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antiquegold

@antiquegold

Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

#491

Awww, he called her sweetheart! Very well written. One could imagine that manic frantic Asad, with fear clawing at his heart. But if she was trapped, someone must know that she is in India looking for her Dad. How did that someone come to know? Through Ayaan?

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Nitya Suresh

@TheAutumnFizz

Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

#492

Awesome!! But I hope Zoya is fine and that Asad finds out whoever is behind all this..

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rajsmi

@rajsmi

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#493

Great update...we got our Mangalpur back :-) as good as that!! Great writing...

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jas91

@jas91

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#494

Great part👏

loved Asad in this chapter😎

Zoya najma girly bonding😉

Asad fretting 2 know it

Zoya's mature advice👍🏼

Asad comparing Zoya wid his wife😛

& d whole orphanage scene was fantastically written👏

Asad's panicking😲

Zoya feeling helpless & scared

receptionist misleading both of them😡

mystery man on d call (mayb Raziya)🤔

loved d whole of it🥳

Asad calling Zoya sweetheart & meri Zoya❤️

he didn't even realized it that time but soon he will☺️

what will b d outcome then😲

thanx 4 PM🤗

& continue soon

& we know that whole Mangalpur fiasco was a superb part of d show but what u wrote in this part is also very good if not better than that😃

Although honestly when u mentioned that in precap in previous chapter i also thought that u were going 2 write something like that.😆 But trust me this is equally god & love reading it.👏

No complaints from my side👍🏼😳

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-Genelia-

@-Genelia-

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#495

OMGEEE!!! OMGEEE!!!

I love u ankie...

Aftr ur note i dint xpect d updt at ol... but u did thts reaaallyy reaally sweet of u...

Oh it ws 1 lovely updt again... N ma fvrt tooo

geeekss m soo happpyyy..

Thhhaaank u soo. Sooo much...

Awwiie he called her sweethrt...Haaye m mrjaawaaan chclt khaake...

Yess...yess..yess my mangalpur...muuaahh

Hysterical, maniac asad...

Aaah m olready on cloud nine!!!

Hope v vl gt d rest of d updt sooonishhh...

🤗

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DevikaRavish

@DevikaRavish

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#496

Ankitha... Thanks a lot for the update.. I am sorry for bugging you for the update.. I understand work and studies.. So it is fine update once in a week..😊

Coming to the update... aww.. such a lovely update it was... Asad called her sweetheart... OMG.. only if Zoya was in full sense and heard him say that... The fear of losing her and later how he got strength thinking about her... was amazing and beautifully written...

Gosh.. Looks like somebody in the orphanage is after Zoya... This is the second attempt to take away her life... Glad to see Asad always around her to help her...

The update was lovely as usual... Eager to read more...😊

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Alone111

@Alone111

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#497

Aahh
nd tht was fabulous one..
Loved zoya nd najma's bond..

O m g
who was tht..
Who doesn't wants to knw zoya pst..

Zoya continuously prayed for him to come and save her..
Nd he came nd did..

Loved it..

Whn he addressed her my zoya nd sweet heart..
I was like awww...

So attendant was the one who locked zoya in the dark room..
Bcz someone told her to do so..

Intrstng..
Mssd aanu in dis prt..
Continue soon