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ainaboss

@ainaboss

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#101

It's really sweet n cute!

reminds of old days in QH..😭

simply awesome!!👏

loved all d parts...asya n their siblings are way too cute!

thanks for pm!😊

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aniha

@Aniha

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#102

it was soo cute..lovd the naughty asad so much 😳
zoya wants sleep but he didnt let her sleep..wonderful os start new ff soon 😃

Edited by aniha20 - 11 years ago

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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

Trailblazer

+ 10

Posted: 11 years ago

#103

very well written one-shot...thank you for the PM..😊

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Sansanana

@Sansanana

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#104

Originally posted by: treasure11

😳🤣

Tum dono Ghar aao..mein batati hun😡

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Simran Bhandary

@pwenCezz_symrun

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#105

it was really a mind-blowing update!!
simply Awesome it was!!
amazingly penned!!
loved it to the core!!
would love to read some more of OS from uh 😃

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Simran Bhandary

@pwenCezz_symrun

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#106

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Anitha

@-Anitha-

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#107

Bubba i unresed my comment in pg 1😳
This is for u ❤️ n 🤗
Want to read more from u

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--Bubble007--

@--Bubble007--

Trailblazer

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#108

Originally posted by: -Anitha-
Res!!
Unres'ed😎
Bubba - u become so naughty -can i say that u r rocking in 10-12 romance ☺️ so much improvement in u my don😳 👍🏼
Wat an os aww ☺️
U know how much i loved reading it❤️ 😳
like u asad become naughty 😳
And also he become shameless
Zoya as usual super adorable.😃
I thought zoya & her mr.khan wont change but glad asad habituated our zoya to call him from his real name(asad)😆
I thought Something can never change but im wrong asad changed zoya😎 😆
PRASAD😡 kabab ke haddi😡 it shows ur evil mind😈 bubba 😡
But i loved their confession on their 1st day after nikaah❤️ it gave goosebumps not only inside his body. Trust me even i got that goosebump
That lip kiss ☺️ ☺️ n their tongue war ☺️
walima scene was adorable bubba❤️
I wished to see this in show but it never happen how unlucky we are nevermind😃 bcz i got to read their walima via this os i imagined my asad in black suit n red tie
Aww damn hot ☺️ *ouch* bubbaaa dont disturb me im in asya dream land
Though Ayaan was very funny i didn't enjoyed reading it - u know y bcz whenever i read ayaan n zoya - that hell disgusting zoyaan shower scene came into my mind tell me wat can i do? 😭 😭 .
Najma was cute..😊
I adored asya a lot...😳
Loved to see besharam asad ☺️
This OS was funny, romantic, adorable, lovely as well don 👍🏼
keep writing buddy
Love yah 🤗
Ani❤️

Thank You Ani 🤗

I am honored that you liked it !

haha Don loves to improve her skills 😎

Yah I added Prasad to stop them or else they were crossing their limits Ani 🤔😆

even I wished the same but nothing good happened ,,

only bad happened in the show

D'ohhh !!

When did I disturb you Ani ?? go on keep dreaming 😲😆

Aww I understand ,,

just forget it don't imagine Ayaan there ,, imagine my Sameer 😳😆

Thanks for ur lovely comment !

Love you tooo ❤️

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--Bubble007--

@--Bubble007--

Trailblazer

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#109

Originally posted by: Azraa01
Bubble... I love you for this OS... It just made my day..
Loved the romance between Asya, however I loved Zoya and Ayaans conversation more..

Thank You ,,

I am honored that you liked it (:

haha I love you too for ur lovely comment !

Yup MaBert are fun together LoL