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Posted: 11 years ago




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Posted: 11 years ago
What a lovely story.An innocent and neive Zoya getting married toAAK. a long and gruelling road ahead for AAK to initiate guide and train Zoya in her married life .
Pl. continue soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hi...i am new here
just read ur story...😊
such a great story dear...
i luv it👍🏼

❤️asad❤️

my hero

angry young man

i luv him

zoya...aww...my baby

kitni masoom hai

dilshad...such a understanding mil

please continue soon...

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Posted: 11 years ago
chapter 11
After dinner all were sitting in the living .najma and zoya were watching serial and crying seein the bahu tortured making asad roll his eyes seeing their melodrama.dilshad was in the kitchen making coffee for asad ,while asad was working on his laptop.dilshad placed asad'a coffee on table makin him smile.
Asad:shukriya ammi.
Dilshad smiled sweetly.she saw her daughters watching some melodramatic serial and crying their hearts out.dilshad looked at asad and both started laughing.najma and zoya switched off the tv after finishing their serial,der eyes were still red due to crying .dey saw asad and dilshad laughing and pouted angrily.
Najma:bhaijaan,ammi, bechari sheela ko kaisa pati Mila hain usne aur uski maa ne kitna sataya sheela ko .bechari sheela uske pati ne dusri shadi Karli aur aap dono has rahe ho,soo insensitive.
Zoy:haan bechari sheela kitna ro rahi thi.said zoya sniffing.
Asad:tum dono aise bekaar ke shows dekh kar time waste kyun karte ho,iske badle kuch productive karo.jaise reading in depth about your subjects,ya phir cleaning ur room,ya computer ke languages sikho aisi kuch cheeze Jo tumhe future ke Kaam hain .aise melodramatic,non sensical shows dekhkar sirf dimag kharab hota hain.
Both najma and zoya made faces hearing asad's list of so called productive things.who can do such boring things I'm their leisure time .surely dey both can't do.but dey couldn't argue with asad also hence both kept quite,cursing asad'a boring personality.
Dilshad smiled listening to asad's lecture of how to use time effectively but somewhere she felt bad tat her asad could never had a good childhood.when children of his age played cricket in grounds he used to work at restaurant as a waiter to raise money for his school fees.he never burdened dilshad .he always understood her tensions,her pain,her loneliness,her efforts to give her children the best,she tried hard to make asad have a good childhood but couldn't heal asad's pain of his abbu's betrayal.he was very close to his abbu and his betrayal hurt him real deep,which made a naughty,smiling asad turn into this hard and arrogant,dilshad sighed thinking whether tat old asad wil ever return or not but seeing zoya she felt tat maybe she can get her asad back one day.
Dilshad:asad Monday se najma ki colg shuru ho rahi hain,tumne zoya ka admission kab karoge sirf 4 din bache hain??
Asad:Maine aaj subah hi colg authorities se baat ki ammi,inshaAllah by Friday zoya ka admission hojayega AAP chinta naa kare.
Zoya(extremely happy):KYAAA mai aage pad saktin hoon??
Dilshad(softly):.haan beta beshak tum pad sakti hoon .tumare nanabba bataya ki tum bahut bright student ho toh hum tumhara talent waste kyun kare?? Aur waise bhi mera maan na hain ki ladkiyon ko hamesha independent hona chahiye.
Zoya(running and hugging dilshad happily):thank you sooo much ammi mujhe laga mai ab nahi pad paungi lekin AAP toh best ho bilkul unn saas ke jaise nahi ho jiska description mujhe mere friends ne diya tha ,thank you soo Much .zoya happily kisses her cheeks.asad felt warm seeing her wife bond soo well with his mother.his one of the main reasons to not marry was this ,he dint want his mother to be left alone.wat if his wife dint approve his first priority being his mother but now he dint have tat fear as he knew zoya adored his mother just as much as he did.
Zoya and najma happily went to najma's room to show her Bhopal university's brochure.she was damn happy knowing now she will study with her bhabhi who had become her bff in just 2 days .
After najma and zoya went,dilshad told asad not to tell ayaan anything about mariam's fiasco.
Asad:lekin kyun ammi.
Dilshad:dekho asad mujhe ayaan se koi problem nai hain.mai jaanti hoon ki woh kabhi sapne mein bhi tumare baare mein galat nahi soch sakta lekin meri pareshaani razia se hain .tum jaantey ho ki woh hame beizzat karne ka koi mauka nahi chodti agar use para chala marium bhag gayi thi aur hum zoya ko nikah karkee aaye hain to woh zoya aur uski family ko bahut beizzat karegi.aur mai nahi chahti ki in pariwaron ke aapse dushmani ke beech razia zoya ko ghajeete.mai zoya ko in sabse door rakhna chahti hoon .
Asad:theek hain ammi mai ayaan se kuch nahi kahonga ,sabko yahi samajhne do ke mera nikah marium se hi huwa hain.
Dilshad smiled at him and retired for night.
Four days went in a blur after zoya's admission najma and zoya along with dilshad went on a shopping spree buying new dresses for college.they wer very happy.zoya smiled whole heartedly she was happy In her new world.she even called and thanked her nanabba saying she was very happy in her new family which made siddique Saab content.the principal was given strict orders by asad not to disclose her identity to anyone.dilshad also made zoya promise not to say about her marriage to anyone as nuzat and humeira wer in her class and she dint want razia to know about zoya anything.zoya though reluctant at first agreed to dilshad nevertheless.finally Monday came and the girls wer ready to start their colg.najma and zoya wer in 2 nd year while najma was doing bcom,zoya was doing interior designing.zoya surely missed her old friends and colg especially asiya but najma's boost up surely gave her much needed strength.her nervousness of studying first time in a co-ed was ebbed by najma saying tat colg was very strict with rules and Der was no chance of ragging or any teasing which relaxed zoya.
Both the girls looked beautiful najma in a navy blue dress and zoya in long peach color chudidar.both took dilshad'a blessings and left towards their colg.

