OMG Ambreen!!!
I honestly can't put in words how beautiful this SS is. The plot might start from something we all have seen but the turn you've given it makes it OUTSTANDING 👏. ABSOLTUTELY FANTABULOUS!!
The first part dealt with what Zoe had done to move out of Khan Villa but still stay back to find her long lost father. Her loneliness in the hour of this roaring storm & that too during this fragile phase was so sad. I agree with her that writing does erase some of your pain & give you a bit of hope. It must have been extremely difficult for her to settle herself all alone.
They say when you love someone truly then nature conspires against all odds to bring them together no matter what. This seems so true for AsYa. Who would have thought that Asad would land in front of her porch that too during the same period as when he deserted her?
All those snippets from the past coming back to them showed that they did remember that night well. Anyhow I really was mad at Asad & wanted to kill him by the end of first part but khair I can't do that because I love him so much & he definitely has endured too during his separation from Zoya.
But there's always a but after reading the second part I wanted to strangle Asad. How could he be so insensitive & a moron?
You know you made me weep as I read how the beautiful, romantic night turned into a dreading, hurtful, breaking one no one should ever be put to face.
The description of how Asad & Zoe came close & how the kiss lead on to them becoming one was so so beautiful. I was lost once again in the memories of bol na halke halke & the morning that followed. You seriously have done a commendable job Sweety.
I know all of this happened in a bhang induced stupor but still it was crystal clear to Asad what he was doing & how he was letting go of all the chains restricting him from reaching across to Zoya, the girl who had won his heart on the first sight & that after a stay of few months together with him she had made her presence known in his house & sealed his heart. But obviously his ego & past bitter experiences didn't let him agree or accept any of it. He clearly had said that he envisioned this union of them so many times, intoxication just gave him an out. The way he accused Zoya of something so low & horrible was beyond me. I mean seriously don't understand where he gets all these things to yell at her from? Everything he says indicates to how much he loathes her where the reality is completely different. Asad shouldn't have put the entire blame of the night on her. If he didn't remember anything & was mad at missing the court's hearing, he should have stayed mum until all came back to him.
My heart broke, seriously I cried with Zoya as she was left stranded after being robbed of her innocence. The part where she touched the sheets, my heart clenched in pain. You were too good in describing her pain. Zoya despite being loud, bubbly, stubborn & independent girl was always soft hearted & extremely innocent. There has been no time when she put her desire or need before others around her. During all this time in Khan villa she had come to rely on Asad. She had this faith that she could rely on him in times of difficulty & he would be her savior. But at this time he broke every bit of her heart along with all the hopes & courage she had. Seriously I don't know how many times I wanted to go & hit Asad.
You know you always can't do all that you wish or regard correct & then just go back to being your normal self, pushing everything behind doesn't make it disappear, it always is there. And boy am I glad that Asad has realized this. He realized that there was something unsaid between them from always. But it came after paying a great price, the price of losing someone your heart beat for.
You're supposed to torture him Ambreen! Teach him a good lesson for being a jerk to Zoe, though I would cry at the mere sight of his moistened eyes but still he deserves it for making my poor Zoe suffer so much.
Okay so when do your exams end?? I mean I hope it isn't long way.
Best of luck for your exams. May you succeed with flying colors.
Lots of love & thanks again for the dedication ❤️.
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