3#Tumhe Pyaar Kab Tak Na Karenge Bhala:AsYa FF[Ch11-14 LINK#4 Pg1] - Page 85

Originally posted by: p_s05

Outstanding and endearing moments:

"Zoya's fingers played with the burger and successfully drew the patty out of it while nodding at Asad.

With a grave look, she shoved the half nibbled patty into her lip, making Asad narrow his eyes for a second, but then they both went on conversing and eating from the same platter pretending as if nothing occurred."

THIS.. i am glad someone caught... I couldnt get the words straight here unfortunately... could have done better TBH

"She drew in a breath gleefully and ran her hand over his soft tresses of hair. After a while she was found asleep clutching his elbow, curled up beside him.

Cute tha hai na?? 😉 how much i wished for such a scene in the fiction 😭 😭 i only remember such a scene the night before Holi when Zoya sneaks into Asad's room and Asad drowsily wakes up but again goes off to sleep 😆 😆

LIKE WHYYY 😡 😭 😆

Asad felt a gentle ball of weight numbing his left elbow. He groggily tried turning to his other side, but he felt something weighing him down. Unwillingly, he slit his eyes open to find Zoya curled up beside him. He smiled, believing it to be his regular morning dream and rubbed his eyes."

Did u imagine Zoya to be as a ball of spun candy here ^^? 😳 I wanna know 😆 😆

'I was thinking ki why don't you drop me as well as bring me back everyday? That will preserve our natural resources that's exactly what I read in a pamphlet about saving the environment yesterday.'

'It also stated that.. My favourite burgers are good for my health and they are to be consumed both for lunch and breakfast.'

SEE SEE SEE She MADE UP in her own way 😆 none noticed unfortunately 😆

"'Please smile more often.. You look so very handsome.' Asad arched his brows and smiled his lopsided smile and said 'Provided you call me Asad all the time.. Your voice sounds like prayer to my ears.'"

THIS.. as a writer I am afraid.. couldn't place it well 😆