AsYa SS:Forgotten Melody Updated 08/01/2017 pg 103 - Page 23

Originally posted by: Rarepearl

Hey Ambreen,

I was thinking it might take a few days for you to update since u were busy but seems like you did squeeze in time for this part, for which I'm grateful.

The part as an emotional ride. I felt so many emotions through this, anger, aggression, hate, guilt, despair, helplessness, vulnerability & fear. But the one thing common in all these or I must say the underlining emotion was LOVE, Asad's love for Zoe.

So we get to know what he endured throughout without her by his side & endure he did. "Distance makes the heart grow fonder." This is true for Asad. As I thought he knew what he was doing at that night in the farm house when he let himself flow with his emotions. The next day hit him hard as he realized he had let go of his cover in front of her. In the deepest corner of his heart he knew he loved her but the demons of his past like always got the better of him & he lashed out at her, his frustrations of not being able to keep away, his desire to be with her but the constant fear of ruining her just like his abbu did to his ammi, made him push her away.

You know I always understood Asad's plight while he did this everytime but this time he really went over board with the words & then he was about to hit her, again! Those accusations were really mean & heart piercing.

His hesitation to clear all with her but his pride holding him back got him nothing. He had to bare the biggest loss of his life, lose her.

Asad surely has gone through hurt & pain but he can't be angry on her & feel betrayed because she didn't betray him. It was him who broke her strong belief in him & betrayed her. He left her all lone to face the world when she was weak, vulnerable & scared. When she wanted to rely on him & not be independent, he wasn't there.

I feel bad for him but not sad because it was his own doing. No one forced him into it. It was a surprise to see him holding her picture with him in his wallet. Finally this situation gave him the courage to accept his love. To clear the mist from something that was always left hanging, unsaid, hidden.

So nature again conspires & gives him the directions to find his lost possession, his love through Nargis's email. I hope he can make amends to make it up to her for all the lost time. She will forgive him, its not in her nature to not forgive. She's an Angel.

Zoe must have fainted due to shock of seeing him & cold of the harsh weather. Its unbearable to see or hear Asad begging for her to open her eyes & look at him. This part made me cry. I know its not a nice feeling to see your loved one hurt or go away from you & that too when you've just found them after a long time. The music part where Asad's screaming reminded me of all the moments attached with it.

Hmm.. So when do we expect the next part? That'll be last?

Best of luck once again.

Love..

Originally posted by: MissReadingFaye

Lol I was late in posting so that makes you early in commenting 😃

and thank you for always cheering me up with your lovely comments

you are a superstar ⭐️

and I agree Asad needs a slap from his Ammi ...

Zoya's ill so she needs to be careful in her pregnancy ...

- so that might involve a certain Akdu's tender loving care.

Tanveer ... I initially wrote her story out and then deleted it from part 3

it was truly far too annoying to write anything about her so I'm going to

keep her to the minimum 😆

Tanveer well she tried something in Khan Villa but was caught red handed -

sadly Asad isn't fully aware of this ... becharaa always last know everything 😳

Originally posted by: PriyaKabhi

Thanks for Update. It was very Interesting part,Asad(KSG) guilt was so sad and It was true that Zoya was suffered these months,Asad(KSG) finally knew about Zoya's Pregnancy.I hope Zoya will forgive him. Please Update soon the next part,I am waiting.

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(ASAD will be always KSG ONLY,ASYA-KABHI ONLY) PRIYAKABHI.

Originally posted by: FaultInMyStars

RES RES RES
You can go sleep now 😳 *hugsss*
UNRES

OMFG! This was another awesome part...and I loved loved loved it.
All the flashbacks and his sufferings brought back the memories of AsYa and made me so nostalgic... It did appear rushediat some points...but it was AWESOMEEE.
You know what...he should suffer a bit more. :P
No no...he has suffered enough! No more sufferings <3
Jiju knows everything too? He knows Zoya is pregnant bcoz od Asad and that Zoya is staying alone in Bhopal?
Asad finally got the password! And Nargis...ah! I have to say I love her. Finally he gies and finds her. They see each other. And she faints? I so so hope she is okay. Okay she will be..bcoz Mr Khan is there. He will fix everything and everything alright. In the last few lines...I felt like it was another Mangalpur! *CLAPS*

I can't wait for the next update. :D Hope Zoya and their baby..both are alright. I hate to sound greedy, but when is the next update coming? *peeking from behind the sofa*

And this was wonderful. A BIGGG thanks for the update and dedication. ILYYY. Take care. Study hard. Take breaks. :P And all the best! *hugs again*Crying in a corner for my AsYa*