Ayaan's home coming,.. on the expanse of loved one's,.. OS - Page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
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U r very bad Maliha. U made me cry. Beautiful writing but sad
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Posted: 11 years ago
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sad but very well written...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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It was indeed a sad OS.. Ayaan's emotions was soo well described..

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: -KitKit-

res😎

unres
nice OS.
this scene is the need of QH now..I mean Ayaan shuld cme back to see This all thngs!!..

anyways!! Maliha that was so pathatic..the way when he entered to SM. n saw crowd..insaan wesy hi aDha pagal o jata hai jb is trhan deikhay too...well xplained!!..

when he saw dead bodies!! he was thnkng that yeh kon hai...that was superb.

n dilshad's character n behavious is well xplained!! she told him everythng soo firmly.. I mean she got so much tolerance n she became strong enough to tell him.. well xplained.


then Ayaan's prov was superb...now he got name fame every thng..but he lost his family.. jx great!! superbb!!

I must say ur writing skills are superb I mean u wrote it so nicely that evryone can cry aftr reading this..infact I also cried 😛

keep writing dear...

awsum OS loved it ❤️

NOW PLZI DNT WANT THIS CMPLAIN THAT I DONT DO LONG COMMENTS 🤣


thanx fah this long comment,.. so you are finally taking me serious,..🤣🤣
thnx fah liking,..😳
yah its much needed,..
buh QH has never worked in our way,..so,..
yah dillu,..she nailed in epi too,..
she was fab,..
❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Mali 😭😭

i am feeling so bad now dear!!!

i always wanted Ayaan to come back... and i am simply imagining the whole thing happening!! 😭😭

it must have be sooo difficult for him!!

and specially Dilshad!!

the poor kids are the ones to suffer the most 😭
Edited by BeYourself - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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oh mali..m crying nw..😭

yuup i left qh wen ksg exit the show..bt yesterday qh have officially lost its soul..ie asad n zoya...

bt somewhr deep in my heart..i really wanted ayaan to come as savior in qh..bt nvrmind..

well explained mali..

da way ayaan saw the house so crowded...his mind stopped wrking...

wen he saw dead bodies of his bhaijaan his mona...his father...😭😭

dilshad character was full of bravery .a courageous lady..hu explained the whole violent scenario to ayaan...😭😭

oh mali m really short of wrds to explain wat m feeling rite nw..😭

bt well explained well written OS frm ayaan POV...much needed OS...

WELL DONE MALI...👏🤗

well nvr frgt our asad n zoya..(KABHI)



😭😭
Edited by shreya11mehra - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#17

Originally posted by: LoveOnlyAsYa

Maliha that was definitely very heart wrenching. The way you described Ayaans emotions was spoton Buddy. Just so beautifully written.

Am happy hes not coming back in the show coz i really have no tears left to shed. I cried seeing asya die and i really cant cry anymore.

thnx fah liking,..
yah it had been worst, watching 1 more beloved character suffering,...

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Posted: 11 years ago
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u made me cry 😭
this was so sad
the way u described ayaan's emotions and action not to forget dilshad that was amazing
i was awesome work
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Posted: 11 years ago
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u made ayaan to come back
dont know why CVs forget him..
Edited by CHOCOSWATHI - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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freekingly awsume
serial writer just need to come on the forum and need read all the fiction over here they r much more sensible then their no sense
u wrote beautifully
hats off

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