AsYa SS:Forgotten Melody Updated 08/01/2017 pg 103 - Page 20

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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey Deary,
So you having a tough schedule right now, I understand it gets tough to concentrate on studies & writing for pleasure along side during exams. Well, I'll wait for the next part.
I'm glad you've noticed my response to your stories but it has got everything to do with you. You write so well that I can't stop myself from drowning in them. Your work deserves so much more of love & appreciation & I know you'll be getting it too.
Best of luck again..
And yes I'm dancing I guessed the bk score correct, YAYY!!
Love lots sweety..
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: FaultInMyStars

I love you siggie...Both of them! ZaShaf & AsYa!


thank you so much! 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: MissReadingFaye


Lol gayab ladki 😳 ... just imagine ... agar mere paas ek gayab hone ka formula hota toh ... just think about all the possibilities all the things I could get up to 😆

I had two exams this week and I have 5 left over the month of May ending on June 4th 🤢 exams make me nauseous I threw up on my high school crush once let just say it wasn't a pretty sight at all, oh no sirry teehee hee 😆 lol

... but I 'll see what I can manage to do over the week, so far I have written one paragraph for part 3



Awww my baby... please take care of your health and study well.
Updates to aate rahenge! 😳
But i miss you! 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey dear!! Update soon! I m eager to update next!!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Wish granted ... been up all night and will update shortly 🤗
First I need coffee 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Hi All 🤗

First of all apologies this is going to be a long update. Part 3 is very long and so please treat yourself to some coffee etc.

Before I post part 3, a quick recap for those of you who requested a recap 😳


Quick recap:

In part 1 on a dark stormy night Zoya has preoccupied herself in the blackout by writing her feelings about a distant memory she wants to forget. This memory revolves around her and Asad and the result of that memory now lives in her as she is 3 months pregnant. Everyone assumes she has gone back to New York but in the dark of the stormy night her quiet nights have been disturbed as a familiar face appears on her doorstep bringing forth with it bitter-sweet and painful memories of the forgotten night.


Part 2 deals with the first part of the flashback with details of Asad and Zoya's bhaang-induced stupor and resulting consummation albeit beautiful in every aspect moment between the two but the following day Asad's temper and guilt take a hold on his perception (distorted perception might I add) of the whole thing and he places the entire blame on Zoya referring to her as a gold-digger and characterless woman.

He leaves her stranded at the farmhouse to attend a court case against his father. Zoya now completely broken and shattered makes her own way home but meets with a bus accident and Asad who reaches the scene fails to acknowledge her presence, runs past her to console Tanveer.

Witnessing their embrace, Zoya leaves for New York after informing Phoophi. Asad locates Zoya's iPad at the scene of the accident and goes searching for her but returns home at midnight to be informed by his mother that Zoya is asleep and she is hurt from the bus accident. Asad checks up on a sleeping and bandaged Zoya but once he returns to his room he tells himself that he will sort this out in the morning and everything will be normal once more. He isn't ready to surrender to his feelings. Zoya is busy packing in her room till early morning fighting her own demons but her decision is final on seeing the picture-perfect family in the living area.

The next part (part 3) will be uploaded shortly and that deals with Asad's turmoil and finalises the flashback through to part where Asad and Zoya are now face to face 3 months later.

❤️



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Posted: 11 years ago


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Posted: 11 years ago
amazing update dear...
loved it so much...
3 months of asads angst n agony wel shown...
wts there with tanveer that u left incomplete... want to kno...
finally AsYa are face to face...
zoya collapsed to unconsciousness bcz of asads unexpected appearnce at her doorsteps .
eager to kno wt happens next...
continue soon...
Edited by aarzoo50 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Such a beautiful update! 😳
The way you described Asad's angst was so perfect! He deserves more torture tho 😆
<3333333
I wish this SS would last forever!
Oh well time to read the update again! 😳😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
You know what, i was experiencing a mixture of emotions reading this update.
Angry, despair, sadness, happiness and then again sadness.
It was perfect blend of an heart touching update👏
And yeah, Asad is a douche bag

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