At the colg premises
Zoya was baffled seein the huge structure infront of her .her colg was huge but this university was enirmous.all types cars and bikes wer seen.she saw girls wearing short clothes,jeans,chudidars,burqa's and boys wer wearing casual dresses.seein the boys for first time made her nervous but najma assured her taking her inside.najma made zoya see the colg like office,library ,canteen,classrooms ,washrooms.the bell went and najma left zoya telling her the direction of her class.while going towards her class she heard some noise coming from an empty room as though some one was in pain.she went towards the room and was shocked seein the sight before her.a guy was drinking a girls blood through her neck the sight made her puke but she had to do somethin to stop this.she directly went to vice princi Mrs kamini.
Zoya(huffing):.mam jaldi chaliye wahan ek ladka ,zabardasti ek ladki ka khoon pe raha hain.
Mrs kamini:KYAAA??yeh kya keh rahi ho .
Zoya:pulling her from her seat .AAP chalke khud dekijiye mam jaldi kijiye kahi us ladki ko kuch hona jaaye.
With tat both left towards the empty class room.
Unaware of all this commotion ,ayaan was happily romancing his new hot girlfriend Sheena,he was giving her love bites which according to zoya was drinking blood.dey both wer lost in their passion unaware of the tornado coming Der way.

Precap:ayaan-zoya first meet. 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
Interesting.
Hiding about asya's marriage. I dont like the idea. I hope it wont cause in problem between asya in future.
Pls continue.
Update soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Amazing part
i hope hiding about asya marriage dont create problem
plz pm me for next part
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
🤣 🤣 🤣
hahahahah..
ek larka larki ka khoon pee raha haii.. this made me ROFL!
zoya in a new college..
ayaan zoya first meet.. em excited abt that..
amazing update..
the storyy is veryyy interesting..
continue soon!



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Posted: 11 years ago
lovely update...
zoya n najma crying ovr a serial...
lovely bond between zoya n dilshad n asad is happy vd that...
colg... co-ed... panga to hona tha... but dracula wala ... ye nahi soncha tha...
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice.
loved it.
i dont like the idea of hiding asya's marriage.
hope there will be no pbm later for asya bcoz of this.
loved zoya-dilshad bond.
plz update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice update.. Scenes between Zoya and Dilshad were good. I hope Asad and Zoya does not have any mishaps coz of Ayan..
Thanks for the update..

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