AsYa Story-UNRECOGNIZED EMOTIONS-Thread 4- Parts 14-17 - Page 21

Originally posted by: asifiqbalsh

Nice update
Asad heared his parents convo & getting know that dilshad knew abt shireen
He was feeling guilty bc of him his mother want to stay with his father
Asya kissed which both want but didn't want to hurt other feelings
He thought he will tell everything to zoya
Continue soon
Congrats for new thread
Thanks for pm

Originally posted by: Komal_gill

hey ankie😃 wonderful update yar actually I read part 12 to part 14 in one go...so I simply loved it

thanks buddy..i am glad that you liked all the three parts 😃

u know what it feels really good to read more than 1 update at a time...I totally enjoyed all the 3 updates...there was something cute scene hidden in every update...for instance:-

asya's cute fight and their dance sequence on subhanallah in 12th

asya's huggie scene in 13th...😳 well I wonder if one gets such a cute tight hug after an emotional turmoil then I don't mind having it...heheheee😆

ha ha.. i can understand... 😆 as a reader, even i love reading multiple updates at a time 😆

ha ha.. i wish you get such cute hugs even without an emotional turmoil 😆

aww that peck in 14th made me blush...I love rains more than anything...

glad that you liked it 😳

even i love rains 😃

just a day before yesterday it was raining in my town and despite the stormy winds I was dancing on the terrace while playing songs on my phone...thank god it was night...otherwise I can't show my dancing skills to everybody in the colony😉

i loved doing that when i was in school 😆

well all n all I loved it...but like all the readers I too wanted a passionate kiss though the peck was sweet enough...anyhow I understand ur pov

thanks for understanding 😳

congrats for the new thread ankita

god bless u

update soon

thanks again for this lovely comment dear 😃

Originally posted by: Rosered1

Feeling bad for Asad😭

Hope he opens up to Zoya 😊

The rain sequence ❤️

Perfect scene Perfect couple Perfect time

Everything was perfect for a kiss but...😆

Still Love it ❤️

Originally posted by: jazsidhu

hey tis is amazing...

wonderfull...

asad knows the truth n hopefully he will tell zoya about it n share his feeling with her...

beautifully written...

luv it...

n congrats on the new thread...

eagerly waiting for the next part...

thx fr the pm n do continue soon n do pm me...

Originally posted by: awesome

Awesome update

Originally posted by: Perfectionist2

WOOHOO!

Thread Four!

Congratulations My Bong Sister.

You deserve this and many more.😃

Coming to the Chapter-

Kiss Kiss Kiss Kiss!

Damn that Kiss! LOVED IT!😆

Gal mein hai tho kya hua,

God Rashid and Dilshad!!!😡 Why is Asad feeling responsible!

Is he mad. Ok so we still have the friendship going.

When will it move to another level.

Please Give some sense to Asad. Itni Achio Ladki samne hai- why doesn't he just tell her everything then Zoya can hug him and let him cry.

Once they cried they ccan say I love you, I can't live without you,

Let kiss properly this time🤣

Sorry I got carried away by the kiss.

I have always liked Zoya and her diary! Asad in Dimples! Yes Zoya you called him Baby, Now call him Janu.

LOved the update! Please continue soon dear.

I will be waiting.

Love

Juliet.

Originally posted by: jeevika1234

Are yaar come on

Update soon

Originally posted by: sweetluck

awesome..👏
thanks 😃

ur starting note made me..☺️
the starting note just did its job 😉

when d rain scene started i was so excited n den damn ...peck on cheeks ...bas...😆
ha ha 😆😆


but yes it was sweet n romantic...i love rains..😳😆

glad that you found it sweet 😳
i love rains too 😳

loved zoya's diary...she called him "baby".....dis girl is like "phela nasha phela khumaar.."😳😆..n asad.." i hate u like love u"..why he says that he will be her weakness n all..

true... pehla nasha is the perfect song for her 😛
yeah!! but asad doesn't hate her 😲😲

hope dey will realize der unrecognized love very soon...n we ll get a confession n real kiss..😳😆😆
you will surely get a real kiss someday 😉😉😆

update soon...😃
thanks for pm..😃

my exams are gong to finish on this saturday.. so update comes after that 😛

Originally posted by: sweety003

🥳Congratulations for new thread 🥳

Fabulous update Ankita👏👏👏

"I am so sorry Zoya... so so sorry... What have I done? Please forgive me...I am sorry Zoya..."

After reading this you know what came to my mind😆...I thought he kissed her so apologizing after he came to his senses🤣 *stupid brain *

Zoya being mischief get drenched in rain and asad admiring her beauty Ahhw😳...and even though he hate rains still he joined her how adorable ...actually I loved whole part beautifully penned👍🏼

Peck on her cheek was not that bad😆 it was romantic and cute 😳 and I agree kiss on the lips would not suits the way they are😉

Oohw after all this he just said you are b'ful zoya😲...how can we expect confession by him anytime soon🤔😆

And tell me does he going to read her DIARY sooner or later????😕

I don't know about others but I'm not gonna kill you anytime soon 🤣 boz I want asya real kiss *ohhw i forgot you're smart i want KISS ON LIPS *😳after that I'll think about it🤔😆

Now update soon ...SOOON😳😡

Love you...Anu❤️😉