him. Her first ever kiss, for some reasons, she wanted it to be with him. When he didn't respond any further, she knew he wanted to back off. But instead of backing away as she hoped he would, the throaty moan he emitted took her by surprise. The vibrations running through her reached its peak when he cupped his large hands under her thighs. Her shorts, that caused a direct contact of his hand to her skin, made her stomach go swirls. He took quick steps and zoya was locked between the wall and the man. Her body was lifted up, Asad forcing her to wrap her legs round his waist.
Zoya couldn't help but gasp as his full lips placed kisses along her jaw before sucking on the spot where it met her neck.

"What are you doing to me zoya.."

He breathlessly spoke. His voice, heavy with this sudden rush of passion.

She remained quiet. All these sensations she felt were new to her. Her body was now out of her control and on his mercy. His torturous trail continuing down her neck. Her fingers still tightly held his hair, his strong body pressing her further into the wall.


"Stop me."

Asad's voice a little harsher against her skin.
Zoya was losing all her senses as she felt his lips pressing forcefully to her sensitive skin. Her mouth parted as his intensity increased, Asad's actions unforgiving as he severely sucked. Teeth grazed the reddened skin. It all became too much as she forced out the words she knew he was waiting to hear.


"I want you mr. khan."

Her sensually pained voice whispered.
He left her and looked deep into her eyes. The intensity and darkness scared her, sexually. Her hands weakly pressed to his chest. She let her hands explore his perfect set of abs, and did not break the eye contact for once.

Asad put her down and took a breath as he tried to calm his throbbing nerves.


"Go away zoya."


Her bottom lip trembled slightly as she stood frozen to the spot, not quite sure of how to handle the situation. Her mind was still trying to process what had happened. Her body not co-operating at all, made her pull him again to her.


"No"


She whispered back as she took the charge in her hands now.


She brought him more closer and placed a soft kiss on the crook of his neck. Asad hissed in pleasure. She, for a moment as She had never done this before, not with him, not with any one.. And before he could comprehend any further,zoya moved on to his collar bone. Her roaming fingers on his bare skin was building tremors inside him. He was intoxicated by her. COMPLETELY.. His hands, on their own accord started exploring her back. His mind had stopped all its thought processes. This one girl could bring the worst of him! Be it physically or emotionally. Asad groaned loudly When zoya bit him in her passion. He pulled her closer and once again zoya against the wall and As he made his way down her neck, Zoya's hands slowly reached his groin and she gasped, feeling how aroused he was. As asad spared it a thought, he suddenly realized what was going on and jerked himself out. He couldn't believe he was doing this. Not that he didn't want to, His desperation would have been visible to a blind, but he couldn't. Not with zoya. Never with zoya. He left her roughly making her open her eyes.

"Mr. khan.. Don't stop..",

she tried to pull him closer, her eyes still closed..


But Asad was very angry now.. "Enough!!! Stop all this and just get out of here.. ", he roared. It took few minutes for zoya to realize that he had actually stopped. She looked up when he yelled. His eyes replaced the desire with anger. Eyes that threw fire on her.

He held her shoulder harshly and pulled her one more time. Zoya, all meek and terrorized seeing his anger, trembled in fear.

"How dare you"

He seethed in fury. His fingers pushed deeper inside her skin, making her wince in pain.


"You could stoop so low, I didn't know. Trying to stimulate me?"


Her eyes went wide. Zoya certainly didn't expect this.


"Arouse me for what? You think I'll let you go if you'll bed with me? S***?" "And what made you think I'll sleep with a girl so young to me. Do you think m a bloody fool? Am I not seeing the over kindness you show?"

He barked. His eyes were red in rage.

Zoya opened her eyes and gave him a look that reflected pain. Pain of rejection and for such low accusations. She bit her lip as she tired to hold back the tears.
Her mind fogged up and her eyes felt heavy. Zoya could feel her lip quivering.


"Mr. khan, I.." She stammered.


"Leave before I throw you out."
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Love
eshita


Edited by eshita.kabhi - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#59
aww so much of romance but in the end akdu asad is back...love the update
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Posted: 11 years ago
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OMG i am first to comment yippie I never did this...

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