3#Tumhe Pyaar Kab Tak Na Karenge Bhala:AsYa FF[Ch11-14 LINK#4 Pg1] - Page 84

Originally posted by: jas91

I think there is some Raaz in d box 😆 << SOCHO SOCHO 😆

yep but she is late latif understand very late😡 << awh dont say that.. she is just trying her best to be civil.. unfortunately she isnt able to realize she has fallen for Asad 🤣 😆

finally akal aa gayi😆

yes we loved it😛

thanku😃

par mujhe toh nahi mila sachi😭 << ab milega 😳

Originally posted by: p_s05

Going to have to reserve for now.

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Unreserved!

You have taken AsYa to a whole new level in terms of characterization. This chapter was really a delightful read. Zoya was truly charming and adorable. Asad has been charismatic from the beginning it just intensified in this chapter.

And people avehi hated poor zoya in the past 😭 😆

The conceptualization of this chapter was liberating and beautiful. The oscillation of emotions were remarkable.

The emotions part.. After finishing the whole part i realized that I am suffering from OCD 🤣 I ted to describe each and every second and that is painful for me 😆 😆 though I haven't got much of kya bole haan experience in any kinds of relationship be it friendship or any other thing.. 😆 let alone a relationship.. and most of the time it serves ad a drawback for me.. be it in writing or even in real life or understanding people.. everything remains limited to the television media as a base..😆 but nevertheless it is very I am so very glad every one has been appreciating the story so much till now..😊

Outstanding and endearing moments:

"Zoya's fingers played with the burger and successfully drew the patty out of it while nodding at Asad.

With a grave look, she shoved the half nibbled patty into her lip, making Asad narrow his eyes for a second, but then they both went on conversing and eating from the same platter pretending as if nothing occurred."

"She drew in a breath gleefully and ran her hand over his soft tresses of hair. After a while she was found asleep clutching his elbow, curled up beside him.

Asad felt a gentle ball of weight numbing his left elbow. He groggily tried turning to his other side, but he felt something weighing him down. Unwillingly, he slit his eyes open to find Zoya curled up beside him. He smiled, believing it to be his regular morning dream and rubbed his eyes."

'I was thinking ki why don't you drop me as well as bring me back everyday? That will preserve our natural resources that's exactly what I read in a pamphlet about saving the environment yesterday.'

'It also stated that.. My favourite burgers are good for my health and they are to be consumed both for lunch and breakfast.'

"'Please smile more often.. You look so very handsome.' Asad arched his brows and smiled his lopsided smile and said 'Provided you call me Asad all the time.. Your voice sounds like prayer to my ears.'"

"p.s. How did Zoya come to know that Asad loved reading Rumi and Asad about the Tulips and What Asad really wanted to tell Zoya..."

"...Bachpan ki addat chooti nahi apki.'"

RUMI << Bachpan mein nursery rhymes hote hai.. 😆 sher o shayari nahi 😉 😆

Tulips << In childhood who knows kaunsa kya flower hai 😆 do we not like plucking them and then tearing them into pieces 😉 without the knowledge ki kaun sa kya flower hai 😃 😆

P.S Zoya of chapter 14 has left an impact on my mind, that made her sound like an edible little angel and her cupcake aided the beauty of it all.

THANK YOU.. hasnt she come a LONG way? She has always been an edible little angel buss circumstances hadnt been right 😕 😊

P.S.S Your style of writing is a little different from the conventional, exceptional you have proved with this chapter. Editing reduced the grandeur faintly.

@Bold : the problem was it sounded repeated.. Editing helped to polish the parts which rang dull in my ears IMO 😆 😆

Thank you sooo much lovely 🤗

Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty

Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty