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Posted: 11 years ago
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WHY DID THEY NOT KISS :O


rest unress later after am done with the answer 😆


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Originally posted by: Ankita.M


ILY 🤣 Your comments make me hungry man.

They look so delicious na? 😳 😆

THANKS SO MUCH ANKIE 🤗 this comment means a lot. If this was milk choco I don't know what you'll think of this one. But the one after this? Bitter choco? 😆

Bitter choco is precious/expensive choco.. CHOCO 😆

He's already going overboard in this one. THOUGH I still think I've underplayed it 😆

Haiye mera overboard Asad 😳



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OH MY GOODINESS! OH MY GOODINESS! OH MY MY MY .. . ..

Speechless ...
Spell bound ...
struck dumb ...
dumbstruck .. ..
thunderstruck ...
amazed...
dazed...
fascinated...
enthralled..
entranced...
bewitched...
captivated...
mesmerized...



^ yes the update surpassed all of these.. 😲 😆

Oh my gosh oh my gosh oh my gosh!!!!

Asad clawed at the doctor and threatened him...

So very him.. when he is frantic.. 😃

The Car ride.. 😳 Asad checking on her.. 😳

Asad taking her to her room and taking care of her ===> I DEMAND FOR MORE 😆

Asad feeling her pain.. 😭 👏



"Shuru ho gaye daantna, chot lagi hai tab bhi nahi chodte," Zoya whispered softly. Asad strained his ears to hear her and chuckled," I am Asad Ahmed Khan madam, apni koi aadat nahi chodta, I follow a strict schedule.." he retorted.
"And scolding me is part of it?" Zoya asked softly as she breathed a little heavily. Asad noticed it and gently placed her on his chest again, stroking her hair," No, but taking care of you is," he said inadvertently.
Zoya's eyes flew open, jerking her from her dizzy state she turned to him hearing his words," What? Don't I take care of you already? Why is it so surprising?" Asad said feigning anger.
A smile crept on Zoya's face and she laughed slightly but painfully," That's it, no more laughing," Asad raised his voice.
"What am I even allowed to do then?" her voice croaked.
"You're not allowed to scare me again ever like that, you're not allowed to put me through what you did today, you're not allowed to make me feel lifeless, you're not allowed to walk alone when you have someone to walk along with you, you're not allowed to bear every pain, every fear by yourself when you have someone to share it with you. And you're not allowed to leave me and go away ..Do you get that Miss Zoya Farooqui?" Asad spoke hoarsely, holding her rooted by her gaze.


This part ==> Brilliantly Commendable!!! Comic relief nicely blend with a serious message that took the story as well as their relationship to another level 👏





"Tomorrow morning.." Asad said shortly.
"Oh and.." Asad glared at her to stop her train of questions, "EAT!" he glared
"I am eating only na why are you glaring at me?" Zoya frowned.


This part ==> so so so so so SWEET and Adorable at the same time 🤣

Loved the way Asad helped Zoya to divert her mind and successfully made her promise 😳 That was so very needed.. 👏

Loved the way your Asad is here.. So very intelligent and Sharp.. 😆

so sweet Zoya got overwhelmed with the love and care Asad showered. 😳 Especially the tear scene..




Zoya laughed and rolled her eyes," Mr Khan you're always treating me like I am Aahana, I am a brave girl.."
"I know that, I know you're brave, you probably don't even need me to come and save you Zoya, but sadly I am not so brave as you are.." Asad said explaining why he needed to take care of her and Zoya understood," No Mr Khan, I am not brave, I just trust you. You promised I'll have your back always, and when I know you're there, I have no reason to be scared," Zoya stated simply as if was something so obvious. And Asad stared back at her, amazed at her trust on him, shaken by the realisation that she depended on him so much. Was he even worthy of all that faith from her?



This part ===> only make me wonder, how beautiful it would be when Asad realizes the reason behind him saying such!!!

the scar scene... nothing apart from yours, could have had done justice to the scare scene of the show..







^ me after reading!!!


And me again cause the ❤️ mange more 😆



😆

Edited by MisHumptyDumpty - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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This was beautiful !!!!!!!!!!!!!!
And I have nothing else to say !!

Happy Birthday in advance !😉
Edited by treasure11 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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What an AWESOME update Ankita 👏👏

Azad took care of Zoya so nicely...and the time when Asad saw her wounds yet didn't react the way she expected was sooo nicely written!!! 👏

the emotions touched my heart perfectly!!!😛

you stopped at a very bad point 😆
but i think they are not going to kiss...

it will be to fast for them and Asad might go back to his shell...

i have full faith in your storytelling... 😛

Happy Birthday in advance buddy...May god bless you with good health, success, and lots of love..Take care...

Last but not the least, Update Soon... 😉😉
Edited by BeYourself - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Such an amazing and cute update... 👏 👏
Asad is so caring towards zoya... 😊 😊
He laid besides zoya...their is no akwardness left b/w them 😳 😳 ...
How asad strokes zoya every time to cam her down...
Asad made zoya promise that she will never go amywhere without hin...
Scar revealation was fabulous...
How asad kissed zoya on her scar.. ...
And the hug was so comforting and promising...
Their relationship has reached to a new level...
Hope asad realises that he love zoya so deeply...
Update soon..
Thanks for pm
Edited by aYASHIKA - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
wooaaah what a progress
awesome n
advance HBD

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Posted: 11 years ago
Awww that was so cute and caring
Happy Bday in advance 😉🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
beautiful update just wow
asad and zoya are too sweet
plz pm me for next part
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
BTW can we get annu's bday too ???😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey Ankita...Awesome update...indeed beautiful... 👏 ... ur every update makes me feel like this is the best chapter of this ff but then ur very nxt update proves me wrong... 😆 ...Amazing story ...i simply love it...The growth in Asya's relationship is awesome...hayee i love this two... 😳 😆 ...I guess they were just carried away with emotions ...once realized they ll again feel awkward specially Asad... ... lets see...today i m enjoying this chapter 😆

Aahana ... i missed her.. 😭 😆

update soon dear... 😃

Happy Birthday in advance... 😃 ... wish u happy n successful year ahead...God Bless...!!! 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Niya_789

Awww that was so cute and caring

Happy Bday in advance 😉🤗


Such a tiny comment? LOL kidding. Thanks. And about Aahana's birthday its not part of my story as such but I'll try if its possible.

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