Ayaan's home coming,.. on the expanse of loved one's,.. OS

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Maya

@AyRa_Rocks

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#21

I was abt to sleep. just logged in to comment here. I'm not following the show but I got to know that asya hv been killed brutally. Ayaan is my most favourite character and so I'm glad that he didn't return and die. And ur writing. just made me so emotional. U hv penned down my ayaan's feelings so perfectly. And thank u so much for writing something on ayaan whom everyone seems to hv forgotten. U r a great writer and ur portrayal of his feelings is just mind blowing. Very well written. Loved it.

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Manahil

@...Mallu...

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+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#22

Wowww !!
Hayee ehow you describe itss Outstnding !! (: No words You descrbe Ayaan's Emotion is Perfect !! but am Crying :'(

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--Bubble007--

@--Bubble007--

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+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#23

res !!

hell tired right now will unres in the morning

unres !

This was soo muchh painful Maliha ,,

I wish they can extend some episodes and show Ayaan's reaction ,,

I miss him soo muchhh 😭

and now I miss their bromance too thats never gonna come back ,,

ughhh Ayaan was soo guilty !

I wishh they could add this scene

Loved it !

Edited by --Bubble007-- - 11 years ago

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Zaya_Kabhi

@Zaya_Kabhi

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#24

hayae
after so long i recieved 2 pms with same title, i thought you sent 2 times by mistake
and when opened it was a surprise Maliaa, 2 OS in a day?😲
but it was a good surprise definitely,😆

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Zaya_Kabhi

@Zaya_Kabhi

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#25

i loved reading it, although it was much sad. You are one of the best emotional writers i have read so far,
and yes, you penned it down perfectly, that how we distant ourself from our loved ones and how luck and people takes them away, and we sit helpless

ayaan's reaction on seeing asad lying their was 😭
the awesomest words:

And she removed that third sheet,.. it was none other than his own bhaijaan, his strength, his courage, his only friend, his only savior,

a glass splintered loudly in his brain,. Making him jostle few steps away,..
He froze there,. His mind needed so much lives to process that small info and what he could see,..
Tha man lying their was stained with coal,. Having no similarity with his handsome clean freak bhaijaan
Bhaijaan? That monosyllable took eternities to be mouthed

please write more. please update your story too!

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Alone111

@Alone111

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#26

It was heart wrenching prt..

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nahsjdnusksmsj

@nahsjdnusksmsj

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#27

Omg maliha
This really made me cry
U write so so so well
Awesome os
Keep up the good work

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anopama

@anopama

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#28

wow that was so so heartbreaking
beautifully written😭😭

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DancingBell

@DancingBell

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#29

Oh my. Malu...U made me cry...After the news of Asya's death there is always a pain in my heart when I think of them...I did'nt in my wild dreams expect a death like this of my fav Jodi...I miss my ASYA...Even though I lost interest and stopped watching the show long back,love for asya was always there...MISSING MY ASYA...Thank u so much for this awesome OS...