The Colour of Love II: #2 Chapter 16 Pg 111

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Asif

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Posted: 11 years ago

#131

Awesome update
Asad read all enteries in diary
Zoya started liking asad also
Continue soon
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Alone111

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Posted: 11 years ago

#132

It was beautifull saima..
So beautifully written..
Eagerly waiting for nxt prt.
Continue soon..

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aseela sha

@aseelashah

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Posted: 11 years ago

#133

Saima its superb update.

ANd i like it

Now Zoya's diary secrets are over

I like this lines

I saw two of his paintings resting by his stool, I had fallen in love...I don't know what love is but if it what I feel like when I see his paintings then it must be, they evoke emotions within me that I never knew existed. For him and the world what he put on his canvas was just paint colours that build up a picture for me every colour had become The Colour of Love.

Pls update soon

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Avie

@Avie

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Posted: 11 years ago

#134

Saima, that was superbly written..🤗

Poor Zoya! She has to lead such a lonely and miserable life..🥺

But I love reading her entries..! You write them so well..FAB!❤️

I just hope Asad soon finds her!😃

Keep going with the great work..😳

Mwah.❤️

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rajnid68

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Posted: 11 years ago

#135

awesome update..

lots of pain...

looking forward to ur next ...thanks for the pm..

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Nim

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Posted: 11 years ago

#136

Hey,

You were being honest & so am I. I really didn't get what part in the update you thought was not up to the mark? According to me it was Beautiful & emotional.

I loved how Zoe expressed all her feelings in the diary. And how she wrote down her emotions when ever she encountered Asad. She did feel something for him that she felt compelled to leave behind her diary, her only friend, for him to read & know of her life. She thought of it to be a hope, or him to be a hope for her, to save her from the clutches of evil.

What really intrigues me are those torn pages. Why did she tear those pages. What was so secret in them that Asad couldn't read it. Why would she try & hide part of herself from him? Oh how I wish I could get to those pages & find out. I loved it though!

So anxious to know how Asad tries to find her or what he does after this diary if finished.

Please continue super soon.

Lovee...

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farz_parachute

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Posted: 11 years ago

#137

Nope. Am not at all being biased, Sis!

I could somewhat relate to this chapter. Coz you see I'm Asad. And Zoya is talking about me, whom she calls a beautiful stranger. I feel like it really is.

The stranger is beautiful, his art, his thoughts.

And to know her side of the same incident...that's simply thoughtful and laced with emotional...how could I not love this part?

Sis. I'm not at all being bias. Au contraire, I feel like I don't give you enough credit. For something as brilliant and beautiful and heartfelt!

Mwah Sis.

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Gulaabo

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Posted: 11 years ago

#138

so this is zoya's whole story...not only asad but zoya also synchronized with him while he painted n she played piano!!
now i am eager to read how asad will find her...
continue soon